Strange love (AK) : Part 3 updated!! Kripa in Hyd!

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Kripa

@abhaypiya_4evr

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hiii guys....this is jaya here.....I hav a new love story to tell....it revolves around my fav jodi Angad-Kripa...

In my story both of them are rich spoilt brats.....

So herez the promo....

On one dark night a beautiful young girl, aged roughly around 20 wearing a black halter neck top with a black short skirt and matching hoops, holding black stilettos in hand, was carefully climbing down a sari tied to one of the pillars of the open balcony attached to her dimly lit room.

As soon as her soft feet touched the ground she felt a strong hand covering her mouth, another hand brushed her slender waist, sending shivers down her spine andpressed her back tightly against his masculine frame. She tried to free herself but all her efforts went in vain. He was just too strong for her. In no time she found herself being dragged to a black Mercedes. Now she got hell scared. She punched and kicked him desperately. In return all of a sudden his grip on her waist loosened and she felt both her wrists being captured and brought to her stomach and pressed against it tightly.

The car door was opened and she was thrown onto the passenger's seat and a husky voice coming from her back ordered the driver to start the engine. She tried to open the door and run away only to be pulled back by a strong force which finally caused her to crush against his manly chest. The same husky voice whispered in her ear "Not so fast sweety" closing the half-opened door behind.

Guys that's all for now. Hope u all like it.

PS : I wont be posting a separate character intro. My characters will slowly unravel with the story.

Please leave ur valueable comments/suggestions. If u r interested in the storyline and want me to continue pls let me know. I will post the part only if I find many ppl interested in it otherwise I'll treat it as a crap and will never continue.

With lots n lots f luv 😊

Jaya

Edited by kripa_here - 16 years ago

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pickytg

@pickytg

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Posted: 16 years ago

I like it ..AK r ma favs...and m guessin d beutiful bride is our lady and kidnapper handsome hunk angad!!.. cont soon..!! =)

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

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Posted: 16 years ago

great intro!

cant wait to read more..i always love ak fan fics :]

can you pm me when you cont again? thanks

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Mona Khan

@lalala10

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Posted: 16 years ago

Great intro! Can't wait to read more! Yeah I, too, am guessing that Kripa is being kidnapped by Angad..rite? Nyways it's just a guess.
Please continue soon and best of luck with the ff!

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sameira

@AKForever

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey sounds interesting..
continue i want to read more..

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...anshu...

@...anshu...

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Posted: 16 years ago

hi jaya

it def sound interesting

plz pm me wen u update

anshu

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Kinza

@xxlibragurlxx

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey...sounds good...cont soon ok i really want to read the next part...and plz pm me too...

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Kripa

@abhaypiya_4evr

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi friends!! herez the next part..hope u all enjoy reading it :)

Recap:

The same husky voice whispered in her ear 'Not so fast sweety' closing the half-opened door behind.

PART 2

She trembled hearing that and shut her eyes. Moments later she felt a hand grab the hair in the back of her neck and move her head. Before she could open her eyes she felt someone's lips on hers. Strangely she felt happy. She felt contented as if she was waiting for his kiss, waiting for him for ages. All on a sudden she heard the loud horn of a car. At first she thought that its of some car passing by but when the noise didnt stop after a few moments she concluded that their driver only was blowing the horn. Irritated she broke away from the kiss, opened her eyes and shouted 'What the heck?? Why are you blowing...'. She couldnt continue. She found herself lying on her bed!!!

She was shocked!! What was that??? Just a dream!! Yaar who was he? S**t I'm such an idiot!! I should have seen his face yaar. I spent so much time with him!! Not much time but enough time to see his face. I'm such an idiot stupid duffer!!! Damn it!! It felt like as if i know him for ages!! It seemed like he is the one i was waiting for time immemorial. Now look at me, due to your stupidity Ms. Kripa Sharma your dream man will be a dream man only. You got a chance to know him but you spoilt it!! Damn you.

She would have continued cursing herself but she heard someone calling her name. She felt the voice is coming from somewhere nearby. She looked up and saw her mom standing beside her bed with an angry look on her face. She yelled 'Did you see the time? Its already 10. Would you please care to get up and help me in packing. Its you who became a software engineer and got a job. Tomorrow morning you're going to Hyderabad for that and not me'. Her eyes moistened a bit. Her lil princess who always used to roam about her in delhi will now go to an unknown place. God knows when she'll be able to see her next. Kripa found her mom's eyes moist. She also felt the same pain. She got up from her bed and hugged her mom. 'Come on mom I'm not going forever!! I'll come back as soon as my training is over. Now pls dont be sad!! Chalo lets go and complete the packing'

Guys thats all for now. Thanks for all your comments :D
I'll b replyin 2 each 1 individually. Will be waitin 4 all ur comments/criticisms

Luv u all,
Jaya

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Kripa

@abhaypiya_4evr

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Posted: 16 years ago

Guys i know u all must hav been waitin 4 a hot part..an arrogant kidnapper turned luver Angad..bt i wanted to write a different story..a real life love story of one of my colleagues...hope u all lyk it :)

Luv u all,
Jaya

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Kinza

@xxlibragurlxx

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Posted: 16 years ago

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hey...thanks for the pm...by the way my name's nida...that was a surprising part cos i really thought it will be the arrogant kidnapper turning into a love but u shocked me...kripa was so funny when she was scolding herself for waking up....lol....continue soon..