Hello everyone I am priyanka. Just joined the forum. Well one day during surfing I just caught up with the different fan fiction and I must say hats off to u all for writing such amazing fan fictions.
Even I came up with an idea so I thought of writing it down
Well it is based on the current talk of the forum couple yours favourite and mine too ARMAAN AND RIDDHIMA.
The introduction is given below:
Note:- since it is my first time of writing a ff. please bear with me.
Armaan malik: Same as the one in dmg. Smart , handsome,big flirt but knows his limits. He is the captain of the basketball and football team of his college. He is currently in the 4 year of his mbbs.
Riddhima gupta: sweet , innocent, talkative,always ready to help others.her best friend is muskaan.
Muskaan and riddhima know each other from school days. Muskaan and riddhima knew everything about each other. Riddhima is just joining the sanjivini medical college.
Rahul grewal: he is armaan best friend. Always supports him. Not a flirt, just like the one in the serial.
He is also in the fourth year of his mbbs
Muskaan chadha: she is sweet but a bit shy. But those who know her for them she is the same as the one in the serial.She is also joining sanjiveeni medical college. Along with riddhima.
Shashank Malik: He is the father of armaan malik. He is the head of the sanjivini hospital.his personality is the same as in dmg.
Padma Malik: She is armaan's mother. She is a professor in the sanjiveeni medical college.
Samrat gupta: he is riddhima's brother. He is 8 year old.
Tamaira gupta: she is riddhima's sister. She is 1 year old.
Randhir gupta: he is riddhima father. He is a businessman. For him money comes first and everything later. Never cared about his children. He believes money is everything.
Ritu gupta: She is riddhima step mother. Samrat and tamaira are her children. She married randhir just for his money. She is an irresponsible mother. Never cared about them. Acrually she was his secretary, but after the death of riddhima mother randhir married her so that she can take care of riddhima. But she had some other plans in her mind.
The story starts with riddhima and muskaan first day at the college. It basically revolves around these fours. What happens when these four come in each other life and the changes that takes place in their life.
Well this is the introduction part. I will continue the story depending on your respone. Otherwise I will close it.
Part 1
It's 6 in the morning . A boy is sleeping very peacefully in his room. Some one enters in his room
very quietly and whispers in his ear "Jaago Sammy Pyare Jaago".
Sam: Di , bas 5 minutes . Please
Ridz: Sammy get up . U R already late.
Sam: Di let me sleep na. aaj Sunday hai.
Ridz: di ko ullu banata hai. Main 3 tak count karungi. Get up nahin to u'll have to pay the price.
She starts counting 1'.2'.3. but Sammy doesn't get up.
Ridz(thinking: ye aise nahin manega)
With this she starts singing the song "Jaago Sammy pyare Jaago" more loudly
Sam gets up from the bed with a jerk.
Sam: (yells)Di'''''''I won,t leave you
And with this he starts running behind her with a pillow. After few minutes when sam gets tired he falls on the bed.ridzi comes and sit besides her.
Sam: Di aapko aur koi tarika nahin aata mujhe uthane ka. I mean Agli bar se mera upar chilled water dal dena or do anything you want to do ,but don't sing. Aapka gaana sun ke to behra aadmi(deaf person) bhi bhag jayega.
Ridz(very sweetly):to tum ek bar mein kyun nahin uthte ho. Waise bhi mein bahut surila gaati hu.tum yeh isliye bolta ho because u r jealous of my voice.
With this they both starts laughing.
Ridz: Sammy you go and get ready for school .mein tammy ko dekh ke aati hoon.
Ridz goes to tammy room and sees that tammy is already awake and smiles when she sees ridz.
Ridz: how r u my baby? Aaj aap badi jaldi uth gaye . bhook lagi hai . kitchen mein chalte hain. Bhaiya ke liye breakfast banana hai. Aaj to di ka bhi pehla din hai college mein hai. Di ko bhi ready hona hai na. tammy smiles listening to all this as if she is understanding everything.ridz take tammy in her arms and goes in the kitchen.
After sometimes sam comes down with his school bag.
Sam: Di tie aur shoe
Ridz(after giving him the breakfast,she is tieing his shoe lace and tie): bag pack kar liya hai.
Sam:yes Di
Ridz then opens his bag to check whether everything is in his bag or not
Sam: Di
Ridz: what? Ok fine I wont check your bag. Yeh apna tiffin bag mein dal lo and finish your breakfast quickly. Its already late.
Sam finishes his breakfast. Kisses them and goes for school
Ridz:tammy ab aap apne room mein khelna. Di tyar hona jaa rahi hai. Thik hai.she kisses her on the forehead and went to her room.
Ridz : muskaan ko call karti hoon . woh to waise bhi so rahi hogi abhi tak. Its already 7 a.m.
Scene changes
A girl is sleeping with her legs on the pillow and her back facin upwards. She is sleeping at the corner of the bed.
Her phone rings. She picks her phone and without seeing the number she says
girl(in a dreamy voice): hello Muskaan here.
Other Person(in a manly voice): Main Shah Rukh Khan Bol Rahi hu I mean Bol Raha hu.
Muskaan: Okay(in a dreamy voice). ''''''(suddenly jerks up)Kaun?
Since muskaan was at the corner she turns and fall on the ground
Muskaan: ouch'..
Then she keeps the phone on her ear and hears Ridzi giggling.
Muskaan: Kya yaar aise daraya mat kar.Pata hai mein bed se neeche gir gayi hoon aur tujhe hasi aa rahi hai.
Ridz: Sorry yaar . achcha yeh sab chod ye bata gaana kaun sa tha.
Muskaan: yaar aaj to Dard-e-Disco tha.woh mujhe kiss karne hi wala tha ki tabhi tera phone aa gaya
They both start laughing. Actually Muskaan is a big SRK fan and always dreams about him. She wants her prince charming to be just like him. She has her room full of SRK posters. She has watched his each and every movie first day first show.
Ridz: I called you to say that I'll come and pick u up.okay.
Muskaan: okay.
Ridzi: I'll come in a hour .bye
Muskaan: bye
Ridzi dresses up and is wearing a long kurta with jeans. She ties her hair in a ponytail ,wears her spects and goes down in the hall.
The servants have arrived and ridz tell one servant that from now on she'll be coming in the evening so
The servant should take care of tammy and sam till evening.when she was in school she used to take care of tammy after coming from the school.but now she'll be coming till evening that's why. And she leaves for muskaan house.she reaches her house and Muskaan mother greets her.
MM=Muskaan mom
Ridz: good morning aunty.
MM:good morning beta. All set for you first day
Ridz: ji aunty. Aunty muskaan ready ho gayi hai ki nahin.
MM: beta mein abhi bulati hoon. Muskaan come fast beta . ridzi aa gayi hai.
Muskaan: coming mom.
MM: ridzi beta have some food.
Ridzi: thanks aunty but I have already done my breakfast.
Just then muski comes down from her room running.
Muskaan: chal riidhima it's already late yaar.
MM: par beta breakfast to kha lo.
Muskaan: Ma pack kar do mein raaste mein kha lungi.
MM packs the food and muskaan kisses her mom and they both go for the college. In the car
Muski: yaar mujhe to bahut darr lag raha hai. I mean maine suna hai ki medical college mein bahut buri tarike se late hai. Ragging ke naam se hi mujhe to SRK ki Kuch Kuch hota hai yaad aana lagta hai.
Ridz: Kya'''.yaha pa bhi SRK . tu bhi na muski. Par seriously yaar darr to mujhe bhi lag raha hai. Chal jo hoga waha par dekh lenge.
They both reach the Sanjeevani Medical College. After parking the car they are standing outside the college and looks at the boardon which the name of the college is written.
Ridz(thinking):oh god please bacha lena.
Muski(thinking):SRK mere saath dena please.
With these they both enter the college and without being caught reaches their classroom.
There they meets other freshers and attends their lectures. Now its lunchtime and they both goes out of the classroom.they know that the seniors first comes in the classroom only and so they goes out in order to avoid being ragged. They start looking for any place to hide themselves in order to not get caught when suddenly they just bumped into someone.
Precap: who is this someone? Can they save themselves from being ragged.
To know watch this space.
comments and criticism are welcomed.
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