AR FF: I'LL NEVER LEAVE YOU part 15 : pg 45

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maryam

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Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#331

grt part really good plsss continue sooon

tnx for the pm

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MysticalRealm

@MysticalRealm

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Posted: 16 years ago

#332

Hi Priyanka this part was fabulous I loved how Atul gave the lecture it was great!

Please continue soon and add more AR scences in the next part!!

Love,

Jinil!

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teenorchid

@teenorchid

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#333

awww...ridhima b na....

ammy will b heart broken....

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ridzi830

@ridzi830

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#334

hey dear
nice part.thanks 4 the pm..continue soon...

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Surbhi_rox

@Surbhi_rox

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#335

very nice!

gr8 part....

i luved it.....reading dis ff of urs after so long...was a treat indeed!

very well written!!

keep it up..!

ur a fabulous writer pri(cn i call u dat??)

n i luv d way u write....

u have obviously won the best comedian award, from my side....d way u incorporate comedy in ur ff is excellent and so very natural even!

u have a gr8 talent...so make most of it...!

i would not be surprised to have u as a writer for a comedy film...seriosuly!!

d song was lovely.....i just luv it so very much!!

and so this new twist in the story haan??

the gals are trying to act as their luv interest.....and armaan-rahul are already in luv wid dem.....!!

kahiin issi nataak mein pyaar na ho jaaye!! lol...

one doubt...Riddhima along wid some guy(it should be armaan) had to go to sonu's school na?? about the shart and all thing....did u get it?? so i wanted to ask, ki woh part kab aayega!!

and thank god no suspense at d end...!!

i cn't help it, you know...har ff mein itna zyada suspense hai!! lol...

and AR going for a date....gr8!!
and.....and....atul's tips were too gud!!

i know, i know a very long comment!

but i couldn't stop my fingers....dey were just typing and typing!! lol..

thnx 4 d pm....

update soon!!

gud to know dat ur feeling better now....!!

and....plzz update captivity too yaar...have u forgotten about ur second ff??

byee

-love sanjana

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aarora

@aarora

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#336

hey amazing update honey..luvd it..continue soon..
thanx fr PM...
luv ya..

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Caramel_21

@Caramel_21

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Posted: 16 years ago

#337

hey priyanka...awesome update...i know i always say this but your comic timings are soo good...you always crack me up...and this part...atul as love guru...imagining him as love guru itself is very hilarious....and now riddhima and muskaan are playing games with armaan and rahul...the best part was the rahul and muskaan convo...rahul wanted muskaan to ask him out ..that was quite funny...
in all an awesome update....

continue soon & thanks for pm...

Caramel...