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Posted: 17 years ago
#11

wow.. never thought of mayank and gunjan.. but hey nice desciption and the way u describe the atmosphere and the feelings.. is awesome... poor gunjan committs suicide........ sad.. but i think u should write more ff's .... i would look forward to reading it.. so u may want to consider that idea..

nice mini ff.. even with sad ending..
-Bijal
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12

Mayank n Gunjan 😲 but i must admit da concept was so very different ....... da way u wrote it was jst awesome 👏

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Gunjan is a strong character though soft and gentle. Love your idea but make Samrat save Gunjan or something na plzzzzzz!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
heyyyy
i m komal.
grat part.
it is difficult 2 digest that gunjan loves mayank.
pls continue soon.
pls pm me if possible.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
U girl..U scared me lolG loves M..haila..yea v koi baat huyi😆
Ro partnner hummare dostana kya kaam thi k tumne aise kar diya🤣

Hehe..ok i was just kidding..I loked ur mini FF very much..I like d way to wrote it..Simply superb 🤗
Love u
piya.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
omg wht on d earth made u get such a idea🤣
but a wonderful effort
loved it!!!!!👏👏
d wrds u used for expressing her feelings was really worth reading
i am so spellbound to see such a gud use of language👍🏼
me proud of u ro!!!!!👏
but why u made her die yaar,me crying😭
u shud hav brought in samrat na?
anyways it was a mini ff,n seriously a beautiful one
i understand tht now u hav a imp year ahead,but once u really become free na tht tyme i wud love u read ur proper ff
mini ff was only so nice,then tht wud be mind blowing only😍
missing u so much🤗🤗🤗
lov ya
sayli
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17

hey ro!!🤗

ur idea of majan cracked me yaar!!🤣

but really appreciate ur idea and d way u potrayed everythng!!👍🏼keep it up!!!

but y did u make gunji suicide🥺

neways cont. d next part yaar!!!will b waitin anxiously yaar!!!!!proud of u!!!😛

missin u loads yaar!!!😭😭😭

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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
HIII!! READ UR PART!!
HEY MAYANK AND GUNJI.....LOL!!
SO DIFFERENT!!
CONT SOON!! TAKE UR TIME!
WANT TO KNOW MORE..
SEE YAA

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