SS: Rain, Love..and a Little Fate Pt3 4/13 Pg4

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Shamu (my brother calls me that)

@sweet_gurl61

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

That was very sweet. I loved this story. Everything in this story was linked well. I loved all the characters, even Meera. If she didn't do something bad, we wouldn't have Jai yelling at her and I jsut love when Jai yells. The ending was very cute with Jai saying he loves the rain. I enjoyed this story a lot.

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diana

@hooman

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

great story...so sweet and romantic

do write more stories like this...

nadia

p.s. dont forget to update angel as well..

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

hey harvs

that was a bueatiful story

read it in one

goo

such a buetiful co-incidence

mixed with fate

me toh just loved it

thanx dear

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Kashish

@..kashish..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

hai that was so good!..wow....thank god that jai gave it back to meera..she deserved it!...heheh...jai sneaking upto her room to meet bani..and getting caught by saali ji and saasu ma...hehehe...

loved the whole story from start to finish! pls pls write more!..hehe

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jinal

@jinzcool

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

hey that was reaaly a gr8 part

the balcony scene was very nice

was reaaly nice to read this story

i wanted it not end

really loved it

can u plz right an epi

plzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Abhilasha Sharma

@abhilashasharma

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

wow... that was so sweet, cute, romantic, mushy story.... popeye and u have done a great job... claps for u...

both the character are fresh and refreshing... the main point being all the characters positive,,, except of course meera... i dont mind her u see... 😆

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Indian_Goddess

@Indian_Goddess

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Harvs, this story is just too cute for words!!! I simply loved it! JB are just too adorable. The ending was way too sweet. 😳 I'm so glad that Rano and Adi collaborated in order to bring them together again. Meera made me so angry! I could have just killed her! 😡 But I'm glad Jai gave her a nice reality check 😉 Wonderful story. I enjoyed it while it lasted. Hopefully you'll write another story real soon. 😃

Love,
Dil

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Pooja_fren

@Pooja_fren

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

hey,

i missed second prt but its wow

i really liked whn u said jai said some choice wrds, that was funny

the lst scene was really cute

thanksssssssssssssss n happy married life to popeye

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tropa

@moonlitnight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

oh my!
Harvsy i simply LOVED it
cant say more
perfect mush perfect dumbness perfect confession and perfect ending!
for such a lovely SS

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Shreshta

@ducky_euro

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Posted: 16 years ago

#40

wow this ss was just fantastic. as if i were in a dream. everything was justt soo perfect *sight* And a little lie turned out to be pure love. aww the end was also very cute. and the final line: I love the rain!

well i wont mind to read more of ur stories :), ur a really good writer!

thanq!

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