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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: angelz

this wud b thier confession scn

it wud be teh same way in the promo thn nupur in shock, she forgets tht shes playing isha
she goes towards him,
shes nervous, mayank continues to say, i love you
Nupur says i love you too MAYANK
scn shifts to the audience,
samrat who was sittin on the table jumps up in shock
Uday looks confused
Benji and Gunjan are in awhh
Sheena is just looking around...
Tamana mam has a happy look on her face
scn shifts back to Mayur
Mayank happy to hear this
then nupur realises wht she said, she gets nervous, blushes and runs away, Mayank is too happy, she runs after her, Everyone else left confused, sammy and tammy happy



😃😃😃
lol u don't wan't our readers to faint whilst reading this😆...loved it muah

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Posted: 16 years ago
aww thnx soo much kanya..so who will incorporate this?? and lets talk sajan how will we form a sajan scn?? how abt wen gunjan tells nupur abt thier love
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Posted: 16 years ago
so on june 8th ill take these scns and do a complete confession scn/ with uday schockd scn?? hows tht?
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Posted: 16 years ago
btw I think we shud close this FF soon within a couple of months😕...its not working

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Posted: 16 years ago
aww i wish we cud relli continue..i loved wrkin with u guys but i kno wht ur sayin =[
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
still editing this post
~CHAPTER 13- by Kanya~
4th June 2009

Mayank gives a lift to Nupur back home in his car


Nupur= thanks

Mayank= Nupur...ab yeh baat kitni baar kahun tumse? friendship mein no sorry and no thanks vanks...


Nupur shys away and so does Mayank.

She walks out of the car and gently closes the door. She gives Mayank one last glance and walks towards the Bhushan house.


Mayank gets out of his car too...


Mayank *shouts*= NUPUR!


Nupur stops


Nupur *turns around looking at him and smiling*= Kya Hua?


Silence


Mayank stays quiet and looks at Nupur without saying a word. Seeing this Nupur turns back and carries on walking towards her house...


Mayank *speaks again*= Nupur?


Nupur stops and turns around looking back at him. Mayank looks down and takes a deep breath in....he then walks very, very slowly towards her.


Nupur= Kya baat hai?

Mayank= Baat hai..yeh mujhe khud nahi pata....... Lekhin aaj kal jab bhi main tumhe dekhta hun to....


*Mayur Background tune*

Mayur have an eyelock....

Mayank carries on looking at Nupur's pretty face...he sees a strand of hair on Nupur's face... he gently pushes this strand of hair behind her ear....Nupur confusingly smiles...but Mayank has a serious look on his face.


Mayank *looks deep into her dark chocolate brown eyes*= Nupur..tum bahut bahut...bahut Khoobsurat ho....


Nupur looks down. She then hesitantly looks back up at him...


Nupur= Tum college ke liya late nahi ho rahe ho?

Mayank hears a click

Mayank*confused* = Kya? late? Kya matlab?

Mayank wakes up....it was all a dream ...


Mayank's mom= Tum college ke liya late nahi ho rahe ho?


Mayank= haan haan...thanks Mumma for reminding me...I totally forgot...


Mayank's mom *laughs* = acha mujhe kuch zaroori shopping karni hai..tum khud naashta karke college time se chal jaana , ok?


Mayank= acha ok mom...bye


Mayank gets ready and is in his car and parks outside Excel College.

Suddenly...

He then sees Nupur through the car's windscreen lying down on his car....with her dupatta flying across her face because of the wind....it was a sunny day..no clouds .....and he could see her smiling away with her eyes closed.



He had absolutely no idea what she was doing there...but that wasn't bothering him ..not one bit...he could happily carry on looking at Nupur this way....


Bell rings...and Mayank snaps out...he was dreaming...AGAIN!

He gets out of his car and heads towards college.


Suddenly he sees Nupur again (but in shirt and trousers!)...he keeps on looking at her. She gives him a wink!

Mayank= I love you .....

Nupur *in Chironji's voice!!!*= Oye hoye ji...mujhe pata nahi mein tumse yeh baat kaise karoon ji..lekhin mein voh nahi hun ji...mujhe ladkiyon mein interest hai...ladhkon mein nahi ji!!!


Mayank *shocked*😲😲😲= KYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yeh nahi ho sakta!!!! Lekhin TUM...tum to Shah Rukh Khan ko pasand karti ho?!? Nahi?

Mayank to himself = aur Nupur Chironji ki avaaz mein kyon bol rahi hai???

Mayank snaps out...CHIRONJI!!! he's been talking to Chironji all this time😲!!!!!!!!!

and OH NO! Chironji thinks that he's, he's...!!

Choronji= Anyways ji ...ab yeh 21st century hai ji..aur mein yeh sab baatein samaj sakta hun...lekhin mei us type ka ladka nahi hun...

Mayank= Nahi nahi Chironji...aisa koi baat nahi hai. Mujhe tumme koi interest nahi hai...I swear

Choronji=I hope meine aapko hurt nahi kiya ji...vaise hum hamesha friends rahenge ji😆

Mayank*angrily* = Forget it!...tumhe kuch sammaj mein nahi aayega! Mein apna time waste kar raha hun..*points finger at him* tumse baat kar kar!!!


Mayank then walks away from him and goes into the library...and he sees Nupur sitting on the table with books open in front...but what is she doing in the library???😲


NEXT UPDATE (chapter 14) on =

6th June - Will be posted by


Edited by Knowalot2 - 16 years ago
angelz thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
lmao aww poor mayank how cute <3
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Knowalot2

still editing this post

Previously= Mayank starts dreaming about Nupur and accidently says I Love you to Chiron ji whilst day-dreaming about her! Chironji gets the wrong idea and Mayank doesn't bother to explain why he said this to him. Mayank goes into the library and is shocked to see Nupur reading books in the library.

~CHAPTER 14- by Kanya~
6th June 2009



Mayank= Nupur? Tum library mein? Lekhin tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho?
Nupur= Kyu? Mei bhi kitabein par sakti hun? There's no rule saying that I can't study in the library.

Mayank= oh acha...teek hai... Actually mei tumse kuch poochna chahta hun
Nupur= kya?

Nupur= Actually ek bahut hi achi movie cinema mein aayie hai ... aur mein chahti hun ki tum bhi mere saat yea film dekho.

Mayank *smiles and over the moon, talks to himself*= Shayad Nupur mujhko pasand karti hai!😃

Mayank= haan haan kyun nahi...zaroor aaonga...um kab?
Nupur= kal 8.30pm...hum Cinemax ke saamne milengey...teek hai?
Mayank= of course

Mayu leaves the library smiling away thinking that only Nups and him are watching a movie tommorow.

Nupur*to herself*==oh no! yeh to bataana bool hi gayi, Mayank ko, ki Samrat aur Gunjan BHI invited hai😲


NEXT UPDATE (chapter 15) on =

6th June - Will be posted by


Edited by Knowalot2 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Previously: Mayank meets Nupur in the library, she tells him to go to the movies with him. Mayank is excited that they will be at the movies alone. Only problem is Nupur invited Gunjan and Samrat.
~CHAPTER 15- by Diana~
Mayank is waiting outside of the movie theatre for Nupur, there are 15 mins left for the movie to begin but there was no sign of Nupur. They even had to buy tickets. Finally Mayank spots Nupur in the crowd.
Mayank: itni derr se tumhara intazaar kar raha hu, kaha thi, tickets bhi leni baki hai.
Nupur: tickets ki tum chinta maat karo, tickets mil gayi hai.
Mayank: tumne tickets le li?
Nupur: nahi, maine kab kahan ke maine tickets li?
Mayank: Bubbles, maine tickets nahi li, aur tum ne bhi tickets nahi li, toh tickets kya aasman se tapke gi?
Nupur: nahi, Samrat ke haath se!
Mayank: Samrat??
Nupur(pointing at Samrat and Gunjan): Samrat.
The smile on Mayank's face began to disappear as his heart sank. He thought he would be alone with Nupur and maybe even tell her how he felt about her. But now it was impossible.
Samrat: Hii dude, yeh chehre ka rang kyun udd gaya?
Gunjan: Shayad, inko hamari company pasand nahi ayye
Mayank: aisi baat nahi hai, woh mujhe nahi paata tha ke tum logg bhi aa rahe ho
Nupur looking at her watch: Ahh..picture shuru hone waali hai chalo
At the movie theatre Nupur sat next to Mayank who sat next to Samrat who sat next to Gunjan. Nupur realized that Samrat had gotten tickets for a hollywood horror movie rather then the SRK movie she was hoping to see. She and Gunjan were not pleased. Gunjan was hiding behind Samrat, holding on to his arm, while Nupur hugged Mayank tightly as she hid her face in Mayank's chest. Samrat turned towards Mayank and winked at him with a wide grin on his face. Mayank finally understood why samrat did not buy tickets to the movie Nupur wanted to see. He took his hands and wrapped them around Nupur, holding her tightly in her arms. On the other hand, Samrat took his hand and wrapped it around Gunjan from behind. He held her tight while smiling at Mayank everytime a scene would scare the girls, Mayank gave him an excited look.
After the movies:
Samrat: So girls, movie kaisi lagi?
Gunjan: Acchi thi, magar wohh...
Nupur: Gunjan kya khak acchi thi, usse behtar SRK ki film hoti
Mayank: Tumhe kaise pata chalta? Tum ne na SRK ki film dekhi na yeh, tum toh aankhen bannd kar ke bahthi ti.
Mayank: Monkey tum bhi naa
They talk for a while and then decide to go home.
Nupur: Chal Gunjan bohot derr ho gayi hai, hum chalte hai
Samrat: Actually mujhe Chashmish ka kuch kaam hai, tum Mayank ke saath ghar chali kao **winks at Mayank**
Gunjan: Kya kaam hai?
Samrat: Tum chalo toh sahi**drags Gunjan out of there before Nupur gets a chance to react**
Mayank and Nupur go walk home together. Mayank finally decides that this is it. Today he will tell Nupur how he feels, no matter what happens, whether she accepts or rejects.
Mayank: Ummm..Bubbles..woh actually mujhe tumse kuch bohot important baat karni hai
Nupur: Kya baat hai?
Mayank: Umm...Maine..woh..Umm
Nupur: Mayank baaton gai bhi?
The night is calm and quiet, there is a full moon in the sky, they are by an empty roadside. Mayank stops and holds her hand to stop her hand to stop her from continuing her walk. He turns her around,...
Mayank: Nupur maine jo abb tumhe kehne ja raha hu, shayad tumhe aacha na laage..shayad iske baad tum mujhe kabhi is nazar se na dekh pao jis nazar she tum mujhe abhi dekh ti ho, paar yeh kehna zaruri hai
Nupur: Kya baat hai Mayank
Mayank turns around, his back faced to Nupur : I love you**turns back around** haa Nupur yeh saach hai
Nupur: May...
Mayank puts his hand over Nupurs mouth and stops her from talking
Mayank: Tum bohot bolti ho Bubbles aaj mujhe bol ne do, maine tumse bohot pyaar karta ho, itna ke is duniya ka saara pyaar kum paad jaye. Tumhe dard hota hai, toh aasu meri aank se nikalte hai, tumhe khushi hoti hai, toh tumhari kushi ki jalak meri muskurat ban ke duniya ko dikhai deti hai, tumhare aane se meri saase ruk jaati hai aur tumhari jaane se waqt thaam jata hai. Shayad main tumhara rajkumar na ban pau, shayad main tumhe ek safed ghode pe utaa ke naa le ja au par itna zarur kar sakta hu ke tumhari har gham mein le lu aur meri saari khushi tumhe de du, ka tum mere pyaar ko kabul karogi?** takes his hand off of Nupur's mouth**
Nupur has soft tears in her eyes, a surprised look on her face and a smile adoring her lips.
Nupur: Maine hamesha soocha tha ke mere liye ek raj kumar ayye ga, aur jab main tumse mili toh laga ke shayad woh tumhi ho, par tumhe dekh ke lagta tha ke, tum mere rajkumar toh kabhi ban nahi sakte, tum toh perfect thhe. Mujh jaise ladki tumhe kaise pasand aati. Is liye maine tumhe kuch nahi bataya. Maine socha ke main tumhe deserve nahi karti, aur kaise karti, main itni stupid jo...**Mayank stops her**
Mayank: Tumne yeh kisni kaha ke tum stupid ho?
Nupur: Tumhi toh mujhe stupid keh ke bulate thhe bul gaye??
Mayank:; woh toh maine tab kehta tha jab maine tumhe jaana nahi tha, samjha nahi tha, par ab jaan gaya hu, tum bohot intelligent ho, bohot pyaari ho, tumahri aanken itni bholi si hai, aur tumahara dil mein sirf sab ke liye pyaar hai, par kya isme mere liye bhi pyaar hai?
Nupur shys away: hai, bohot pyaar hai
NEXT UPDATE: June 10th

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