BenJan (and Sam)-One Shot

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shama

@Angry_Bird

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

hey it was awesome yaar👏👏.....i was just lost in d part....plzzz do contnue.....😊😊

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*pyar*

@*pyar*

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

yar excellent writting

what a scene

plese continue soon

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

lovely scene mimi !!!! awwwwww.....its soooo cute!!! wud luv to c this scene in da show!!!! do make more of one shots!!! and if its ur first one.....simply amazing!!!

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rohini

@patroclus

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Luvvvv it mimi!!! simply luvv it!! keep writing!!

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mimi0295

@mimi0295

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+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

@ Sarah- lol awee, well, I'll defo PM it to her then =)

@Kinnari- Thank you babes

@shama420 - Thanks hun! This isn't an FF though, so I'm not continuing =P

@*pyar* - Thanks so much hun!

@Pragya- Thank you!

@kayamath_fan2 - Hey babes, yupp! LOL it's my first one shot, I can't believe I didn't attempt one before. Hahah, there'll be more to come. Most likely every other week. =) Depends on my dreams/ideas

@Rohini- Thank you so much hun!

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

nice one yaar i hope it comes true.glad anyone else also think like me.
do continue dear
why don't u write it in a mini fi.
bye sumi

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268143

@268143

Master

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

da one shot was gr8 ....... i really liked it 😊

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Lipsa

@-Lipsa-

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#38

😳😳Hi mimi😊
Fabulous update👏.I so so so hate that sheena.😡putting touches on her makeup bah.Sammy had to do this to gunjan.😭 😭Benji's frndship always makes me go awwwww.
😳I loved this line the most
"And so are you Gunjan. Sheena may be the most happening girl in Excel, she may turn all the heads, but you're the girl who brings out the real Samrat. You're the girl who makes him happy. Samrat may not know this yet, but he loves you too.😳
Superb,mindblowing,amazing,heart-touchingupdate dearie😃.I have no words to express myself now.
Just describing Gunjan's feelings was marvellous👏 n her outburst seemed to make the scene just perfect.😍You have a wonderful way of writing.👍🏼Could u pm me the next time you write os or an ff..
Luv
Lipsa

Edited by Lipsa_mjht - 16 years ago

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