VAADA RAHA NEW FANFIC Name

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Vaada raha

By Noori and Shireen

Character descriptions

The guys

Kavya Nanda - Lives with Yug , sujal (ranjeev) and shlok and works part time in pizza hut as a pizza delivery boy

John Abraham - A rich business man who lives with his bauji and is very loving and caring to his bauji even though he's different in the office but he isn't bad at heart once you get to know him

Sujal Garewal - is a successful student and lives with yug , kavya and shlok and also works in pizza hut part time

Yug mittal - is the Casanova out of the group who makes girls weak at their knees and also works in pizza hut but the girls don't know that and also lives with sujal , kavya and shlok

Shlok Sharma - The sweet and kind hearted of the group who has also captured every girls heart and also lives with sujal, yug and kavya and also works with pizza hut

Professor Ronit Roy - Recently Divorced No kids who lives with his brother rohit and mom who keep telling him to get married again

The girls

Anjali Saxena - a sweet innocent girl whose always into her studies and never has time to go to the disco and is friends with Noori , Shireen (shezzy) , Disha , Arpita and Kashish

Arpita Mallya - whose into boys , boys and boys and is always into her make up and is friends with Anjali , Noori , shireen (shezzy) , Disha and Kashish

Disha Malhotra - whose into her appearance she always asks her friends for advise and friends with Anjali, Noori , shireen (shezzy) , Arpita and Kashish

Kashish Kapoor - whose into movies and a die hard fan of Shahrukh khan and wishes to star in a movie with him and is friends with Anjali , Noori , Shireen (shezzy) , Disha , Arpita and Kashish

Noori And Shireen Eijaz Khan - Are both sisters Noori is the eldest and shireen is the youngest and she is known as lil sis or shezzy In the group but these two might be sisters but they are completely different Noori is into sports and boys and is in the boys football team and shireen she's into music and music and doesn't want be involved with boys and is always into her studies

noori and shezzy are in class

( kavya and yug staring)

shezzy - noori di why are those boys staring at us gosh its freaking me out!

noori - shez aren't they cute there lookin at us coz i think they like us

shez - oh di they could be rapists or really bad guys

noori - uff Tum be na

noori - shez wheres da bloody teacher we have been sitting her for ages

shezzy - noori di , calm down

Ronit sir walks in

noori - oh here he comes

teacher - hey guys well your teacher mr . Vaadva is not very well so ronit sir has came to take over your class his name is Ronit Roy you can call me ronit or sir any questions!

shezzy looked at noori

shezzy - hey di wots up why r u staring at ronit sir!

noori - wow isn't he cute

shezzy - di he's our teacher oh come on you cant fancy him!

noori - shut up lil sis look at him wow

shezzy - di!

ronit - hey whats your name

kavya - kavya and this is yug

ronit - why are you staring over there i'm here

yug - no sir we are staring at those girls over there

teacher - well STAND OUT SIDE the door now

ronit - excuse me sir i dont mind they r only kids

teacher - u really gotta control these students they sometimes can be so irritating well sir i got to go good luck

*teacher walks out *

shezzy - See di, they got told of by the teacher! see i told u they were bad

noori - oh gosh shez you have to do this to be cool and popular you know u got have a balance of being good and bad!

shezzy - oh no di,! i can never be cool

noori - shh

*end of class*

shezzy - di where are we going now

noori - we are going to meet anjali disha Arpita!

shezzy - oh ok

anjali - hey shezzy my lil sis how are you! * hugged shezzy*

shezzy - i'm good anjali di how are you

anjali - i'm good 2

anjali - and how are you noori! * hugged noori *

noori - i'm good anjali!

disha - hi shezzy and noori

shezzy - hi disha di

noori - hi disha

Arpita - hi all of ya

shezzy and noori - hi Arpita!

shezzy - guess wot Kashish di is coming back today this afternoon*

anjali - realli

noori - yeh we got to pick her up from the airport at 4pm*

disha - cool

noori - aright guys me and shezzy got to go to class now see ya at lunch

disha anjali Arpita - bye

noori and shezzy walk down the corridor

Someone bangs into shezzy and noori

shezzy's books fall on the floor

noori - hey you cant you see where ya going

man - oh i'm so sorry

* helped shezzy pick the books up *

shezzy - thanx

man - if u dont mind me asking wats ur name?

noori - noori

shezzy - mine or nooris

man - both

shezzy - well shireen but my nik name is shezzy

man - oh cool my names sujal well got to go see ya

noori - wasn't he fit!

shezzy - di he could be any one this men freak me out!

noori - Shireen Eijaz Khan wat is wrong with you why are you always going on about bad things in guys why dont you ever find a good thing or look for a good thing in a guy God you so.................

shezzy - di , u know i h8 it when people call me my full name

noori - so i'm ur sis!

shezzy - sorry di

noori - I'm sorry 2 but ur really got to get out dat habit of urs

shezzy - hmm well i got to admit he was kinda cute

noori - thats my girl any way sis we gtg to da library

shezzy - Oh my God noori Eijaz khan stepping first time into a library God times must be changing

noori - oh shut up

shezzy - so tell ya lil sis y u suddenly going into a library

noori - i will tell ya when we get there

*at the library*

noori picked up a book from the shelf

shezzy - oh cool di what ur reading

noori - hey shez i dont read u know that

shezzy - so what u doing!

noori - look at ronit! wow!

shezzy - i should of guessed

noori - please go and ask him how old he is and whether he married u know a freindly conversation

shezzy - me? no di thats insulting him

noori - please for ur big sis plz plz plz

shezzy - ok di

* walked over to ronit *

shezzy - hey sir

ronit - hey shireen

shezzy - sir call me shezzy

ronit - oh cool

shezzy - sir, wat ur reading

ronit - oh a love story

shezzy - oh cool i read them

ronit - oh wow

shezzy - so sir ur new ?

ronit - yeh

shezzy - how old r u ( sir i'm asking friendly )

ronit - oh i'm 25 years old not v old

shezzy - yeh so what were u before u became a professor

ronit - oh i was a married man i used to spend time with my wife i didn't really have a big job i used to work for this company i owned but few months ago my wife took over the company and left me so i'm a bit of a sad case!

shezzy - oh i'm so sorry sir r u divorced and kids?

ronit - no kids and divorced

shezzy - i'm sorry

ronit - its ok

shezzy - well sir my friends calling me i gtg bi

ronit - bi

noori - what did he say

shezzy - he's divorced no kids a bit of a sad case

noori - WOW how old is he?

shezzy - 25

noori - i'm 18 he's 25 i got a big chance to get him!

shezzy ( laughed ) - mhmm i guess so

sujal walked over to shezzy

sujal - hey shez

shezzy - hey sujal

sujal - i was thinking do u wanna come to lunch with me tomorrow?

shezzy - oh me erm ok

sujal - kewl meet me by the corridor

noori - ohhhhh he soo fancies u

shezzy - oh di, hes just being friendly

noori - has u wish

*Afternoon*

shezzy - come on disha di and anjali di lets go and pick kashish di up from da airport

noori - yeh come on

*airport*

noori - kashish ka hai kitne der lagati hai

shezzy - di have some patience

kashish - hey sisters

disha - kashish di

(Everyone gave kashish a hug)

noori - so how was new York ? did u meet ur dad

kashish - every thing was fine and gr8 and i got all of you pressies!!!!

arprits - wow di wot did you get me

kashish - Arpita w8

noori - wow

shezzy - di, y did ur dad call u at new york any way?

kashish - come lets go home and i will tell ya every thing!

*at home*

shezzy - so di tell us then why did he call you?

Kashish - he wanted me to get married!! i dont mind getting married but you know

noori - know what ?

kashish - i would love to have love marriage instead of a arrange marriage!

noori - oooooooooooooh di, ur in a big lovely mood

disha - so di have u seen a boy yet!

kashish - no not yet but i feel that hes gonna come soon

Arpita - di pressies

noori - w8 i got news 4 ya all!

kashish - wot!

noori - our dear lil sis has a d8 with a boy!

kashish - wow i go from this place for 1 week and loads of things happen

shezzy - noori di its not even a d8 ap be na!

noori - anyway guys have u seen ronit sir

disha - yeh hes realli sweet

noori - Sweet hes soo cute !!!!

kashish - here we go again so my dear noori is he da real guy or just some crush?

noori - di i think hes the one!

Arpita - ohhhhh why dont i Eva find a boy they all seem to run away from me!

disha - yeh i know

anjali - so disha u seen any one yet?

disha - yeh his names shlok and u?

anjali - yeh kavya!

Arpita- Kavya wot a awful name

anjali - hey dont u dare give me attitude girl

kashish - Stop fighting

To be continued and PLEASE COMMENT ON OUR FANFIC WE NEED TO KNOW IF WE SHOULD CONTINUE OR NOT

Edited by nooreenuk - 19 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww this story is sooo sweet, aww plz finish it i can't w8 to see what happens next!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow! gr8! 👏 👏 👏
1st i thought u were tlkin abt sg 😳 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow 😃
Gr8 👏
The concept is really unique but there are soo many characters dat Im confused! 😆 lol!
I think so U have planned to make it a KYUNKI type! 😆 😆 lol!
Its gr8 noori n Shezzy,keep it up 😳 😊 😃

Sam
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Originally posted by: Groovychick

wow! gr8! 👏 👏 👏
1st i thought u were tlkin abt sg 😳 😆

lol😆me 2!!😳😆

yeah its very nice noori...keep it up!!👏😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Plz SEND MORE REPLIES PLZ PLZ PLZ 😭 😭 😭 WE WANT ABOUT 8 REPLIES SO WE KNOW PEOPLE ARE READIN THIS THEN WE WIL CARRY ON
luv ya
xxx
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Well here we Continued
😃 kashish - arprita u can have ur pressies now
arprita - thanx di
kashish - noori i got u perfume
noori - thanx
kahish - shezzy i got u this top and skirt
shezzy - thanx di
kashish - disha and anjali i got u this music cd
disha and anjali - wow thanx di
kashish - and arprita i got u a book
arprita - a book!
kahsihs - wot arprita i thougtht u love reading
arprita - oh ye thanx
kashish - its ok guys

NEXT DAY!!!!

noori and shezzy in class

noori - shezzy look its lover boi sujal
shez - di will ya stop it !
noori - sorri!
shez - ok
yug comes ova
yug - hey noori
noori - hi yug the bug
shez - di dont insult him
noori - sorri
yug - its ok i was thinking wud u like to have lunch with me and kavya today
noori - today wot about tomoroow
yug - yeh ok see ya
*end of class*
shezzy - okay guys im going to lunch with sujal see ya]
noori - see ya
disha - see ya
arprita - bye
arprita - me and kashish are going to the library bi
noori - see ya
anjali - so noori wot u wanna do
noori * follow me *
shezzy was sitting at a table with sujal
noori - look
anjali - noori dont spy on ur lil sis
noori - i aint spying im just
disha - we are jusy looking out for our lil sis
anjali - hmm

sujal - so u read books
shezzy - well not all the time i like listening to music
sujal - kewl
shezzy - so wot about you

noori - anjali i cant hear them go and see wot they are saying
anjali - noori! im not doing that
noori - fine i will go

sujal - oh i like reading few books but like u im not a geek
shezzy - hmm
sujal - you ok
shezzy - yeh i feel like someone is folloing me i mean spying on me
sujal got up and looked around
noori hid behin a plant pot
sujal - i dont think so
disha walked ova to noori
disha - ha u were so close of gettin caught
noori - disha hey if i got caught u wud of got caught with me
anjali - well im going
noori - no plz dont go
noori - anywayz i think they talking about books gosh this lil sis of ours doesnt even know how to talk to bois God we really got to teach her
anjali - noori tum be na"
sujal - so shireen friends ?
shezzy - yeh * shaked hands *
noori - ohhhh friends wow this is going proper fast
disha - haha yeh
shezzy - well sujal i gtg see ya around
sujal - see ya
noori - hide shes coming
shezzy - noori di i know u were spying on me
noori - sorri
shezzy - disha di and anjali di i didnt expect u to
anjali - soz
noori - well shezzy lets go to the library
^Went to the Library ^
kashish - so shireen how was ur lunch
shezzy - its was gd
kashish - hmm
disha - hmm kewl
kashish - well i have decided do u want to come shopping with all of us"
shezzy - yeh sure after college
kashish - yeh
shezzy - ok
&after college at home&
kashish - everyone get changed we are getting ready to go shoping
disha - k di
arprita - kk
"everyone Gets Changed "
At the shoping mall
kavya and yug walk ova!
kavya - anjali wanna come shooping with me
yug - kashish u wanna come with me
anjali - yeh ok
kashish - yeh sure
*kashish and anjali went off*
noori - how dare he he comes and asks me out then goes shopping with kashish di idiot
shezzy * laughed* di!
noori so where do u wanna go
disha - new look * english shop *
^ in New look ^
noori - shezzy look at this isnt this nice *holding top *
shezzy - wow its great get it di it so suits u
noori - yeh
shezzy spots sujal
shezzy - sujal!
sujal - hey how r u
shezzy - im good
sujal - you wanna come shoping with me
shezzy - yeh sure
noori - hmm see ya at home
shezzy - yeh see ya
arprita - everyone is leaving us
noori - no they are not
disha - guess wot noori di shlok is here im going with him
noori - ok see ya
disha - see ya!
Ronit - noori tum ya ha
noori - ronit
ronit hugged noori
ronit - so noori wanna come shopping with me
noori - ronit lekhen
ronit - shireen told me everything about u so u wanna be my friend
noori - yeh sure"
ronit - so come on lets do some shopping
noori - bye arprita
arprita - noori odnt u dare leave me on my own
noori - sorri arprita see ya at home"
arprita - see ya
* AT HOME AFTER SHOPPING*

kashish - omg! noori that yug really likes you! hes wasnt stop going on about you
noori - well tell him im Taken
kashish - hmm hoos da guy
nooori - Ronit he really likes me!
kashish - wow good luk
noori - wheres shezzy?
kashsih - oh shes in her room
noori walked ova to shezzy room
shezzy - so noori di how was ya d8 with ronit
noori - thanx shez he reali likes me thanx 4 telling him stuff about me
shez - oh come on di he liked u wen i was chattin to him b4 he was asking about u
noori - really
shezzy - yeh ofcourse
noori - so how was ur shopping trip with sujal
shezzy - di i really like him
noori - aww my lil sis is in love
shezzy - am i ? id this really love!
noori - well if ya like someone its called love
shezzy - so di tell me wot happened at ur shopping trip with ronit
noori - we shopped till we dropped
shezzy - di wots in ya hand? wots in dat bag!
noori - this is wot he gifted me
shezzy - come di show me>
noori - * showed shezzy a really nice red dress *
shezzy - wow
noori - innit nice and hes also invited me to this party this evening
shezzy - wow u look so happy
noori - but shireen i odnt wanna go i think this is going a bit to fast
shezzy - Wot! di go i will coem with ya
noori - wil ya
shezzy - of course
noori * hugged shezzy * im so happy
shezzy - yeh me too
noori - u were listening wernt u anjali
anjali - sorri i wont tell anyone
noori - come here
noori hugged anjali
anjali - i have neva seen noori so happy and i have neva seen shezzy so happi
anjali - noori and shezzy i got news 4 u
shezzy - wot anjali di?
noori - kya?
anjali - im getting Engaged to Kavya!!!
noori - Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
shezzy - OMG WOW * hugged anjali *
anjali - dont tell kashish di or anyone else yet i wanna keep it a secret
shezzy - ok
*NEXT DAY*

kashish - shezzy im just going to the shop to get something
shezzy - teek hai di
kashish - disha is coming wiht me
shezzy - ok see ya

Kashish walking when she saw sujal
kashish - disha dekh!
disha - haan
kashish - hes soo nice
disha - haan di
^in the shop ^
kashish - hi can i have some milk
man - yeh
man hands milk
man - 1.00
kashish hands 1 pound
kashish leaves when her dupatta gets stuck to sujals button
kashish turned around
kashish - erm mere dupatta
sujal - oh im sorri
kashish - its ok
sujal gets da duppata out!
kashish - bye!
sujal - bye!
disha - di where did ya go
kashish - i wil tell u at home
^at home ^
girls come here
everyone came
kashsih - he is my dream man
kashis got her phone out
arprita - di u took a pic of him on ur phone
kashish - yeh
disha - Sujal!
noori - nahi not sujal * looked it was sujal *
shezzy ran to her room
😃
plz replie
thanx
luv ya
xxxx
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow this is gr8, noori 'n' shezzy,

Keep it up i cant wait to read the next part.

👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PLZ PLZ GUYS SEND REPLIES 😭 ME AND NOORI DI WAITED NEALR 1 HOUR AND HALF AND WE ONLI GOT 5 REPLIES PLZ PLZ SEND COMMENTS WE NEED TO KNOW WHETHER U LIKE IT OR NOT
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PLZ PLZ PZL GUYS
😭 😭 😭

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