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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Guys...I always wanted to write an FF and show off my writing skills😆😆....but I really don't get much tym with aal of my school work and sig making...so I thought of writing a mini FF of one chapter only. It is a sad FF and a bit unconventional. Hope you all Lyk it
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The wind blew softly,beating a subtle yet persistent tattoo on the surface of Gunjan's pale and glistening skin. She was standing on the edge of the towering cliff and the vast and unending darkness which lay beneath the cliff blinded her with fear and sent shivers down her already numb spine. Her head was reeling with agony, pain and intense turmoil. Her agony was so binding, it clouded her emotions and engulfed her mind into an unknown darkness,eating away every single happy memory and leaving behind all the bitter and painful memories. She winced and cringed as the tumult of pain flooded through her body,covering every inch of her in anguish and despair. she just couldn't hold on to herself anymore. The root of all her anguish was Mayank. Unknowingly and unintentionally, she had fallen for Mayank, the guy who had rescued her from the teasing guys in the library on the first day of college. she had fantasized about him since then and had fallen irrevocaebly in love with him. But, her heart had shattered into millions and billions of shards as she saw her own sister,nupur fall in love with mayank and the fact that Mayank had actually chose Nupur over Gunjan had peirced her heart completely. She had tried to console herself by bringing herself to sacrifice her love for her sister, but the spasm of pain broke into her like a tumultous fountain. She just could not take it anymore. This way she was going to end everything todayShe was ending her life-for he peaceful existence of Mayank and Nupur. She breathed in sharply and shut her eyelids slowly. She braced herself properly and plunged into the vast meadow of darkness. The wind kissed her face and whistled in her ears,her eyes were freezing and she found herself falling...falling into the vast unending space......
I know u guys r gonna kill me aftr reading this...but still comment😆😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Gunjan loves Mayank???😲 What on earth gave you THAT idea to write about??? 😆
Anyways continue on... I like the way you write, and your FF is already interesting by the virtue of it being unpredictablel 😉😆😆
PS. A request yaar, please don't turn Gunjan or Nupur evil...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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no no....
actually...that's the end of the FF....that's y its a mini FF...
gunjan dies in the end...suicides.....that's where the story ends....
n i ws expecting this reaction abt gunjan luving mayank.....it was just to make things unconventional u knw....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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^lol its ok yaar... I'm not pissed off or anything 😆... Just surprised... It is pretty intriguing though I must admit...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow heck of an FF MaJan lol ok the idea is surprising but ur FF is grt i wonder if u go on to write a full fledged FF which wud b soooooooo cool till then i am gonna cherish this one coz its just fantatsic.ur language n the intensity of it is pretty strong.........lol me going all nonsense now...but trust me i luvd ur style..........
thnxxxxxxxx 4 sharing this talent of urs too..wow ur a multitalented one
Luv u,
Raee🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gunjan likes mayank?! and she's committing suicide... becuz of mayank and nupur?! interesting concept nonetheless cont soon plz!!!!👏👏👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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^^^hey it was a short FF n it has ended though i wish RO wud go on to write a full fledged FF.i will wait for tht dya.......😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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*mouth falls open* [dont worry , I've brushed properly....no bad breath 😛]

All right....this was pretty interesting and definitely unconventional ...but all the credit to you for coming up with something totally different! 👍🏼

You've showed off your writing skills to pretty good advantage now 😉 so when are we going to see a full-length FF ? 😍

Looking forward to that....I'm sure it'll be awesome !

Love,Shreya
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Posted: 17 years ago
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dont make gunjan die put samrat for her so she can love one more time
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@Raae-awww thanxx yaar for calling me multitalented!!😆😆 yep....will surely try to write a full-fledged FF once i get tym....but until then i think i will keep on writing short FFs lyk this.
@Shreya-thanxx a lottt for lyking it!! i thought ppl wud throw sandals at me for making gunjan fall in luv with mayank!!!
Thank god that didn't happen!!

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