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Posted: 16 years ago
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friends this was love letter written by raj to kranti

i did it fro poetic aka rachna
i thought will share it with u too
pehli lines blurry hain but main poem is readable so please freinds go ahead and see there is some romance too in me 😉😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow Sam, this love letter is awesome.

The deep meaning of the words used and their profound impact has made my heart go aflutter.

Thanks for posting it here. 🤗


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sammy,
Some of your Urdu poems are out of this world. One request, the font is tiny and I find it difficult to read white lettering on coloured background. Kya karoon ankhen kamzor ho gayee hai.......
Can you reproduce it here? Just the words with a large font? Please?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Dear Skep,
I have taken the liberty to post the lines over here.
I agree with you, these Urdu poems are just too good.
Regards
Poet
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Dear Kranti

Apne dil ki baat bus kalam ki zubaani

Bhej raha hoon tumhare paas …

Kaash tum samajh jao.

Aansoo toh nahin hain ankhon mein

Pehlu mein magar dil jalta hai

Hothon pe lahu hai hasrat ka

Aasra se jigar pe chalta hai

Ae dard-e-jigar yeh baat hai kya

Yeh ankhri apni raat hai kya …

Hoti hain kasak har dhadkan mein

Har saans mein khanjar chalta hai

Dil jalta hai

Hum har gaye aise gham se

Dekha hi nahi jata humse

Jalta hai patanga koi aur …

Shama ka aansoo dhalta hai …

Dil jalta hai

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow..really beautiful Sami...
n thanks Poet for posting it here.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wish the serial was on
App ki Shayiri
hai lajavab
Dil jalta Hai
Har Saans mein khanjar Chalta Hai
( especially 4 Kranti )
Wait 4 more
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Posted: 16 years ago
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you know sammy I have become huge fan of your urdu poetry.............
each and every word of this letter really touched my heart .I just fell in love with these lines......
Aansoon to nahin hai aankhon mein
Pehlu mein magar dil jalta hai

one can easily feel the pain imbedded in the entire poem........

thanks




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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

Wow Sam, this love letter is awesome.

The deep meaning of the words used and their profound impact has made my heart go aflutter.

Thanks for posting it here. 🤗


ya even i love deep meaning kaviji , thanks for liking the shayree though u know its stolen poetry....😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: skeptical

Sammy,

Some of your Urdu poems are out of this world. One request, the font is tiny and I find it difficult to read white lettering on coloured background. Kya karoon ankhen kamzor ho gayee hai.......
Can you reproduce it here? Just the words with a large font? Please?

skepy my dear i would love to od so but kaviji beat me to it and am so thankfull to rachna for doing it here ....thanks for liking all my poems have one thing in commom and that is that they r not written by me😉....i have don emy next shayree post with bigger fonts do check it out😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

Dear Skep,

I have taken the liberty to post the lines over here.
I agree with you, these Urdu poems are just too good.
Regards
Poet
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Dear Kranti

Apne dil ki baat bus kalam ki zubaani

Bhej raha hoon tumhare paas ?

Kaash tum samajh jao.

Aansoo toh nahin hain ankhon mein

Pehlu mein magar dil jalta hai

Hothon pe lahu hai hasrat ka

Aarra se jigar pe chalta hai

Ae dard-e-jigar yeh baat hai kya

Yeh ankhri apni raat hai kya ?

Hoti hain kasak har dhadkan mein

Har saans mein khanjar chalta hai

Dil jalta hai

Hum har gaye aise gham se

Dekha hi nahi jata humse

Jalta hai patanga jab koi aur ?

Shama ka aansoo dhalta hai ?

Dil jalta hai

thanks a ton poet ji

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