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hey frns here is a small scene that i had written nearly 2 mths back .....just thought of posting it...hope u all like it ....
Yeh savari
Now that so many bad incidents are taking place in lals house so chaijee consults some bujurg (oldie) for a solution and to bring good luck. So the old lady tells her to perfom the puja at pahadi wala mandir which will is located on a top of the mountain and the puja can be only performed my a shaadi shuda jodi .so now as BBR is pregnant she cannot climb the mountain for sure and kullu is also not well so the obviously the puja can be performed by Raj and kranti.
Chaijee: Ji beeji (the old lady ) hum jald se jald yeh puja karwa denge kal hi main apne puttar aur choti bahu ko wahan bhej dungi ,waise yeh jagah hai kahan?
Beeji: woh yahan se kuch 125 miles per hai par .pathankot se aage pahari raste pe chaba jane wali sarak ki taraf hai yahan se unko 15 miles paidal ya to phir ghode par jana hoga .
Chaijee: Ji main un se jane ki tayyari karne ko kehti hoon .
Beeji takes their leave .
Chaijee comes to RK'room where R is sitting on his study table and busy doing some work .Raj puttar K kahan hai ?
Just when she asks this K enters the room.
C:are k puttar muje tum dono se ek kaam that .Inkar mat karma puttar.
K: ji kya baat hai C?? aap pareshan lag rahi hai ??
C: woh baat yeh hai puttar ki beeji ne bataya hai ki humein apni ghar ki shanti ke liye puja karwani padegi to main chati thi ki tum aur raj puttar yeh puja karein.
K: ji thik hai chaijee .kahan karni hogi yeh puja.
C: puttar yeh puja tum dono ko pahadi wale mandir mein karni hogi.Jo Pathankot se 15 miles par hai .
R looks at K and she also looks at him as if to ask each other and both agree just looking at each other .Though raj is a NASTIK but he can do anything for his family.
K actually never wanted go alone with him any more but has no option left .
The next day they get ready to go to that mandir .
C: puttar tum dono ko wahan se laut te hue sham hojaye gi to wahan par yatriyo ki suvidha ke liye dharmshala hai , tum dono wahi teher jana aaj raat. Aur tumahri gadi toh wahn tak nahi jaye gi to ???..gao se tum donoko ghod savari karni hogi .
K: Ji chaijee (she takes C ashirwad and both leave the house )
While they are traveling they don't utter a single word .but R looks at her from time to time .while she falls asleep and slowly she lies her head on R shoulders in her sleep (unknowingly of course)
And raj just looks at her and drives the car and they reach that particular gao. when R applies the break K wakes up from her sleep and tries to move away from him while her earring(kaan ki bali) gets stuck in R coat .R removes it slowly and they get out of the car .
K: mujhe bhook lagi hai ..pehle kuch kha lete hai?us dhabe pe chalte hai..
R: dekho tum acchi tarah janti ho ki mujhe aisi gandi jagaho par khana pasand nahi.
K: aur tum bhi yeh acchi tarah jante ho ke main wahi pe khana khaungi?toh agar khana hai toh kha lo warna bhooke hi raho.
R and K go to the dhaba
K:bhaiyaa mereliye aloo ke parathe lana..
Bhaiya: Ji..aur sahib aap kya lenge..?
K:ummm?nahi yeh nahi khayenge..accha ek kaam kijiye inke liye karela ka bana kuch bhi le aiyeee?
R:ji nahi mujhe kuch nahi khaana?thankyou
K: theek hai tumhari marzi ..dekho aage kuch nahi milne wala?aur dharamsahala mein kuch milega ya nahi ..kuch nahi keh sakte ?toh jo mil raha hai khaa lo..
R: theek hai phir mere liye bhi parathe hi mangwa lo..
K:kaise lage parathe??
R: hmm?.jara theeke hai?
K: toh tum kaunse meethe ho..?
R: kya..?
K:kuch nahi ?chale..?
R: haan chalo..
The dharmashala is located in pathankot and the mandir is 15miles away from the pathankot .
They left the house early in the morning and by 10 am they have arrived at the dharamshala.
R :pehle hum dharamshala chalete hai aur wahan se tayyar hokar mandir chalenge .
K Agrees and they check inn the dharmshala.
There they meet Mr pritam ji who is the manager of the dharmashala and he speaks in pure hindi.
Pritamji: ji babuji kya seva karu mai aapki ?
R: ji hum yahan mandir mein jaane ke lilye aye hai .toh aaj raat hum yahan tehrna hai .
Pritam ji .ji babuji mein aap ke liye kaksh (room) khol deta hoon. Aaiye bhabhi ji
R:ji .yahan se mandir kitni door hai ??
P: 15 miles par hai ,aap kab jana chahenge?
R: Ji.abi jana chahenge.
P: toh thik hai app apni kasksh (room) mein jakar kuch der keliye vishram (rest) kare ,main apkeliye bhojan ki vyavastha karta hoon uske paschyat aap mandir ke liye prasthan kijiye.aap wahan paidal jaiyenge ya ghodsavari karenge.
K: ji hum paidal hi jayenge .
R: nahi hum ghodsavari karenge .kranti hum 50 mileskms paidal kaise chal paiyenge.mujhe ghar apne pairo par jana hai .please abb zid mat karna.
K: thik hai .hum ghodsavari karenge .par mujhe ghoda chalana nahi ata.
P: koi dar nahi bhabhi ghode sath ekk admi bhi hota hai jo ghode ko sambhalta hai .aap ghode par ni sankoj(without any fear) hokar bait jaiye .
K:ji toh phir thik hai .
R and K get ready. She is wearing a pink colour salwar
and he is wearing a kurta paijama.
K cannot take her eyes off him neither can he
Pritam ji knocks the door
P: babauji aap ki savari aagai hai .
Both come out of their La la land.
R:ji pritam ji hum abhi aye.
Dono hi apne apne ghode par baith jaate hai?
The both start their journey it is very steep slope and as both are worried K doest show that she is but bechara R looks worried on the horses back.
Looking at which the fellow accompanying says that sahab itna mat darye yeh ghoda nahi girega ise apni jaan bhi toh bachani hai na
While speaking to raj he happens to leave K horse .And K's horse goes wild and starts moving in by itself.
R on the other hand tells that fellow to look after K's horse by then the horse starts running and the kudi starts shouting bachao,
R: just leaves that fellow and follows K .
K: now cant think of any thing she starts shouting Rajveer mujhe bachao.
R: follows her and rides the horse faster .And gets parallel with K'horse and tries to get hold of her but the horse is too fast ,so he decides to jump on k's horse .
And finally succeeds in getting on K's horse and he some how gets hold of the horse and controls the horse. And stops the same. He gets down from the horse and also helps her to get down .while getting down from the horse she so relived that she directly hugs him
?he holds her firmly in his arms and tries to calm her .
And says
R:kuch nahi hua kranti .main hoon na
K: lying her head is on his chest .
They sit under a tree .and she realizes that its rajveer who saved her and gets conscious as always . and moves away from him.
And ask him how does he know such good horse riding on which R says that he used to play polo back in England and was one of the best players of the game.
Then she asks him if it is so then why he looked so worried when he got on the horse ?.on which he tell her that he was worried bout her .
K: tumhe meri itni parva kabse hone lagi??
R: tum meri biwi ho kranti ,meri zimedari ho?
By that time the horse fellow find them
GW: (ghode wala) sahib aap dono theek toh hai na??
R: Ji ?sab theek hai ?.
GW : Toh chlae ?.?
R: ji chaliye?
Raj get on the horse back and asks kranti to get on the same horse ?
K: main dusre gode pe chlungi?
R: kranti ?.. hum dono ke raste humesha se hi alag rahe hai?..kya aisi koi manzil nahi jaha hum dono saath saath chale??
K: Kranti ke paas koi jawab nahi tha?.woh bhi chahti thi ke un dono ke raste aur manzil humesha ke liye ek hi ho?
And finally dono ek hi ghode pe baith kar mandir mein gaye aur puja karli?..dono ke liye yeh savari ek yaadgaar savari thi.
Finally they reach the dharmashala .And enter the room where unlike the circuit house there are two separate Charpais(cot made of jute)
Its night time they have their food and ready to sleep raj goes and lies on his charpai and K's charpai is just some distance away parallel to raj.she comes and lies on her charpai .R is pretending as if he is sleeping .she also closes her eyes to sleep .raj now watches her .suddenly she opens her eyes (raj you are cought).
K asks him: soye nahi ???
R:neend nahi aa rahi .
K: kyon ?
R : bas aaj jo hua uske bare soch raha tha.
K: raat bohot hogayi hai so jao.kal subah jaldi nikalna hogo.
R: shubh ratri.
K: kya ??? pritam ji ki sangat ka asar hai kya??
K: good night.
R: kya?? Meri sangat ka asar hai kya??
Both smile at each other .
The next day at Lals house
Both are behaving much more comfortable with each other chaijee and buaji notice this and thank god and say that yeh saab puja ka asar hai.
Courtesy: Idea by Sami.
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