On Pennu's VM series

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bahat din ho gaye aap sabko nehi kiya paresan

Jheliye kuch shairana comments apne dil ko tham

Dekh ke Pennu ki VM series man me aayi kuch baat

Lafzo se kiya bayyan VMs me dikhaye RK ke jasbaat

Kismat ki mari

Aur kaun Kranti hamari

In VM pehlawala

Kranti ko akele keya khub dikhaya

Akela raj nehi tha jisne kiya sitam

Aur bhi bahat se the Kranti ke jakham

Dukhi aatma

Aur kaun wohi Raj apna

In 2nd Raj ko no kam

Japo rat din Kranti ka naam

Raj ki ek hi thi pareshani

Par usiko bana li dil ki rani

Akele akele dono kuch nehi

Na banegi dono ki koi kahani

Aab dono ko milao

Chatpata 3rd mix banao

Mein chali abhi Mujhe Hai bahat kam

Tab tak aap log bhi karlo thora aram


As the show has end. I thought to write something on the VM. Hope u all will like it as always. Do watch the VM series of Pennu to understand the so called poem of mine. Love u all.
Edited by Bonai - 16 years ago

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chauveen thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice..........i liked it very much
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh!!!! Bonai.. sooo sweet of you dear... this is for your lovely poem..🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Kya Bonai.......kya baat hai....
bada mast likha hai yaar!!!
i was smilin while readin....

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Posted: 16 years ago
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bonai.........you really write very well........
I really liked it a lot.....................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh wa ji wah abhi mujhe jaldi se doosra mix dekhne do phir karenge hum aap se baat ...humein bhi pasand aaya bahut aap ka shayrana andaaz...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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are bonai bada accha likha hai....
maza aya padhne mein...
raj ka hale -byan pad kar too i was smiling.....


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Posted: 16 years ago
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kya mast likha hai yaar ............
mazaa aa gaya........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sorry I meant to post in Pen's thread 😳

Edited by skeptical - 16 years ago

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