'Sweet Revenge' NEW FF AR PART 19 13/08/09 PG 36

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INDEX

Intro and Ch 1 : Page 1
Ch 2: Page 2
Ch 3: Page 3
Ch 4: Page 4
Ch 5: Page 6
Ch 6: Page 7
Ch 7: Page 9
Ch 8: Page 10
Ch 9: Page 12
Ch 10: Page 15
Ch 11: Page 17
Ch 12: Page 19
Ch 13: Page 21
Ch 14: Page 23
Ch 15: Page 25
Ch 16: Page 29
Ch 17: Page 31
Ch 18: Page 35
Ch 19: Page 36

Hello everybody, I have been just an ardent reader of the FF forum and read many of your FF and admired all your talent. Just thought maybe I shall try writing a fiction too and this is my first one. Hope you guys like it if so I shall continue. Here is the introduction and Chapter 1.

INTRODUCTION
Armaan Maalik
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He was the CEO of a UK based global financial company and super rich and super looking dude. He drives the latest sports cars, lives in a mansions, hops between continents and dates supermodels. But he has never been able to fall in love after being cheated by the slut Riddhima. He never forgave and thinks he needs to take revenge on her and only then his obsession with her will end and he can move on...

Riddhima Gupta
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She is a doctor ob-gyn at Sanjeevani. She is adopted and lives with her father Dr. Shashank Gupta. Her mom Smriti is no more. She was loved by her adopted mom Smriti but Shashank prefers to love only her sister Anjali. He thinks Smriti should have survived and Riddhima should have died! Riddhima's life is Angie and Shashank and she would do anything to get their love. She still loves Ammy but she had to let him go...they were not meant to be...!

Rahul Garewal
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Rahul is Riddhima's best friend. They went to university together. He is a fellow doctor at Sanjeevani and works in the pediatrics dep. He is the only one who knows all about Riddhima and has stood and supported her through all her turmoils. He has lately fallen in love with Muski a simple girl studying media communications in Mumbai.

Muski
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She is a hep, beautiful babe but her heart beats only for the doc Rahul. She is super rich but doesn't let any of her friends in Mumbai know that. She lives a simple college girl life. She loves her family who are abroad. Her brother alone keeps hopping on and off Mumbai and takes care of her.

Dr. Shashank Gupta
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He is the head of Sanjeevani. He has 2 daughters and his wife is dead. He loves Angie and has completely spoiled her at Riddhima's expense. He has never forgotten or gotten over his wife's death and Angie's problems and tantrums have led him to have deeper secrets.

Dr. Anjali Gupta
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She is the elder daughter of Shashank and Smriti Gupta. She had hated Riddhima since a child as she had taken away her mother's love for her. Her mother had doted on Riddhima and made her feel special and Angie had felt left out. Her dad had taken her side. Her mom had died and Riddhima was left alone. Angie had not cared she blamed Riddhima for her mom's death and ensured Riddhima was never got any happiness in her life. She is a doc in chicago presently. The other characters I shall introduce as and when they come in.

Atul Joshi
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Armaan's champ and buddy. They are friends since childhood. He presently works for Armaan's Mumbai branch. He heads it when Armaan is not around. They share everything. He is an orphan and Armaan's parents are like his own.
Nikki
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Armaan's childhood friend. She is Armaan's PA and works with Atul in Mumbai office. She knows everything about Armaan. Her parents are divorced.
Dr. Shubhankar and Dr. Keerti
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They are married and work in Sanjeevani. Dr. S is the best caridologist in the country and Dr. Keerti is a terror and an ob-gyn. She has a soft corner for Riddhima. They both respect Dr. Shashank a lot.

Padma Tulsar
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Friend of Armaan's mom and settled in London since 25 years. She is a successful doctor an ob-gyn. She has properties in India as well.

Anay & Ananya Maalik
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Armaan's parents. Simple and traditional despite having all the wealth. Love their kids and are very caring parents.

CHAPTER 1
There she entered and every eye in the restaurant turned to the doorway to look at this beautiful, sexy, well dressed girl. The men gave lustful glances at her and the women gave her envious looks. She was hardly aware of all the glances coming her way. With a look of slight insecurity and anxiety she searched the restaurant for someone. Time stood still Armaan looked at her for the first time in 5 years, 5 months, 6 minutes and 2 secs. He had seen her photographs before coming here but no photograph could do justice to her beauty. She was dressed in a pale white dress quite modest though! The white suggested a virginal purity but she was the antithesis of purity and only he knew that!

Gosh she was still beautiful or more so now age had added a more feminine depth to her beauty. She had been a girl when he had last met her now she was a beautiful woman. She must be nearer to 24 now and yet she had the innocence of a baby still. How she managed it was beyond Armaan!

But he know she was very devious the innocence was just a farce. He would never forget the way she had treatment him 5 years ago the cheap slut. And now, Armaan had her just where he wanted and it was time to have his revenge. Armaan Maalik never forgot nor forgave!

She had already set up a meeting with him for the following week and he knew that she did not expect to see him. He would be prepared for her and the element of surprise and shock would make her bend to his will and Armaan would make sure this time he ended up the victorious one and she was the one left licking wounds.

She suddenly smiled at someone in the restaurant and Armaan felt his guts tighten and felt angry at himself for reacting to her this way after all this time and after all that she had done to him. He turned to look at who the foolish person was to fall in for the smile this time around!

There was a man seated in the outside lounge with his back towards Armaan. Of course, it had to be a man knowing her! The man waved at her. She walked towards his table with a bigger smile and sat down in front of him facing Armaan directly. Armaan was in the inner lounge which was reserved only for exclusive people mostly the top elite who visited the famous restaurant. Armaan knew this and that is why he had come over to catch a glimpse of her in private without her knowing it!

She chatted with her companion for sometime and then took the menu from the waiter and ordered. Armaan kept staring at her from inside the lounge noting her every delicate, graceful moment. Suddenly she looked directly into his eyes through the red glass door of the lounge.

Armaan was sure she could not see him but only he could, but their eyes met and for what seemed an eternity neither moved. Her companion interrupted their eye lock and said something to her but time was still for her and then she upon further prompting from her companion she gave a weak smile and started to have the drink which had been served in between. There it was the vulnerable look, she looked like a lost foal in the midst of a dark dangerous jungle when she had the look.

Armaan felt his lungs out of breath she still had that effect on him after so many years. Damn!!! He was angry at himself. He should have let someone else handle this entire thing for him he was getting too involved. Maybe it had not been a good idea? But he was Armaan and he never ran away from anything. No matter how hard it was and no matter how bad the consequences were.

He turned away from her and looked at his date who was gorgeous, beautiful and as sexy as they come. But he felt nothing for her, or any of the other gorgeous models whom he had dated since long. It had been Riddhima all along. No one had even come a close second to stir feelings in him the way she had. The feelings had been stirred today again. Oh, he couldn't wait for their meeting next week. Revenge was after all sweet! He wanted a closure to these feelings and his obsession with her and his need of searching for Riddhima in every women he met and move on!!! He signalled to the waiter to bring his check he had not come for dinner just to look at her, his date was over, he knew that now!

It was break up time from his Date No... god knows how many had passed by. He did break up with great finesse some flowers, some expensive gifts later sent on always did the trick. All girls knew the score right from day one none of his girlfriends stayed long it was just a matter of time before they were sent packing. They were happy with the gifts and the expensive places he took them to while it lasted and moved on to the next big wig.

His date was pissed off, but knew better than to say anything to Armaan Maalik and moved on to his waiting limousine.

PROMO OF CHAPTER 2 Riddhima felt flustered in five years. She had had the strange feeling that someone was staring at her and after sometime felt the same prick! It was him who was looking at her from the red lounge she always felt that special feeling the same goose bumps which erupted on her skin whenever Ammy was looking at her!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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waoh dear🤗 its really a superb one⭐️ interesting😊 rocking😍plz continue it soon😛😉


From Armaan "I never thought I would love someone like you,
Never in my dreams that I would meet you,
But then, as I travel in my life's journey,
You walk into my life and I fall for you.

I never know how is it to be in love,
Until that very special moment,
You brought wonderful things in my life,
You opened my eyes to see the beauty of love.
You are the one who taught me how to love sincerely,
You showed me the way to your heart,
You cared for me, and I really appreciate it,
You showed me how to love unselfishly." To Ridhima

With Luv: ~
Nidha🤗
Edited by nidha1983 - 16 years ago
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31 views and no feedback...oops ...i didnt know it was that bad...? Guys please tell me if it was ok or not ..if it was not good I shall stop continuing this FF....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome intro👏
i really want to know why AR had to split and why armaan
wants revenge
plz do cont. this ff!
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hey!!!!!!😊

nice part n ff......
different concept.......
plz continue.....
n do pm me......
with luv!!!!!!!!!!😊
Edited by karan''''s archita - 16 years ago
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heyyy dear,
nice concept
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CHAPTER 2

Riddhima felt flustered in five years. She had had the strange feeling that someone was staring at her and after sometime felt the same prick! It was him who was looking at her from the red lounge she always felt that special feeling the same goose bumps which erupted on her skin whenever Ammy was looking at her! Her body seemed to react to him much before her mind did! Silly!! she admonished herself. You know he is abroad maybe married or dating some lucky girl not here back in India. He had left India for good.

But the feeling after so long had scared her to the pits. She had felt like this the initial six months after he had left expecting him to appear out of nowhere and demand and explanation from her for treating the way she had done! She knew she would never have been able to tell him anything or give any reasons! If not for Rahul her best friend she would have never gotten out of the mess she had been in.

She had stopped eating, sleeping she had been torn apart by her love for Ammy. She had confessed only to Rahul after about three months of her break up and joining her new medical university. Rahul was a fellow student and knew she was in trouble. With gentle friendship and prompting she had finally confessed everything to him and sobbed her heart out as she thought she needed to tell someone how she felt or might end up crazy.

Rahul had not agreed with what she did but understood her and did not judge her and she knew his daily prayer included that she get back with Ammy, as if that was possible! But from then on a deep bond and friendship had evolved between them and till this date she shared everything with him and vice versa.

But she knew that she had lost her one chance of love forever, and she could not even regret it because some things were more important that love like loyalty! There had been no choice. Now her life was just her work. She was a ob-gyn and loved her job. Rahul was a fellow doc too though he had specialized in paediatrics. She worked for the same hospital her dad had built and loved it here.

But lately there were problems because her dad had had an heart attack. His second attack! She didn't want to think about his first attack which had been 5 years ago. Rahul had dragged her out today and asked her to stop living like a zombie and brought her out for dinner. All work and no play makes Riddhima a dull girl is what he had told to convince her!

She had been at home and work taking care of her dad non-stop for the last two months and had really needed a break from it all. He was her true friend what she would do without him she wondered at times.

Ridzie! I think you need to call Angie up and take some help girl. You can't just go on like this you would just collapse. He's her dad too why can't she take care of him for a change? You are a ob-gyn and babies do take their moments to come in this world exactly at the moment when you are resting or sleeping and taking care of your dad as well is adding to it. Listen to me and give her a call and be assertive that she needs to face her responsibilities!!

She has been your dad's darling supergirl for so long and it is time for payback! Although if anyone is a super girl it is you! But I am sure your dad has eye problems along with his heart problems so he obviously can't see this! I think you need to go on a holiday and take a long overdue break you have been with your sick dad and facing the moments alone for too long kiddo. I am getting worried about you these days.

Rahul! You know about Angie right she was always career oriented and family responsibilities are just beyond her it doesn't make sense to make her do something she would not do willingly. It would make things worse for dad and for her also. I am happy to take care of dad and I love my work I don't see a problem here.

Angie her sister had been for a week with them when her dad had the second attack and was in hospital. She left after that back to the US. She worked for a top hospital in Chicago and was an anaesthesiologist though she claimed to her friends here in India that she was a neuro surgeon! She had wanted to be one but had not enough grades so she had opted for the former. She felt ashamed to let her friends here in India know about it! Ridzie and her dad alone knew about it and kept the pretence to avoid tantrums from her the little time she was here with them!

Rahul also knew about it as Ridzie knew he would never break her confidence. He was the only one who knew everything that had happened in her life. That is why her friendship with him was so strong.

Riddhima thought about her dad and felt a wave of sadness inside her. He had wanted Angie to join Sanjeevani especially after the second attack but Angie had refused. She said her career was important and being in a small time hospital in India didn't make sense to her. She then added that seeing Riddhima would just make her more angry about what she had lost all those years ago and she would never come back to India because of her. Her dad had felt terrible and both he and Riddhima knew it was because everyone would get to know that she was not a neuro surgeon and that is why she was refusing to come back. Moreover, she was not a giver in any relationship she was the taker and little bit like a spoiled brat.

Rahul, it's not like that she is busy and she works abroad she can't just leave everything and come here. And you know seeing me just brings up old wounds so she is just being nice by keeping a distance that's all.

Riddhima don't lie to me I am not your dad! That bitch just wants to party and work abroad, she doesn't want to be stuck with an old man and has dumped him on you. She is just making the old wounds as an excuse so her dad doesn't think she is a selfish bitch too. Don't be so nice Riddhima she has wrecked your life many times! I hate to see you give her the power to do it again and again!

I can't help it Rahul she is my sister and I don't know about her but I love her a lot and owe a lot to her as you know and I can't be mean to her ever!

Rahul gave up! That was how Riddhima was! She never hurt anyone and went beyond boundaries to help everyone. But the sad irony in her life was she hurt the person she loved the most after her mother! Even till this day she got this lost look about her at times. He knew she still thought about her lover, missed him and wondered about how he was! He only prayed that after all she had gone through there would be some justice for this innocent girl who just cared about everybody around and life would throw some good moments for her.

But he never saw Riddhima give up on anything she just cherished the positives and moved on. She was heck of a girl and he proud that she was his best friend and in his life.

Rahul there are more problems he heard Riddhima say.
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waoh dear🤗 its really a superb one⭐️ so sweet😊so Rahul know's about AR😊 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"To you I give the whole me,
For I believe that you're my destiny,
To you I offer every best of my heart,
For I believe that you will value it......
One-day love is everything,
You ever dreamed would be,
Then suddenly it leaves you,
Saying 'I' instead of 'We'..
I want to share my whole life with you,
I want to hold you in my arms,
Loving you is whole life what I want to do."



With Luv: ~
Nidha🤗

Edited by nidha1983 - 16 years ago
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nice prt.
waiting 2 know the reason y Ridhima dumped Armaan.
Hope AR meet again n confess their feelings.
Thanks for pm.
Update soon.
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hey nice ff....just read both of the chapter....nice...interesting...will love to read moer..so continue soon....pm me when u update...
❤️MONA

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