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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guyz!! Dis is a poem i think gunjan wud feel like after d rose day(i.e. gettin' 2 know dat samrat is only her friend). Let me know how it is.(Its my own creation):

When you first came into my life,

I felt like the brightest star;

Happiness pouring into my pocket,

My sorrows left quite far.

Even if you simply smiled at me,

It made my day;

My face as red as a cherry,

There was nothing left to say.

You entered my dreams every single day,

Comforting me all the time;

And then I'd here a sweet sound,

The ringing of a melodious chime.

You were a part of my heart,

It wont let you go;

But how do I approach you?

I wanted to let you know.

Then, you just walked out of my life,

Without a single word;

Everything left me all of a sudden,

Making me feel really absurd.

I tried to forget about you,

But nothing worked;

Everywhere I went,

Behind me, your memories always lurked.

As I knew before,

My love for you was always true;

That's why I cant let go of your memory,

I really really miss you!!!

Even though you're not here,

Not close to me now;

I always have the felling;

That you're near me somehow.

Even today, I mourn,

I shed every tear,

In the mere hope that you will come;

Hold my hand and stand near!😭😭

PLEASE COME BACK

I MISS YOU!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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good 1 babez.....wen r u updating ur ff????
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awesome yaar just loved it plz come up with more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
luv ya
hema
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wow....a very touching poem...keep it up👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh ! its great yaa :)

piya.
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Awesum poem dear😊,just loved it totally,so touching,great job👏,keep up the good work👍🏼 and please keep writing more😛.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Gr8 Job yaar
It's really touching.....
Yep it does fit Gunjan's present situation very well
Love
Tina
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wonderful poem......it was very touching!!
plzzz write some more poems......u write brilliantly!

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