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This is my first FF. Ive never read an FF in my life so if u find faults please forgive me and give suggestions please.
Part 1: Atul Mujhe Pagal Kar Dega (Atul will make me mad)
Time: 7:30 PM. Location: Locker Room. Characters: Riddhima (r) and Anjali (an) beside their respective lockers. Actions: R looking into a pink colored file, An checking her phone messages.
An – (phone in hand) yeh Atul mujhe pagal kar dega
R smiles.
An – seriously… subah se mila nahi aur lunch time par cafeteria mein mila bhi to bina lunch kiye chala gaya aur abhi mere phone pe message karta hai ki chhat par ao… (expression shock)
R – shayad use aapse kuch kehna hoga di
An – kehne ke liye aur bahut sari jagah hai ridzi, aur chhat par to koi jata bhi nahi…
R looks embarrassed remembering every time she romanced with Armaan on the terrace.
R – acha di main ghar ja rahi huun
An – itni jaldi? Meri duty aadhe ghante mein khatm ho jayegi phir ek saath challenge
R – oh wo…. (hesitating)… wo Ma ne kaha tha jaldi ghar aane ke liye… aaj karwa chauth hai na?
An – haan mujhe pata hai ki aaj karwa chauth hai… Atul mujhe do din se yahi keh raha hai! Par tu itni jaldi mein kyun hai? Kahin tune bhi?
R – nahi di… main kaise??
An – ok… to ruk ja
Just then her phone starts ringing, it's Armaan's … An looks at her curiously
R – wo wo… ma phone kar rahi hai… mujhe jana hoga
An – ok… meet u at home…
R – bye di
R leaves the locker. An shakes her head and goes back to looking into her locker. Just then finds an extra stethoscope in her locker.
An – extra steth? … Atul!!… (expression exasperation)
Time: 7.40 PM. Location: Corridor. Characters: Anjali (an) and a few nurses, ward boys and doctors passing by trying to finish their last minute works before going home and some coming in for night suty. Actions: An running frantically, almost colliding with a ward boy but not even saying anything. Just stopping a nurse who was passing by with a tray in hand.
An – nurse aapne Dr. Atul ko kahin dekha hai?
Nurse shakes her head. She goes.
An is confused…
An – kahin wo sach much terrace pe to nahi?
Time: 7.45 PM. Location: Terrace. Characters: Anjali (An) and Atul (At). But cannot be seen now. Terrace seems empty. Actions: An enters through the door and looks around.
An – Atul???!! (shouting)
Goes to the other side to look for him.
Atul sitting on a brick, looking up in the sky where the moon hasn't risen yet… singing "intehaan ho gayi intezaar ki, aayi na kuch khabar meri anjali ki, yeh hame hai yakeen, bewafa wo nahi, phir wajah kya hui?..."
At looks in the side seeing An looking at him in livid expression. Cut to: The moon just rises then, but At doesn't notice it. At gets up.
An – tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? Aur tumne apna stethoscope mere locker mein kyun choda tha? (pulling out the steth and showing him)
At – tumhe pata tha yeh mera steth hai anjali? How sweet! (smiles)
An – whatever… yeh lo… (handing him the steth)
An turns to go.
At – tum kahan ja rahi ho?
An – (turning back) meri duty hai aur duty khatam hone ke baad ghar jana hai… kyun? Tumhe koi problem hai? (sarcastic smile on her face)
At – nahi
An turns again
At – anjali…
An – (turning back) phir…. Matt bulana (expression furious)
At – (fearfully) ok…. Par mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha
An – kyun? Sanjeevani mein kya sirf yeh terrace hai jahaan tum kuch kahoge? Kahin aur kya zabaan nahi chalti hai kya?
At – chalti hai na … sirf tumhare saamne nahi chalti (blushing and looking down)
An looks like she would blast now!
At – ok ok… main sirf tumhara 1 min loonga
Looks into his watch
At – time starts now… Anjali maine subah se kuch nahi khaya hai
An – kisine mana kiya tha kya?
At – nahi… mana to kisine nahi kiya
An turns again
At – aaj karwa chauth hai na.. to isliye maine vrat kiya tumhare liye (he says this very fast and closes his eyes really tightly to accept even a slap from an now!)
An expression turns from disgust to surprise to a touched expression and then she turns back with an expression where she pretends to be angry (but she's not really angry)
An – maine tumhe kabhi nahi kaha mere liye yeh sab karne ko… tum kabhi apne haddh mein nahi rehoge kya Atul?!
At – I'm sorry … par ab to maine rakh liya… ab to mujhe bahut bhuukh lagi hai…
An – very good… ab tum canteen mein jaake kuch khao nahi to main stretcher nahi bulane wali jab tum behosh ho jaoge to!
They go to the door which is closed.
An (tugging at the latch) – yeh darwaze ko kya ho gaya…
At – mujhe dekhne do
He tugs too
At – shayad attak to nahi gaya?
An – you wish…
Moving forward and banging on the door
An – darwaza kholo
At – calm down anjali, daro matt … main huun na!
An – mujhe darr nahi lag raha…
Part 1: Atul Mujhe Pagal Kar Dega (Atul will make me mad)
Time: 7:30 PM. Location: Locker Room. Characters: Riddhima (r) and Anjali (an) beside their respective lockers. Actions: R looking into a pink colored file, An checking her phone messages.
An – (phone in hand) yeh Atul mujhe pagal kar dega
R smiles.
An – seriously… subah se mila nahi aur lunch time par cafeteria mein mila bhi to bina lunch kiye chala gaya aur abhi mere phone pe message karta hai ki chhat par ao… (expression shock)
R – shayad use aapse kuch kehna hoga di
An – kehne ke liye aur bahut sari jagah hai ridzi, aur chhat par to koi jata bhi nahi…
R looks embarrassed remembering every time she romanced with Armaan on the terrace.
R – acha di main ghar ja rahi huun
An – itni jaldi? Meri duty aadhe ghante mein khatm ho jayegi phir ek saath challenge
R – oh wo…. (hesitating)… wo Ma ne kaha tha jaldi ghar aane ke liye… aaj karwa chauth hai na?
An – haan mujhe pata hai ki aaj karwa chauth hai… Atul mujhe do din se yahi keh raha hai! Par tu itni jaldi mein kyun hai? Kahin tune bhi?
R – nahi di… main kaise??
An – ok… to ruk ja
Just then her phone starts ringing, it's Armaan's … An looks at her curiously
R – wo wo… ma phone kar rahi hai… mujhe jana hoga
An – ok… meet u at home…
R – bye di
R leaves the locker. An shakes her head and goes back to looking into her locker. Just then finds an extra stethoscope in her locker.
An – extra steth? … Atul!!… (expression exasperation)
Time: 7.40 PM. Location: Corridor. Characters: Anjali (an) and a few nurses, ward boys and doctors passing by trying to finish their last minute works before going home and some coming in for night suty. Actions: An running frantically, almost colliding with a ward boy but not even saying anything. Just stopping a nurse who was passing by with a tray in hand.
An – nurse aapne Dr. Atul ko kahin dekha hai?
Nurse shakes her head. She goes.
An is confused…
An – kahin wo sach much terrace pe to nahi?
Time: 7.45 PM. Location: Terrace. Characters: Anjali (An) and Atul (At). But cannot be seen now. Terrace seems empty. Actions: An enters through the door and looks around.
An – Atul???!! (shouting)
Goes to the other side to look for him.
Atul sitting on a brick, looking up in the sky where the moon hasn't risen yet… singing "intehaan ho gayi intezaar ki, aayi na kuch khabar meri anjali ki, yeh hame hai yakeen, bewafa wo nahi, phir wajah kya hui?..."
At looks in the side seeing An looking at him in livid expression. Cut to: The moon just rises then, but At doesn't notice it. At gets up.
An – tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? Aur tumne apna stethoscope mere locker mein kyun choda tha? (pulling out the steth and showing him)
At – tumhe pata tha yeh mera steth hai anjali? How sweet! (smiles)
An – whatever… yeh lo… (handing him the steth)
An turns to go.
At – tum kahan ja rahi ho?
An – (turning back) meri duty hai aur duty khatam hone ke baad ghar jana hai… kyun? Tumhe koi problem hai? (sarcastic smile on her face)
At – nahi
An turns again
At – anjali…
An – (turning back) phir…. Matt bulana (expression furious)
At – (fearfully) ok…. Par mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha
An – kyun? Sanjeevani mein kya sirf yeh terrace hai jahaan tum kuch kahoge? Kahin aur kya zabaan nahi chalti hai kya?
At – chalti hai na … sirf tumhare saamne nahi chalti (blushing and looking down)
An looks like she would blast now!
At – ok ok… main sirf tumhara 1 min loonga
Looks into his watch
At – time starts now… Anjali maine subah se kuch nahi khaya hai
An – kisine mana kiya tha kya?
At – nahi… mana to kisine nahi kiya
An turns again
At – aaj karwa chauth hai na.. to isliye maine vrat kiya tumhare liye (he says this very fast and closes his eyes really tightly to accept even a slap from an now!)
An expression turns from disgust to surprise to a touched expression and then she turns back with an expression where she pretends to be angry (but she's not really angry)
An – maine tumhe kabhi nahi kaha mere liye yeh sab karne ko… tum kabhi apne haddh mein nahi rehoge kya Atul?!
At – I'm sorry … par ab to maine rakh liya… ab to mujhe bahut bhuukh lagi hai…
An – very good… ab tum canteen mein jaake kuch khao nahi to main stretcher nahi bulane wali jab tum behosh ho jaoge to!
They go to the door which is closed.
An (tugging at the latch) – yeh darwaze ko kya ho gaya…
At – mujhe dekhne do
He tugs too
At – shayad attak to nahi gaya?
An – you wish…
Moving forward and banging on the door
An – darwaza kholo
At – calm down anjali, daro matt … main huun na!
An – mujhe darr nahi lag raha…
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