Is this Love ? Mein Ne Na Jana (SG FF- Completed)

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IS THIS LOVE? MEIN NE NA JANA

After writing One-Shots, I got quite a few requests for writing a FF. I thought about it, and have decided to give it a shot. This FF is about Samrat & Gunjan's journey into love. This maybe their story, but I will show the point of view of not just Samrat & Gunjan, but also of all the characters, whose life is touched during their journey. I'm going to write this FF in continuation of the current SaJan track going on in the show. If you like reading this FF and wish me to PM you for the next updates. Please let me know here on this thread and will add your name to the list !!! Those who haven't read my One-Shot ! Here are the links !!


Table of Contents
Chapter One - PG 1
Chapter Two - PG 6
Chapter Three - PG 12
Chapter Four - PG 18
Chapter Five - PG 24
Chatpter Six - PG 31
Chapter Seven - PG 36
Chapter Eight - PG 40
Chapter Nine - PG 46
Chapter Ten - PG 53
Chapter Eleven - PG 53
Chapter Twelve - PG 61
Chapter Thirteen - PG 67
Chapter Fourteen - PG 72
Chapter Fifteen - PG 78
Chapter Sixteen - PG 82
Chapter Seventeen - PG 87
Chapter Eighteen - PG 91
Chapter Nineteen - PG 94



CHAPTER ONE

Samrat & Sheena's date is over. Samrat walks Sheena out the door, to her car. Sheena can never fault Samrat for not being a gentleman. But she can fault him for one thing tonight! For the most boring date ever! Had Samrat realized it, he would have been appalled, that a girl was actually bored during a date with him! Especially a dinner date with him, at his place! No way! They walk to her car. Sheena unlocks the door and then turns towards him. Samrat comes forward to give her a hug. She hugs him back. But like a friend would. After what happened tonight, all her expectations have vanished! It is not his fault. She gets in, starts the car and drives away. She knows as far as Samrat is concerned, the date was fabulous! He certainly enjoyed himself. At least someone had a good time! As she is driving, she recollects the whole date scenario.

Samrat: Hey Sheena!

Sheena: Hi Samrat!

Sheena has always been very confident about herself and her impact on guys. She knew when she joined excel and met Samrat, that they would start dating soon. Tonight, it is their first date and she knows she is looking gorgeous ! She walks inside the house, knowing from the look on Samrat's face, that all that time spent on getting ready for tonight hasn't gone in vain! Samrat greets her with a hug.

Samrat: Wow Sheena, you look amazing!

Sheena: Mein jaanti hoon! Tum bhi kaafi achey lag rahey ho!
Samrat: Really? Chashmish bhi yeh hee keh rahi thi !
Sheena: Gunjan? Who abhi tak yaheen hai?
Samrat: Nahi, abhi ghar gayee hai !
Sheena: Waisey, woh shaam sey yahan kar kya rahi hai? I thought tum toh dinner cook karney mein busy thay, toh Gunjan yahan?
Samrat: Woh meri help karney ayee thi !
Sheena: Tumhari help? I thought tumhey cooking aati hai !
Samrat : Cooking mein nahi ! Woh dialogues practice karney mein ! Mein cooking karney key saath dialogues ki bhi practice kar raha tha !
Sheena: Arey! Tumko practice karni thi, toh mujhey batatey, mein aur jaldi aajati. Saath practice kartey.
Samrat: Samrat aik beautiful babe kay samnay hamesha har cheez perfect karta hai ! Toh tumharey saath rehersals bhi bilkul perfect honi chahiye !
Sheena: Oh ! Toh mujhey impress karney kay liye, Gunjan key saath practice ho rahi thi ?
Samrat: Of course ! Not !! Tum toh already mujh sey impressed ho ! Aur karney ki zaroorat nahi !

He is grinning. He knows he is right about her being impressed.

Sheena: Oh really? Tum ko kaisey pata?

Samrat: Agar impressed nah hoti, toh kabhi merey ghar dinner date par nahi aati !

Sheena smiles, and shakes her head. She is starting to enjoy herself. She didn't know, that it wouldn't last long. He leads her to the dining table which is already set beautifully!

Samrat is happy to finally have Sheena over at his place for dinner. But his eyes are searching for Chashmish. Where did she go? He told her that she could stay. But she didn't. She must have left through the kitchen door. Not only has she cooked everything, she has also set the table so beautifully, while he was receiving Sheena at the door. Chashmish is simply amazing.

Sheena: Wow! Tumney table kitni achi tarah set ki hai ! Tum aur ladkon sey kitney alag ho !

Samrat feels guilty. He knows that he cannot tell Sheena that he has lied about knowing how to cook and that Chashmish has cooked everything, at least he can be honest about this !

Samrat: Yeh mein ney nahi, Chashmish ney table set ki hai, ghar janey sey pehley.

Sheena : Oh? How sweet ! Woh sab ka kitna khayal rakhti hai?
Sheena didn't know at that time, that by praising Chashmish, she has opened the Pandora's box !
Samrat: Chashmish hai hee itni januable ! Sab ka khayal rakhti hai, aur sab sey ziada mera ! Meri best friend jo hai ! Magar apna khayal rakhna toh usey ata nahi ! Aaj ki hee baat leylo ! Us ney apna haath jala liya !
Sheena : Haath Jala liya ? Kaisey ! Cooking to tum kar rahey thay na ? Toh Gunjan ka haath kaisey jal gaya?

Samrat realized his mistake and immediately rectified it.

Samrat: Woh, merey liye coffee banatey waqt us ka haath jal gaya. Buhut dard ho raha tha usey, magar aisey act kar rahi thi jaisey kuch nah hua ho. Magar mein janta hoon, usko buhut takleef hui thi.

Sheena likes Gunjan, but now she is starting to get a little irritated. There are a lot of things to discuss tonight besides Gunjan. She would rather talk about herself and Samrat! She changes the topic.

Sheena: Toh aaj kya khila rahey ho ? Its smells heavenly.

Samrat's opens all the dishes, and they start eating.
Sheena: Wow ! Delicious ! Tumharey haathon mein toh jaadu hai.

Samrat who has just taken a bite of the dinner, has a faraway look in his eyes. He has a flashback of the first time Chashmish has cooked Rajma Chawal for him. He smiles

Samrat: Waqai Jadu hai !

Sheena: Apni tareef khud kar rahey ho ? Modesty toh tum ko choo key bhi nahi guzri !
Samrat: Chashmish bhi yeh hee kehti hai !

Sheena ignores the mention of Gunjan once again.

Sheena: Tum jitney college mein extra curricular activities mein hisa letey ho, kya itney achey student bhi ho? Academically speaking ?

Samrat: No way ! Yeh toh princi ki aur Chashmish ki meherbani hai key mein abhi tak fail nahi hua ! Mujhey parhai mein koi interest nahi ! Meri image ka sawal hai !
Sheena: Ahan! Interesting !

Not the fact that he hasn't failed yet, but the fact, that whatever the topic, Gunjan's name is always on Samrat's lips. How come she didn't notice this before? Or did she ? And just tried to ignore it ? She had high hopes for the two of them, but from what she could see and feel, this friendship is going remain just friendship, nothing more. She really tried to talk about something or someone other then Gunjan, but Samrat would bring her up in every topic somehow or the other. Now she wasn't irritated. She was just amused.

Sheena, who is driving back home, comes back to reality and says to herself.

Sheena: Samrat aur Gunjan ? Kya yeh sirf dosti hai ?
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..-Jia-.. thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Naveen this is a good start, please write some more :) I want to know where this leads up to :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ahem! ahem! so this FF is super duper nice.......sammy's always talking abt gunji................so sweet.......and sheena thinking sajan more than fr&s is so awesome..... I hope show main bhi she is gud and not twin dia....
Love Adya!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow this is the best ff loved it add me to your pm list 😃 and countinue soon
-amna
Edited by disco_diva - 16 years ago
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wow lovely dear
thanks for this lovely fic .
i have already requested you in that one shot wow and you write it so early.
good one dear.
do continue dear and yes plz Pm me i am an honest and reader sachiiiiii ache ache comments doongi.
bye sumi
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superb amazing too gud
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wow gr8 start........
add me to the pm list.............. and continue soon..................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mjhtsajanfan25

Naveen this is a good start, please write some more :) I want to know where this leads up to :)

hey Jia, thanks sweety !! I was a little apprehensive about starting this FF, because writing one shots is much easiar because you just write one and are done with it ! But FF takes a lot a time, as you a whole story to unfold !! Am a little nervous, hope the rest of the chapters turn out well !! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

ahem! ahem! so this FF is super duper nice.......sammy's always talking abt gunji................so sweet.......and sheena thinking sajan more than fr&s is so awesome..... I hope show main bhi she is gud and not twin dia....
Love Adya!

Awww !!😳😳😳 Thank u !!! I wrote this chapter a two days ago and i know the SS date would be coming up, so didn't elaborate much on it ! My motive behind starting with the SS date was only to plant sum questions in Sheena's mind !! 😊
Btw I'm Naveen ! And u are ?? 😊
Edited by xaviara - 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: disco_diva

wow this is the best ff loved it add me to your pm list 😃 and countinue soon

-amna

Thanks amna !!! I will defonitely addu you to my PM list and would update soon !!!

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