Originally posted by: hinanaziri
Hey Jia
Me here as promised
I've got to the 7th part in detail
Man,Shashank is so cunning
I know the story has moved on,
but since i'm running behind,
i'll be commenting on the parts i've so far read
Ridz,sounds like a beautiful girl,i love the way u show her emotions so clear
Armaan,the dude senior doctor,so glad to read a different kind of personality attached to the name Armaan,unusual but sweet in his own little ways
Atul and Anjie,feel sorry for them ,but i liked the variation in their story,not the usual happlily married types
Rahul and Muskaan,i like them the most i think
love the way you express the grey shades Jia
teh way of writing is so captivating
u take it slow,but with all the twists,
dunno how u do that
I like the pace of the story
you are an awesome writer
and this ff is beautiful
Thanks
See u soon after i get through another chunk of updates
may be will be done by tonite 😉
Love u
personally replied 😉 thankyou so very very much once again yaar. Hinna ur really making my day. Just reading ur comment once again makes me a smile. Love u tons. Hope u enjoy the remaining too.😳
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