New FF: Murder Her!: Note: Page 4

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Hi everyone,
This is my second attempt at a FF. My previous was Raffle Ticket.

Murder Her!

Chapter 1

A young man, probably in his mid-20s, was sitting at his mother's bedside in the hospital. He held her hands in his. She had just fallen asleep. He reminisced the past few weeks.

He had thought that his mother was absolutely fine after she recovered from the chicken pox. He was wrong. Several weeks after recovery, his mother got fever and frequent headaches. When it prolonged for more than a week, he finally took her to the hospital. It was there that he got a shock. His mother had been diagnosed with encephalitis, an inflammation of the brain. She would have to stay in the hospital for treatment.

He had missed having his mother around the house. He missed her waking him up in the morning and giving him his orange juice. He missed her tying his tie in the morning because he never learned to do it himself and he was still a bachelor. He missed her scolding him and pestering him about marriage. He missed coming to the breakfast table and smelling the delicious aroma of her cooking. He missed her telling him to take care at work, while she handed him his lunch. He missed coming home to eat dinner with her and afterwards, talk about their day while watching some movie. He wanted her to get well as soon as possible.

It was not easy without her. He struggled to get up by himself in the morning. He never wore his tie to work. He never ate breakfast as he never got up early enough to cook it. He always ate take out for lunch or didn't eat at all. It was only at dinner time that he got a proper meal cooked by himself. Afterwards, he would visit her, feed her and put her to sleep, after which he would go home because the doctors didn't want him spending the night there.

He got up to leave when he noticed his mother's doctor at the doorway. Meera Singhania came from an affluent family. She was an excellent doctor, one of the best, and he had managed to get hold of her by using the money he had been saving to buy a motorbike. It was the least he could do for his ailing mother.

Meera ? Follow me. I have something to discuss with you.

He followed Meera to her office. She sat on the leather chair behind her desk and offered him one of the seats in front of the desk. He took the seat.

Meera ? Mr. Walia, I know that you are middle class. You have probably struggled to get this money to cure your mother or you have sacrificed something. Now listen, I know a way out. I can take care of your mother for free if you just do one thing for me. You must kill my little sister.

Mr. Walia ? Excuse me, Dr. Singhania, I am not struggling so much financially that I will kill someone to get an easy way out. I prefer to work and use my hard earned money to cure my mother. I reject your offer.

Meera expected this answer from him. She had researched on him thoroughly.

Jai Ram Walia. 25 years old. He had been working at her father's hotel for 7 years now. He had worked his way up. He started off as a mere waiter while he was still going to college. When he got his MBA at 23, he applied for assistant manager. Eventually, he became the manager. Her father appreciated the boy. He took care of the hotel all too well and was a very honest person, being a man of principles and values. But today, Meera would bring him down. She stopped him as he was about to leave from her office.

Meera ? Now Mr. Walia, I wouldn't leave so fast if I were you.

Jai sat down resignedly.

Meera ? That's good. Would you like anything to drink?

Jai ? No, thank you, Dr. Singhania.

Meera ? Now, I was kind of expecting you to decline my offer.

Jai ? Then why ask?

Meera ? Just to make sure.

Jai ? Well, you got my answer. Can I leave?

Meera ? What's the hurry?

Jai ? I have to leave for work early in the morning.

Meera ? That's if you still have the job, Mr. Walia.

Jai ? What do you mean?

Meera ? Well, Mr. Walia, you have just declined my offer. My father owns that hotel. I don't know. I may just influence his mind against you and have you fired.

Jai ? You wouldn't?

Meera ? Try me. And if I can't get you fired, then there is your mother who is under my care. I might just give her an overdose of the medicine.

Jai (standing up) ? Don't you dare!

Meera ? Sit down Mr. Walia!

Jai sat down with a menacing look on his face.

Meera ? Have you changed your mind?

Jai ? I need to think about it.

Meera ? Go home then. You can tell me tomorrow night. Good night Mr. Walia.

Jai did not reply. He got up and left quietly, already in a pensive mood. When Jai got home that night, he just sat in his bed, resting his head on the headboard. He sat like that until three in the morning, when he finally made his decision.

Positivc and negative comments welcome. Please do comment. I would like to know if I should continue or just scrap the idea.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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that great star I'm guessing the person who he supsed kill is bani
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a great start
so wat is going to happen later
cont soonnnnnnnnnn
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gr88 start dear
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Interesting...i guess hes going to fall in love with bani on his way to kill her? Great start👏 do cont. soon would love to read more
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great start....
is he suppose to kill bani??
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wow nice beginning. 👏plz continue.
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very very intriguing.. is it Bani, who Jai is supposed to murder?? plss posst next part soon...

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Thanks for all the wonderful comments. Keep them coming. They motivate me.
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Chapter 2

Jai overslept the next morning and reached to work fifteen minutes late. Jai wished for the day to go slow so that he didn't have to see that conniving doctor. But, time waits on no man.

He soon found himself walking to the hospital. He was lost in his thoughts and bumped into a girl. They fell down and he landed on top of her. Upon falling down, his eyes met hers and he couldn't stop staring.

Girl – Hey, will you stop staring into my eyes and get up?

Jai (embarrassed, getting up) – I'm sorry.

Girl – Next time, watch where you're going.

Jai made a quick survey of the girl in front of him. She was sure beautiful. She had waist-length, black hair. The features of her oval-shaped face were perfect. She had a gorgeous pair of green eyes, an aristocratic nose and luscious, pink lips. She was wearing a tight-fitting jeans and shirt which displayed her curvaceous model's body. She sported Gucci accessories. Jai guessed she was from a rich family.

The girl watched this guy stare at her. She knew that she turned a lot of heads. She had caught several guys staring at her and had given them all tight slaps, but there was something different about this guy. His stare was not lewd like the other guys. He looked decent. He looked at her as if just admiring her beauty, nothing more.

She couldn't help but admire his handsomeness. He had silky midnight black hair. It looked so cute falling all over his forehead. Then there were the most stunning pair of blue eyes. His nose was straight and he had two sensuously-curved lips. His clothes molded to his skin and she could see his muscular frame. He had broad shoulders. It was just perfect, not overdone like most guys. This was accentuated by his narrow waist, right by his six-pack abs. In short, she knew she was standing in front of a Greek god. She heard his voice.

Jai – I'm sorry once again.

With that, he was gone. She stared at him walking away. She had this feeling to meet him again. She shook her head and walked away.

When Jai reached the hospital, he fed his mother and put her to sleep after they talked about each other's day. It was time. He walked to Meera's office and rapped.

Meera – Come in.

He cringed when he heard that voice. How can someone who he thought was so nice turn out so evil? She wanted to kill her own little sister. Shame! He turned the doorknob and walked in. Meera was on her chair behind the desk.

Meera – Oh yes, Mr. Walia, please come in and lock the door. We don't want others barging in and hearing our conversation.

Jai locked the door and took the seat he had taken the previous night. Meera smiled at him.

Meera – Out with it! What have you decided?

Jai – I will do your job.

Meera – Good, now that's the answer I want to hear. First thing's first. You must know who your victim is. Here is a picture.

Meera took out a picture from her draw and gave it to Jai. Jai couldn't believe his eyes. It was the same girl who he had bumped into. She looked even more beautiful in the picture, wearing a pink salwar kameez. Pink was definitely her color.

Jai – Do you mind me asking why you want to kill your little sister?

Meera looked at Jai for a while, as if contemplating to answer. She finally decided to answer him.

Meera – Her name is Bani Singhania. She is my biggest enemy. Ever since she came, Papa has given her more attention than me because she's the younger one. She's spoiled rotten. She's the apple of mommy's and daddy's eyes. As we were growing up, she got away with everything while I was blamed for everything. When I decided to study medicine, Papa was not too happy. He wanted me to take over the family business. But, I didn't want to. However, Bani took a liking to business and studied it. She's the GM of Singhania Group of Industries. Now, I hear that Papa is going to give everything to her. That's not fair. All his wealth is mine by right. How can he give her?

Jai – So why exactly do you want her dead?

As far as Jai was concerned, Meera was overreacting in this situation. Isn't this what you call the sibling rivalry? Doesn't it happen in every family where there is a younger kid?

Meera – I am jealous of her. She got the attention I wanted. Don't you understand? I crave for my parents' undivided attention sometimes. Besides, I don't plan to work hard all my life. Dad's money can give me a comfortable lifestyle and I won't have to work that hard.

Jai seriously thought that Meera was a retard. She wanted to kill her younger sibling over cash and attention.

Jai – Why don't you sit and talk to your parents about it? Tell them that you feel left out.

Meera – Listen, you are not going to talk me out of this. I have made my mind. You will kill my sister and that's final.

Jai just sat back and decided to discontinue his argument with Meera. There was no way he would be able to change her mind. He listened carefully as Meera gave him the details.

Jai did exactly as Meera had told him. He scaled over the back fence as quiet as a mouse. He hid in the bushes as the guards passed. It was hard to see him, considering that it was one in the night. When the guards were gone, Jai moved like a puma to Bani's balcony, quietly but fast. Meera had said that Bani's balcony was the only one with flower pots. He climbed up to it by the pipe next to it. Meera had said that she would leave the balcony door open. He slid the glass door open quietly and looked at the bed. Although the place was dark, he could see a womanly figure on the bed. He discerned the Barbie pajamas that she was wearing and he saw her hair all over her pillow as it wasn't tied up. He went next to her bed and towered over her.

Bani was a light sleeper and felt someone hovering over her. She opened her eyes lazily and saw a manly figure in her room. She could not see his face as it was dark. She could figure out that it wasn't one of the men from her house though. She opened her mouth to scream when he covered her mouth with his hand.

Positive and negative comments welcome. I hope I didn't bore you with this part.

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