||Paas Aaya Kyon|| (Meet Song Fic 2nd Part Pg. 3)

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Maheen

@sweet_gurl93

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

awwww.......luved the scene, totally touched my heart lol

*sigh*, so r u going to continue it?

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93
awwww.......luved the scene, totally touched my heart lol

*sigh*, so r u going to continue it?

Thank you so much hun! 😳 Nope---no continuation, but I'll defintiely try to add some Meet in my other fics! 😳

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
Meera, that was prefect! I'll come back with a longer comment.

*edited*

I love Meher's annoyance in the beginning, very justified, and Preet using Tannu as an excuse. They both just want to be together, but both are under a misconception. And Preet has no idea he's hurting his wife by pulling away.

I love, love, love the way she doesn't allow him to say anything, wanting to get everything off her chest, so that she doesn't lose nerve. It was all realistically done. And that hug, oh that hug. (need I say more?)

Love,

Radz

Thank you so much Radz! 😃😳 Really....any comments coming from you and Bhav about Meet are like super special because no one writes Meet like you guys!😳😳😳 But I'm glad you liked the beginning, I had to think of something that would help work with that new song! 😳😛 But ahhh I'm glad you liked Meher being our super girl there! 😃 (I've never EVER written a girl confession before)😆 But yes...nothing needs to be said about the hug!😆 If only we;d see a real one!😳

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urworstnitemare

@urworstnitemare

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

*grumbe grumble..stupid Preet!!! grr...Meher loves him and its so obvious too!!! Preet is sweet though nah? trying to be like prem...that was so adorable!! well i'm thinking i shouldn't leave such long comments lol..and going off to read the funny one..lol..these were waaayy to depressing for me..but i loved them all..how wierd am i? lol .

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: urworstnitemare
*grumbe grumble..stupid Preet!!! grr...Meher loves him and its so obvious too!!! Preet is sweet though nah? trying to be like prem...that was so adorable!! well i'm thinking i shouldn't leave such long comments lol..and going off to read the funny one..lol..these were waaayy to depressing for me..but i loved them all..how wierd am i? lol .

I know na? 😛 I liked that they had some tension here! 😃 I love long comments! 😃 And ahh I'm glad you liked them though! 😳