very nice! gr8 part....
i luved it.....reading dis ff of urs after so long...was a treat indeed!
very well written!!
keep it up..!
ur a fabulous writer pri(cn i call u dat??)
n i luv d way u write....
u have obviously won the best comedian award, from my side....d way u incorporate comedy in ur ff is excellent and so very natural even!
u have a gr8 talent...so make most of it...!
i would not be surprised to have u as a writer for a comedy film...seriosuly!!
d song was lovely.....i just luv it so very much!!
and so this new twist in the story haan??
the gals are trying to act as their luv interest.....and armaan-rahul are already in luv wid dem.....!!
kahiin issi nataak mein pyaar na ho jaaye!! lol...
one doubt...Riddhima along wid some guy(it should be armaan) had to go to sonu's school na?? about the shart and all thing....did u get it?? so i wanted to ask, ki woh part kab aayega!!
and thank god no suspense at d end...!!
i cn't help it, you know...har ff mein itna zyada suspense hai!! lol...
and AR going for a date....gr8!!
and.....and....atul's tips were too gud!!
i know, i know a very long comment!
but i couldn't stop my fingers....dey were just typing and typing!! lol..
thnx 4 d pm....
update soon!!
gud to know dat ur feeling better now....!!
and....plzz update captivity too yaar...have u forgotten about ur second ff??
byee
-love sanjana
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