Mayur/Gunjan FF: Kahani Mei Twist! Note.P5

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z@heen

@z@heen

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#31

great ff sidra....................i just read whole of it................................fav job yaar..........

n the site also doesnot allow me to add buddies.................

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

Hey...

I just read all the parts and I really love it until now!!

Please do continue....😃😃

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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#33

hey Sid,

Sorry it took me sooo long to read and reply to your FF yaar!! But now that I have (finally) read it this is all I can say: 👏. It was amazing yaar!!! Loved the Mayur scenes and yay they're friends now!!! Loved the bhoot Mayuu scene!! 😆😆 But you know what I was so sad that was not actually Mayuu and Nupz was just imagining!! Waise bhoot mayuuu to roz mere sapno mein bhi aata hai!! 😆And Nupur's dialogues are soo amazing!!! Loved the sharukh dialogue in the end that was soo fitting!! You really did Nupur's character sooo well!! And the bauji scene was aww so cute!! Fantastic work yaar!! Keep writing...and name for the old lady...hmmm how about Shanta bai!! 😆😆 that always strikes me as a gossipy old lady name!! Orrr...Manjala ben!!! 😆😆 😆 Ok waitt I got more....Charwatta devi!! or Kaanta maasi!! hahaha im on a roll ok...one last one more.... Kulvanti bhua!!! 😆😆😆 ok Im done now!!

Awesome work here my yaar...keep writting!!

Love,
Pallavi 🤗

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vidisha

@sweetvidisha

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#34

nice...i liked it....n yeah i read ur mayur married too i am still waiting for u to update that too...anyways i like this one too how it is going..update soon.....

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Sid

@Sid4TeamCanada

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#35

@kiran1018: sorry yaar just checked this post...so m rpelying now...😆 thnkx for the detailed reply..and really thknkx for the feedback..maine socha tha pehle updat ekarungi..reh gaya..ab exam is week hai uske baad i will continue my story in full form...😉 will try to give sum ROMANTIC & Killer mayur scenes😉

@mimi: 😆haan yaar i started writing FF..par har baar koi exam aajata hai so instead of working on FF i start going crazy on posting replies abt mayur😆so im not a regular updater of my ff's😆isi liye dkeho na itna late reply😒 per ab i will take this ff very seriously with full priority😃

thnkx yaar i m glad u liked it😃i wudnt mind ur pm's at all hunz...perr i want u to enjoy the story soo i will try include an english translation in brackets after every hindi dialogue..dat'd b fine right?😳

@monu: thnku yaar..and ddont worry abt the late reply luk at how late im replying😆 glad u liked it i will update sooon!

@every1: sorry guys i know i have beeen not updating regularly....i just get caught up in exams and then i think that updating wu take hours so im just gonna spend a while in the paradise and then go...isi liye i cudnt update...but i do wanna move on with the story i hav in mind...so hopefully tonie i will updat eif not i will update this weeekend for sure..will hopefully make up for all the time i didn't update...thnkx for reading my ff and thnkx for ur comments they r really helpful and im glad u like the story so far😊so yeah keep an eye out for the update and i will try to pm u all...btw if u want me to pm u the update plz do add me to ur buddy list cuz for sum reason i Can't add u guys to my buddy list - it doesnt allow me to add any1 to my list😒 so yeah add me to ur buddy list and then i cud just pm u when the update is here😊

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Sid

@Sid4TeamCanada

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Posted: 17 years ago

#36

woww i post one post and forget see so many new replies on pg 5😆

@maria: thnkxx yaaar..thnku sooo much😃 i knwo site doesnt allow me to add buddys too😒par its ok i will pm u or find u in the paradise when i update the story😊

@hgrhr: hiiii...thnkuuuuu...😃 ur nidhi right???😊 btw... i do wanna ask one thing - ur nyk- im gonna make a WILD guess and guess that it means Harry Ginny & Ron Hermione...😳now i knwo this is a total wild guess prolly 1 % chance of it being tru but i had to give it a shot!😆is that wht it means???😆

@pallu1: great to see u here yaar...great to see so many paradisers here😃 thnkx for the great feedback im really glad u liked it😃 aur itne saare naam k liye DHANEYAWAAD!!😉 i will do a lucky draw to pick one name!!😆thnkx once again yaaar🤗

@vidisha:thnkuu yaaaar😊 and yes i know the mayur married bhi update karni hai..i will try to update it sooon tooo😳glad u liked this one as well😊

Edited by SidraLuvMayurBL - 17 years ago

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Ananya

@ananya_s

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#37

hey sidra dats really fine yaar......ill wait fr u 2 update nd do ur xams well ....update wen u cn i really luv ur ff

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: SidraLuvMayurBL
woww i post one post and forget see so many new replies on pg 5😆

@maria: thnkxx yaaar..thnku sooo much😃 i knwo site doesnt allow me to add buddys too😒par its ok i will pm u or find u in the paradise when i update the story😊

@hgrhr: hiiii...thnkuuuuu...😃 ur nidhi right???😊 btw... i do wanna ask one thing - ur nyk- im gonna make a WILD guess and guess that it means Harry Ginny & Ron Hermione...😳now i knwo this is a total wild guess prolly 1 % chance of it being tru but i had to give it a shot!😆is that wht it means???😆

@pallu1: great to see u here yaar...great to see so many paradisers here😃 thnkx for the great feedback im really glad u liked it😃 aur itne saare naam k liye DHANEYAWAAD!!😉 i will do a lucky draw to pick one name!!😆thnkx once again yaaar🤗

@vidisha:thnkuu yaaaar😊 and yes i know the mayur married bhi update karni hai..i will try to update it sooon tooo😳glad u liked this one as well😊