Written Update~~19th May(Dush changes riddle)

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Part :- 1

RS & Mrityunjay discussing about their evil plan while walking but Dushyant on seeing Shakuntala goes after her at meantime without hearing them. In Garden Shakuntala notices Gauri who was crying. Gauri was happily shocked to know that Shakuntala is with her. Shakuntala consoles her & as they discussing about Veer, Dushyant comes there on which scares both of them. (Detailed conversation……….)

Shakuntala :- I got the reason for your tears. You can trust me. I met Senapati Veer. I can understand what you both are feeling but have patience & be bold as everything will be alright. Senapati Veer has promised that he will win her in Swayamvar.

Gauri hugs Shakuntala emotionally.

Shakuntala:- But m upset with you on one thing….

Gauri while crying :- Which one?

Shakuntala :- Why did u say to Senapati Veer that If you will not be married to him then you will suicide.

Gauri while crying :- What would I do Shakuntala? I can even think to marry any one else other than Veer.

Shakuntala :- Have u told about this to Prince Dushyant?

Gauri :- How could I told him as Brother thinks that relations should be made only with same status. If he'll come to know about that his sister wants to marry an ordinary man then don't know what he will do. For him custom & values of royal family are much important than Love. He can sacrifice Love for his royal proud whether it's his love or mine.Bro should never come to know about Veer & Me.

Shakuntala feels hurt after hearing all this but controls herself & consoles Gauri by saying….

Shakuntala :- Alright! But you hv to promise me that you'll never think about suicide. Surely a way will come out.

Suddenly Dushyant enters on which both girls gets panic.

Dushyant :- Which way?

He comes near to them & again ask the same quest. While Gauri & Shakuntala tries to be normal in front of him.

Dushyant :- About which way you both were talking? Let me know too….

Gauri while stummering :- Actually We both were just recalling old days.

Dushyant :- Even me too remember those days…how we enjoyed & played together.

Dushyant while saying this staring Shakuntala lovingly…Shakuntala feels awkward so she excuses herself by saying that it's too late now and she has to leave now…Dushyant feels bad & his expression changes. Shakuntala touches Gauri's chin lovingly & tells her to take care of herself. Gauri nods.Shakuntala leaves while Dushyant looks her leaving with hurtful expressions & gives a (plz don't go) look. Gauri tells Dushyant that let's go as she is feeling tired…Dushyant agrees & tells that definitely as she will not get any chance to rest tomorrow. Gauri feels sad on this.

At night Both Gauri & Veer doesn't feel sleep & gets restless. Gauri while holding Poison bottle thinks to herself that she trusts Veer but if tomorrow her luck will not help her then she herself write her luck.

In morning everybody is busy in preparations. All princes comes & takes their place. Gauri & her parents too come. Dushyant & Shakuntala lovingly looks at Gauri. Dushyant greets King Puru while seeking his blessing regarding his responsibility of Gauri's Swayamvar.

Dushyant :- As You have given a big responsibility of finding suitable match for Gauri, Plz Bless me Father so that I could fulfill this responsibility very well. I'll choose a groom for Gauri who can love her more than anyone else, who will always let her happy & who will always protect her……

Gauri & Shakuntala feels uneasy while King Puru Blesses Dushyant happily.


Part -2 :-

Dushyant announces the start of Swayamvar. Gauri takes Shakuntala at corner & asks about Veer.

Gauri :- Where is Veer? You said that He will come & let me take with him.

Shakuntala :- You just don't hv to worry Gauri! Senapati will be somehere only…I'll go & look for him.

Shakuntala leaves a nervous Gauri…while Kalkie in background witnesses all their conversation. Dushyant tells about Competition rules to everyone. Mrityunjay feels confident on hearing that in 1st round everyone will hv to answer of a question. But Mrityunjay gets confused on hearing a different question beyond his expectations. Dushyant asks " What is that thing which is more precious than any treasure in the whole world"? & further tells everyone to write their replies on the leaf provided them. Mrityunjay looks confused & gives a (what to do now) look…Kalkie secretly calls Mrityunjay & informed him about Veer- Gauri relation. Firstly Mrityunjay doesn't believe but after he decides to tells about this to King but Kalkie stops him by saying that with doing this a new scenario will create & this swayamvar will be cancelled which will not proved to be good for them. Kalkie gives an idea to enquire about Dushyant's new riddle from Shakuntala as only she can think like Dusyant. She tells Mrityunjay to go & act as if he was thinking & the rest she will manage. Both leaves in different directions. As Mrityunjay returns to his seat Dushyant stops him by saying that it's against the rules to leave your place before task's ending. Mrityunjay nervously apologise & gives excuses that he just went to drink water. Dushyant leaves him.Dushyant carefully examines everyone.

Kalkie Stops Shakuntala & asks where she is going to leave Swyamavar. Shakuntala hesitates but Kalkie tells her that she knows that she is going in search of Veer as Both Gauri & Veer loves each other, Which makes Shakuntala shocked & surprised. Kalkie starts her fake concern that she too wants to unite two lovers as she can't bear pain of loves. Shakuntala feels weird. Kalkie dramatically tells Shakuntala that she will give Dushyant's reply on a leaf on behalf of Veer but all she need the right answer & in that shw needs her help. Shakuntala denies by saying that It'll be a fraud if they would something like that. If there is a true love b/w Veer & Gauri then no-one can change their destiny. This made Kalkie irritated & furious. She again tried to convince Shakuntala but Shakuntala refuses by saying that Love is unbeatable & priceless than anything in world so Veer-Gauri will definitely find their way without any cheating.

Kalkie becames happy on hearing Shakuntala's wording coz she got her reply by her words. She again confirm about that with Shakuntala. Shakuntala confirms her wording with more lecture on love unknowingly & without noticing Kalkie's real intentions. Kalkie leaves happily by saying that she is right & Veer will definitely get Gauri by his love's strength. Shakuntala seems to be confused on her behavior.


Part :- 3

Kalkie writes the reply"Love" on a leaf & hide it in plates cover. She orders a servant to give it to Mrityunjay. Kalkie signals Mrityunjay about her deed. Mrityunjay understands her. But as the servant goes towards him, he was blocked by Dushyant who asks him where he is going as it's against the rules. Kalkie & Mrityunjay panics. Servant tells that he was giving water to Mrityunjay. Dushyant leaves him by saying alright. Servant gives the plate to Mrityunjay & he takes it. He secretly takes out that leaf & smirks on getting answer.


Part :- 4

Gauri enquires about Veer, on which Shakuntala tells to have faith on Veer & he will definitely come. Veer is shown walking towards the Swayamvar hall with a confident look.



Preview :- Dushyant tying something by looking upwards without knowing that Shakuntala standing downwards to him. Assuming her as Prince Arrnav he starts talking about Shakuntala 😛😛which made her confused & mixed feeling on hearing his words for her.😛😛

Dushyant :- Are all girls are same?😛 Let's take Shakuntala as example, What she does & what she thinks, I never understand.😆 At one time she talks sweetly on the other moment she gv upset look(ruthi huyi nazar). If you obey my advice then never love any girl, as initially all seems to be very nice but later there is only pain a lot.

Shakuntala lowers her eyes on hearing this sadly.



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thankyou so much mano for all your time and effort. Your updates are absolutely
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wonderful update mona thanks alot...
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Originally posted by: ginac

Thankyou so much mano for all your time and effort. Your updates are absolutely

fantastic. I look forward to reading them everyday.THANKYOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




Thanx for appreciation....It's feel good when our hard work gets appreciation....i'll try my level best to mke my updates more lively....Thanx a lot once again...😊

One more thing M Mona not Mano
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@ Saher :- So nice of you Sweety...
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Thanks Alot Mona like always you have written the update very well

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Thanks a lot dear. It was written nicely. i was waiting for this since yesterday. i 'm non-hindi speaker and ur updates really halping me to understand what's really going on. Thanks you for your effort and time.
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