Teen love poem-give it a read!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey ppl....this is my first post here...n so wanted to share my best work till today...a poem that i had written on a rainy evening...here it goes...
I feel the need of feeling his love
I feel the need of having him with me in all my moments,
No matter the moments are of fun, sadness, anger or or romance;
I feel the need of sharing everything with him,
whether itz my lunches or dinners,my arguments or my tears;
I feel the need of feeling our first monsoons,
and then the feeling of rushing home soon;
I feel the need of having our first fight,
And he asking for forgiveness with a dress in my favourite white;
I feel the need for sitting hours hand in hand,
And not realising when we fell asleep in our dreamland;
I feel the need of having those cute chats online,
And then having those painful times when his IM says "OFFLINE"
I feel the need of sending those romantic SMSes
And he replying back with loads of hugs and kisses;
But will my feel ever be felt by HIM,
He,who is made just for me and me just for him...
I feel the need of feeling his love....
-komalsirwani

Do comment if it touches you're heart...😳

Loads of love,
Kimmy
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awnn it's so cute!
my favourite stanza was:
I feel the need for sitting hours hand in hand,
And not realising when we fell asleep in our dreamland;
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awww, that's realllly cute (:
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Omg ... that is sooo good.. The really cute part is the offline thing n the hugs n kisses thingg

GREAT jobb!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aww,that was really very sweet!

Good job(Y)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awww so touching, i Have to say Every teenagers have went through that feeling, and so have i .. although Now i've realised it was a crush and not Love ... but anyways the poem was beautiful !! 👏 👏

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