MERA SAFAR MRD K SUNG

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dinky_05

@dinky_05

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hello friends

inspired from bonai.... i hv written few lines.......this is my first attempt

......plz bear with me.

Remote ke buttons dabate dabate ruk gai meri ungliyaan,

jab pehali bar TV pe maine dekhi MRD ki jhalkiyaan.

Meri aankhe khuli ki khuli reh gayi pata nahi kaise,

jab us handsome se ladke ne hatai naqab ladki k chehare se.

Kuch sawal the un sharbati aankhon mein,

jinka samna kar rahi thi vo ladki haatho mei mashal liye.

Ladki ki aankhon mei junoon tha aur ladke mei hairaani,

apni nazare main screen se hata nahi pai mujhe ho rahi thi bechaini.

Tab se shuru hua mera MRD dekhne ka silsila,

chaha tha maine ki kabhi khatam na ho yea kafila.

Par afsos ki srif chhae mahino ka tha ye safar,

dili tamanna hai meri ki colors ko karni pare iske liye suffer.

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@sami01

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Posted: 16 years ago

very very nice dinky is ka detail comment i will do kal when am less busy , i loged in to see forum for 2 misn saw ur poem its awsome will come back take care

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Bonai

@Bonai

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Posted: 16 years ago

kono katha habe na just fatafati .....👏, bapyak hoyeche.
I m honoured that u r inspired by my poem. We r talking about the show aur tumne to trailer tak ki yaad dila di. nice 1st try dear. u bring back the old memories very well.
keep it up. wait to see some more.

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sasha722

@sasha722

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Posted: 16 years ago

dinky this is due to Deepti B in beginning
it was her storyline which showed the Best pair outcome
But as Sphere Orgin took they spoil t it & the result we hvew seen
God knows why she handed over them such a Good Project
I am 100% sure this would hve number 1

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dinky_05

@dinky_05

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Bonai
kono katha habe na just fatafati .....👏, bapyak hoyeche.
I m honoured that u r inspired by my poem. We r talking about the show aur tumne to trailer tak ki yaad dila di. nice 1st try dear. u bring back the old memories very well.
keep it up. wait to see some more.

Arre bonai tomar bhalo legechhe ......khub khushi holam😊

I'm glad you liked it.

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dinky_05

@dinky_05

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sami01
very very nice dinky is ka detail comment i will do kal when am less busy , i loged in to see forum for 2 misn saw ur poem its awsome will come back take care

Thanx ji......will wait for ur detail comment.

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dinky_05

@dinky_05

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sasha722
dinky this is due to Deepti B in beginning
it was her storyline which showed the Best pair outcome
But as Sphere Orgin took they spoil t it & the result we hvew seen
God knows why she handed over them such a Good Project
I am 100% sure this would hve number 1

Completely agree with u...............just hope n pray that soon we will get to see both of them together in some good show like MRD.

Btw u hvn't mentioned dear that.........whether u liked my post or not......

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Ranjna Narang Monga

@ranjnanarang

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Posted: 16 years ago

Wow Dinky very well written and how true actually I also started watching MRD like that. I wished that Deepti B would continued with it.

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namita25

@namita25

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Posted: 16 years ago

dinky kya khoob likha hai aapne.......👏👏
we all had wanted MRD to continue................
we hardly got time to enjoy it and it is only coz of that idiotic channel..........
and you are right dear..............colors channel ought to suffer for their stupidity....................😡😡