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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow really likd it...plz continue soon...lvoed it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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even though i have read all this before lolll i m dying to read it again! continue kar!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sana my mind was damnn right in GL while writing this hun...it was my 'assignment' from our PPV Senior Gurus LOLL but i had to control on my writing as it was being posted on the forum so not everything in my mind was forming into words 🤣 and of course I wont ask u which style..I love u all styles 🤣 @what im posting next... Hmmm lets see LOLL this Ridz bday one I'll have posted all by tonight...Sooo then maybe our Abhimaan one? Or maybe the forum is not ready for that yet? 🤣
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oh yeah, it was your assignemnt na?🤣 how can i forget, man my memory has gone soo bad i only remember certain things 🤣... i can read what your mind wanted you to write 🤣.. afterall Senior Gurujis requested this so why wouldnt it be full on PPV in an innocent way 🤣... this forum has been ready for it for a long time, afterall maybe it was SaNi who corrupted everyones mind even more to what they were 🤣.. btw, why did Armaan make Riddhima change in the guest room and not his room?? *innocently asking* 🤣... im sucha dumbass thinking what happens next when ive read it before... jaldise update karo.. and stop tadpaoing everyone including ME 🤣...
haila... you love me all styles?? what styles are there?? *innocently askng with an angelic smile* 🤣... *hugs* now dont ask what kind of hug im giving too 🤣
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank u guys!! *hugs* Im posting last part now!

Sana...Chalo I guess if I give 18+ rating I can post our Abhimaan one here also sometime! 🤣 🤣 @ why Ridz didnt change in his room..because Riddhima is not me or you 🤣@hug style...batao na, which type?? 🤣

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Riddhima's Birthday

Part 6 (Final Part)

Armaan changed into a pair of jeans, a very dark shade of blue, and a black vest top. After which he made his way back into the living room. Noticing that the fire in the fireplace was going out, he re-lit it and made a mental note of remembering to call an electrician, to sort out the heating, before he moved back. The thought of moving back began to play on his mind and he realised just how much he was enjoying himself living at Riddhima's house with her loving family. Being around Riddhima more often made life feel even better... and even her family had begun to feel as his own. He had never really experienced the comfort of a 'family home' before this and he really enjoyed it. Coming out of his thoughts, he realised that it had been quite a while and Riddhima still hadn't changed... he wondered why girl's always took so long! Then taking advantage of the situation, he had an idea and made a few arrangements with his television set.



Another 10 minutes passed and Riddhima had still not come back from changing. Armaan got slightly worried and called out her name while lightly knocking on the door of the guest room. Riddhima opened the door and Armaan saw her looking stunningly beautiful in the red dress he had gifted her. He was mesmerized by her beauty and couldn't take his eyes off her. Noticing her nervously playing with her own hair, putting it behind her ears, and shyly looking at all places except straight at Armaan, Armaan realised that she was feeling slightly uneasy and unsure wearing the outfit. He stepped really close to her and took her hand in his. Bringing her hand to his chest, he mischievously said, "yeh sab tumhaari galati hai, Dr Riddhima", bringing Riddhima's shy expression to be replaced with one of confusion as she questioningly looked him in the eyes. "Ab aise kyun dekh rahi ho? Apne mareez ki haalat aur bhi bigaadne ka khayal hai?", with which Riddhima began to have an idea of what he was suggesting, and felt her cheeks burning, but bought herself to speak somehow, "kya matlab?"... Still keeping her hand held to his chest, Armaan replied, "kya 'kya matlab?'...Dr Riddhima, aap ek doctor hai, aur aapko yeh bhi nahin pata chal raha ke meri heartbeat kitni irregular hoti jaa rahi hai, aur woh bhi..aap ki wajah se...", he then bought her hand close to his face, brushing it against the stubble on his cheek and bringing it to his lips before finally kissing it, and then continuing, though his mischievious tone was now replaced with a hoarse whisper, "tum bohat khubsurat lag rahi ho...aur bohat sexy bhi". He slowly moved his face closer to hers, his gaze fixed on her lips. Riddhima freed her hand from his and swiftly tried to walk away. Suddenly, she felt his tight grip on her wrists, pulling her back...she stood still, as she felt Armaan walk upto her. She could feel the warmth of his body standing close behind her and soon felt his warm breath by her neck as he softly kissed her neck. Then pulling down the strap on her dress, he kissed her shoulder. Riddhima felt herself melting and her heartbeat was racing fast. Armaan then put Riddhima's hair over her left shoulder and using his finger he traced down her back. Feeling his fingers on her bare back, sent shivers down Riddhima's spine. She then felt Armaan kneel down onto the floor and felt his lips and the tip of his nose against her lower back. She was nervous and slightly lost... She wanted to turn around but the feeling of his breath on her back made her feel as though she was walking on air, and she was sure that no matter how hard she tried, words would not escape her mouth. Armaan then stood up, as Riddhima tried to steady her breathing, and he moved close to her right ear, before kissing it lightly and finally whispering, "kya hua? main to bas tumhaari dress ka tag uthaar raha tha..tum shayad bhool gayi thi", with which he came before her, took her hand and placed the tag in it, before winking at her with the cutest smile on his face, and walking back into the living room. Riddhima stood still for a moment... she was taken aback... she wasn't sure now whether she was still feeling shy or whether she wanted to laugh at herself... All she knew was that she was spending her most perfect birthday with the most perfect guy... and things just couldn't get better... or could they?


As Riddhima walked into the living room, she couldn't see Armaan anywhere. All of a sudden the lights went out and she felt a sudden sense of fear, as she has a phobia of being alone in the dark. She called out Armaan's name nervously and suddenly heard a voice. "I love you Basket...". She looked around and saw that Armaan was standing nowhere around, but the voice was coming from the television. She felt a wave of confusion...and sat on the sofa, watching/listenning. "...I love you so, so, so much. And I really miss you. Kaash tum bhi mere saath Singapore aati. It's a beautiful place but mera koi dil nahin karta yahaan kuch dekhne ko... I just really wish you were here. Yeh sasurji bhi na...okay, okay, main unke baare mein aur kuch nahin kahunga. I don't know main yahaan kya kar raha hoon...talking to my camcorder...shayad main pagal ho gaya hoon ya shayad yehi pyar ke side effects hai (he winked while giving a cheezy smile)...doosre sab interns, jo conference ke liye aaye hai, sab dinner ke liye bahar gaye hai...mera mann nahin kiya to hotel room mein apne camera se baat kar raha hoon. (he laughed) Tumhe phone karne ko bohat mann kar raha hai...aisa lagta hai ke tumhaari awaaz bohat der se nahin suni.. sochta rehta hoon ke phone karu ya na karu... tumhaari awaaz sunne ke baad shayad main yahaan aur na reh paoon aur seeda airport chale jao...aur phir sasurji naraaz ho jaayega.... Tumhaare bina, life bohat boring hai...you really complete me Riddhima. I hope Hitler tumse zyada kaam nahin kara rahi and jingbang tumhaara sir nahin khaa rahe! Miss you...love you... ab to bas tumhaare birthday ka intezaar hai...yeh 2 din kaise katege...pata nahin... (*sighs*) I love you Riddhima (and he blows a kiss)"


By the end of the video, Riddhima had tears flowing down her cheeks. Dimmed lights turn on and Riddhima notices Armaan standing by the patio at the back garden with a smile on his face. She gets up and runs into his arms, holding him tight and never wanting to let him go. Armaan notices she's crying, holds her face in his hands and wipes away her tears with his thumbs, "oye Basket...ro kyun rahi ho? Im sorry.. (he held his ears) mujhe yeh video tumhein nahin dikhaani chahiye thi...tumhaare birthday par bhi maine tumhein rula diya..." Riddhima stops herself from crying, notices tears in Armaan's eyes and blows into his eyes, causing him to close them. She then softly kisses his closed eyelids and speaks, "Armaan, aaj main bohat khush hoon...mere paas lafz nahin hai kehne ko ke tumne mujhe hamesha ki tara, aaj bhi kitni khushi di hai"...she kissed his forehead and then noticed that Armaan had beautifully set up the balcony outside. There were rose petals and candles all over the ground...and a beautifully laid out table with a cake on it. As she absorbed the details of the surrounding, Armaan handed her a single, beautiful red rose and lead her to the table, where he had Riddhima cut the birthday cake. Armaan fed Riddhima some cake and then Riddhima was about to give Armaan some but instead playfully put the cake against his cheek, causing the cream to make a mess. Riddhima giggled as Armaan realised what just happened and suddenly pulled her extremely close to him, holding her arm behind her back..."hmm...ab tumhein kya lagta hai Riddhima...yeh kaun saaf karega?", to which Riddhima hesitantly replied, "tum khudh.." but saw Armaan shaking his head. "Main saaf karu? okay phir mere haath toh chodo na Armaan" she carried on timidly but saw Armaan shaking his head again as he finally spoke, "haath nahin chodunga Basket..par saaf tum hi karogi", he whispered in a deep voice while bringing his forehead against hers, slowly closing his eyes and opening them again. Riddhima understood what he meant and knew she wouldn't get out of it...she tiptoed and kissed the cream off Armaan's cheek...knowing Armaan was looking right at her, she kept her eyes away from making contact with his.


Armaan then let go of Riddhima and reached out for a remote on the table, turning on a romantic piece of instrumental music. He offersed his hand out to Riddhima, for a dance, and she accepted . They danced for a couple of minutes when Armaan whispered 'I love you, Riddhima' in her ears and passionately kissed her earlobe. Riddhima looked at him lovingly but a smile began to play on her lips as she told him to come closer to her, and whipered 'I love you too Armaan', but instead of kissing his ear, she bit it, and then backed away, childishly sticking her tongue out at him and ran into the garden (it had stopped raining by now). She sat on the bench by the poolside and looked up at the stars... it was a beautiful night, the clouds had gone leaving the sky clear only with stars glittering, and the air seemed so fresh, after the rain had finished.


Armaan made his way to the bench and sat next to Riddhima (on the right side). She looked so happy, it gave him a warm feeling inside his heart. Noticing his gaze on her, Riddhima looked at Armaan and smiled, while holding onto his hand. They looked deep into each others eyes and Armaan ran his hand through her hair.. his hands then gently held Riddhima's face, as he leaned in and turned his head slightly. One of Armaan's hands moved down to Riddhima's waist, as the other caressed her cheek. Armaan saw Riddhima softly close her eyes, while she bought her hands towards his neck and let one make it's way into his hair. He approached her smoothly and for the first time, their lips met. At first their lips brushed against each other, then Armaan slowly moved his lips around on Riddhima's. He then smiled and slightly pulled away, though their faces were still very close. Riddhima opened her eyes, looked into Armaan's eyes and felt a shy smile play on her lips as she moved her gaze away for a moment and Armaan gently pulled her towards himself, into a small hug and spoke, "oye hoye basket..sach mein sabar ka fal hamesha itna hi meetha hota hai?", he winked at her, and kissed her forehead before continuing, "I love you Riddhima, I really love you", Riddhima looked up at him, smiled and softly whispered, I love you too Armaan".


Armaan noticed Riddhima shiver slightly and realised she was feeling quite cold in the night air by the pool. "Thand lag rahi hai?", he asked, to which Riddhima nodded and Armaan stood up, offering her his hand, "andar chale?".. as Riddhima took his hand and stood up, Armaan wrapped his arm around her shoulders and she put hers around his waist. As soon as they walked back into the living room, Riddhima went towards the fireplace and sat on the white-coloured fur rug infront of it, with her legs to one side. "Aaj kal sardi kaafi ho gayi hai na Armaan?", Riddhima asked random questions and made small talk about topics such as the weather and Sanjeevani, while trying to warm her hands at the fireplace. Armaan, though, was only half-listening, as he was bowled over by how divine she looked, wearing the elegant red dress, with the deep-cut back, and sitting on the white fur rug... She was heavenly gorgeous and he wanted her so much. He felt overcome by desire as he walked upto her and sat directly behind her. He ran his fingers across her bare back and leaned inwards to kiss her neck, before finally breaking his silence, "Riddhima, you're beautiful.. you're gorgeous... (his voice became deeper gradually, turning into a hoarse whisper) you're hot.. (he moved his fingers down the side of her neck,just behind her ears, tracing down to her shoulder where he pulled down the strap of her dress) you're sexy..." and with this he noticed Riddhima move her face to the side slightly and look back at Armaan, she was breathing heavier, and their eyes locked on one another's. Armaan pulled her back slightly and laid her on the rug, before completing his sentence, "I'm crazy about you Riddhima", before moving ontop of her. He looked into her eyes and traced her lips with the thumb on his left hand, while he moved his right hand slowly down to her leg. Riddhima reached her left hand to his face and pulled him in closer to her. She bought her right arm around his back and once again their lips met. He kissed her just as gently as last time, and this time Riddhima responded with equal passion, so Armaan deepend the kiss by increasing the pressure of his lips against hers. Pulling away after 5 minutes, both felt breathless..Armaan went close to Riddhima's ear whispering 'I love you' and nuzzled her neck, as Riddhima thought about the beautiful kiss they shared and let her fingers play with his hair... The kiss had been soft and warm, and felt perfect. She had never felt so happy or so content, and wished she could be here in Armaan's arms forever. Armaan looked into Riddhima's eyes, giving her a warm smile, and moved from ontop of her. Lying next to her now, he took her hand into his and held it against his chest. They both looked into each others eyes and wanted this moment to last an eternity. "Armaan, mujhe lag raha hai jaise yeh koi sapna hai", Riddhima honestly confessed. Armaan leaned slightly ontop of her and put his finger to her lips and looked straight into her eyes before giving a comforting smile and speaking, "shh Basket..agar yeh koi sapna hai, to main tumhe vaada karta hoon ke aise sapne se main tumhe kabhi jaagne nahin doonga", and with that he slowly got to his feet & helped Riddhima up too. They held each other for a few minutes, in complete silence... before Riddhima saw the time on the clock above the fireplace...it was 3:26am and though she didn't want to break this moment, she knew there wasn't much choice right now as her dad was expected back at home, from night duty, at 5am...kissing him lightly on his chest, she spoke, "Armaan...I think humein vaapas jaana chaahiye...raat kaafi ho gayi hai aur baarish bhi khatam ho gayi" to which Armaan understandingly nodded his head, smiled, managed to allow a positive 'hmm' to escape his mouth and kissed her hair..then breaking away from the hug, took hold of her hand, as they walked back to Riddhima's house.


Armaan knew he had managed to give his Basket a night to remember.. and he hoped that the plans he had for the rest of the day, ran just as smoothly and just as perfectly. Little did Riddhima know that this was only the beginning of what would be not just the most perfect birthday of her life yet, but the most magical and memorable day any girl could dream of.


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okay guys so that's the end of my "Riddhima's Birthday" fanfic! I hope you enjoyed it 😳 Feel free to write your honest comments..... I know it had some bloopers LOL one of my friends already pointed them out to me so *holding ears* sorry if you noticed them tooo... 😆

Contents for all of the RIDDHIMA'S BIRTHDAY Fanfic (I had written in October 2008)
Part 1 - Page 1 - An Introduction
Part 2 - Page 2 -
'Happy Birthday Basket'
Part 3 - Page 3 -
Love Is Understanding
Part 4 - Page 3 -
The Perfect Date
Part 5 - Page 4 -
Armaan's House
Part 6 - Page 5 -
Final Part
Edited by Preeti_285 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sana...Chalo I guess if I give 18+ rating I can post our Abhimaan one here also sometime! 🤣 🤣 @ why Ridz didnt change in his room..because Riddhima is not me or you 🤣@hug style...batao na, which type?? 🤣
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🤣... whatever style you like... i dont mind.. so long as it is only a hug🤣...
maarne ka iraada hai kya?? uuufff, that was perfect!! i loved it, you sent me to the darkest of the darkest side of GL 🤣... i wish Riddhima would give him this kind of mithaai in DMG too... 🤣... hum kitna tadpay hain iss ke liye... and i dont know how much longer we will be tadpaoed for such mithaai ka dubba 🤣....
wow... you sure just a FIRST in your assignment!! cant wait for the next FF... we also made a Vday FF, remember?? post that too 🤣🤣
Edited by *armaania* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
Awesome part
Update the next story soon
Take care
Zoya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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This was the most amazing part Preetz...if there were any bloopers, i didnt find any...i loved it...the ending was FANTASTIC...especially the part where they both lie down on the rug, besides each other....i could SO imagine it...beautiful, thats the only word for it...I want awesome AR scenes now too...just nay that u come up with..!! AR discussing children, in a way thats NOt been written before, would be nice...!! Just a suggestion...!!

Mwaaahz....Kiran

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Posted: 16 years ago
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What??? FF from you sweetheart and we don't know...........😭😭😭...Now, I have to find a time to read all the scenes..........😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow Preeti
The ending was fab, loved it a lot
Hope u continue writing more such scenes in the future
Love Mini
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey preeti,
just loved ur short fic...it was awesome...and u deserve some applause for this cute fic...👏
and well i didnt find any bloopers in ur fic...
i really hope u are writing more such moments...
and if you are, pls do continue sooonnn.......

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