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OMG guys I am a GOLDIEE!! OMG finally!!!!! I AM SOOOO HAPPPY OMG!!!😃😃
and in this happiness im gonna start my own very first ff😃 i had thought this morning i wud write up as soon as i becum a Goldie!!😃
...i do write another ff mayur married (for those of u who read it)..but this ff is one i was thinking about since yesterday this story JUST came in my mind..so i thought im gonna turn it into a ff...now this is a Hat-ke story so beware sum of u might like it sum not but i sitll wud recommend u all to read it becuz its like my first very own ff..I can't Give u much spoilers i want to keep the story a surprise but zara twist ke saath ki kahaaani hai...
now I am a hardcore mayur so i might not be able to incporporate as many Sajan scenes in this but Gunjan is a very important part of this story...so Even Sajan fans may want to give this story a try...
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MJHT Mayur- Kahaani Mein Twist!
Timeline: Right after Mayur return from the Ahmedabad trip after the Vday ball - Sajan and Mayur are both officially in luv...but havent yet confessed their luv to each other..the story will move back and forth b/w present and some past flashbacks...😊
Note: NGD: Nupz & Gunjan's Dad (got tired of writing the whole thing mid story😆)
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"Gunjan! Gunjan Baba aane hi waaale hongee kahan hai tu?!!"
Nupz called out to Gunjan, as she set box of snacks on the dining table that she had ordered right after she had received her dad's call to inform that of his arrival that afternoon.
"Aarahi hoo Di!" Gunjan replied back from the guets room, where she was arranging flowers over the room, and placing a 'we missed u' sign on the wall.
Nupz entered the room, loooked around in surprise with a smile over her face and clapping her hands she exclaimed - "Array wah! By God gunjan tu ne to kamre ko nikhaar diya!! waah bhai meri behen bari khush lag rahi hai aaaj kal...yeh sirf baba ke hi aane ki khushi hai kee koi aaur bhi baat haiii..." she winked her eyes at gunjan while placing her arm around her...
"Di tum bhi na!! kya bolti rehti ho...!" Gunjan said with a blush..😳
"abhi bolungi nahi to kya karungi? bhai do din ho gaye hai aaye hueye mai pooori story bata chuki trip ki tu ne abhi tak mujeh KUCH bhi nahi bataya ke vday ball kaise tha aurr kya kya hua jab mai nahi thi yahan...!!!" Nupz said indignantly..
"aray di, mai batane to waali thi, wo maine kaha aap araam kar lo, aur phir baba ka phone aagaya, to maine socha mai bata dungi araam se..." Gunjan replied with a reassuring smile.😊
Nupz grabbed gunjan's hand and sat on the edge of the bed with her hand in her lap, and said in an excited voice : " acha dekh baba to abhi kuch deyr baad hi aayeinge..tu mujhe abhi bata detail mei vday ball mei kya hua aur samrat se teri baat cheeet kaise shuru hui ? " gunjan gave nupur a questioning look at the name of samrat, to which nupur replied with " array maine jab tujhe samjhaya tha to kaise nahi nahi kar rahi thi bichara kitna sorry bol raha tha..mai yaha se ghayeb to tu ne foran us se dosti bhi kr li aur vday ball mei DANCE BHI!! "😉... gunjan blushed a bit and said : "array di wo to aise hi ...us ne sorry kaha tha..aur ab hum dono dost hain" she finished with a shy smile..
"dost?? haayeee...sachiii?" she added with a wink..😉
"di...tum bhi na..kyu mujhe khamokha tang kar rahi hoo..dekho maine tumhe bataya tha na ke principal sir ne kaise kaha tha mujhe dance karna hai..to samrat ne to bas meri help ki thi..." gunjan replied now totally red in the cheeks with nervousness...
"haan haan..us bichare ne itni help ki teri dance sikhaya aur tu ne aage se us ko dost keh diya..woh bichara kuch aur sunna chah raha hoga..by God tu bhii na gunjan!!" she replied in a teasing manner now that gunjan was already caught in the spot😆
Gunjan opened her mouth in surprise, and lightly pushed nupz in a cute manner " Di!!!! tum bhi na!! boht ho gaya! mai jaa rahi hoo"
With this gunjan got up and left the room, while nupz called at her back : " array sun naaa! lo yeh phir bataye baghayr bhaag gayi"... she then laughed to herself saying : "isko tang karne mei na by God kitna maza aata hai..array kahi wakeyi naraaz to nahi ho gayi? 😕hmm check karna parega.." and she left the room and went after Gunjan while calling her name and chasing her throughout the house...😆
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Nupur's Baba was coming hoem in a taxi, but he saw a library in the way and thought of this book he had wanted to get and his friend had told him to check in this specific library since it was Mumbai's largest lib..so he asked the taxi driver to stop for a while, and went in the library..
"Suniye bhaisahab.." he said to the middle aged guy sitting at the reception desk , " mujhe na yeh kitaab chahiye" he took out a chit with the name of the book and the author for the receptionist to see... the receptionist pointed toward sa shelf on the far end of the library, and Nupz/Gun's Dad went towards the area...
After skimming a bit he came over that book, and took it out, and started looking through it, but then noticed that a few of the pages had been ripped off ... "array..." he said out softly to himself.." yeh to phati hui hai...ab aur kahan se book lu.."
Just then a voice called out to him from his back,
"Uncle, aap ko yeh book chahiye kya? kyunke is book ke author ki ek bari collection book hai usmei yeh bhi aur us ki baaki saari stories hain..aap chahein to aap wo lelein kyunke yeh maine bhi check ki thi book yeh phati hui hai..."
Nupz dad turned to face the guy behind him..who was Mayank!😲
"haan beta..woh yeh book ko maine har jaga dhunda..mili hi nahi..abyeh mili to phati hui.."
Mayank looked at the book and said with a sober tone , "haan uncle, samjh nahi aata kitaabon ki izzat nahi karni aati aur log parhna bhi chahte hai aage bhhi barhna chahte hain..kitabon toh insaan ka sab se bara sahara hoti hain aise nahi treat karna chahiye books ko..."
Nupz Dad smiled😊, and said " tum bilkul meri beti ki tarah baatein karte ho.." Mayank gave his sig smile at this, then said " acha mai aapko is author ki doosri book laadeta hoo us mei yeh bhi shaamil hai aur baaki bhi hain agar aapko yeh pasand hai to us author ki baaki bhi studies pasand aayeingi.."
Nupz dad nodded his head in agreement, and turned to put the book back while Mayank went to grab the book from the other shelf.
Minutes later Mayank returned with the book, and handed to Nupz dad with a smile, "yeh lein uncle..i hope aapko pasand aaye..chalei mai chalta hoo..late ho raha hai", he said while wearing his shoulder bag...
"Ok beta, shukriya, boht mehnti lagte ho, bhagwaan tumko khoob tarakki aur kamyaabi de.." NGD replied with a smile.⭐️
Mayank who was hesitating while, bent and touched NGD's feet at this prayer of his..
"Array..jeetey rahoo.." NGD patted his shoulder.
Mayank then left, and NGD said to himself looking at the book with a smile , "bilkul gunjan ki tara baat karta hai...gunjan k liye bhi mujhe aisa hi larka mil jaye jo usko samjh paye..."😊
He then went to issue the book, and go to his brother's hoem where his daughter's were waiting impatiently for his arrival...
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Mayank had been searching through his room for the last 10 minutes looking for his project file, and eventually called out to his mom : "Maa..Meri woh project waali file kidher hai? maine yehi to rakhi thi table ke upper mil nahi rahi hai..tumne dekhi hai kya??"😕
Mom's voice rang back : "array mayu tu bhi na...safayi ki thi cupboard mei hogi..kyaa kab se file file kiye jaa raha hai sahi se check kar na jaldbaazi mei koi kaam sahi se nahi hota!!"😡
Mayank rolled his eyes at this and said under his breath : Phir Mayu!! maa bhi naa...
He reached inside his cupboard and looked around, then spotted the purple project file lying just behind his folded clothes partially hidden from view -"kya maa itna chhupa ke rakhi hai kya koi chori hone waali hai ghar mei?"
Mom replied back in her sarcastic tone: "haan naa aaj kal chor bhi bare akalmand ho gaye hain gold ki jewelllery k peeeche nahi aate jab ghar pe tere jaise parhaku beta ho toh choron ko bhi pata hai ke teri files se kahin ke bhi exam diye jaa sakte hain to sab se pehle wohi chhupani parti hain mujhe!!"🤪
Mayank again rolled his eyes, then grabbed his file out, and placed it on the table where his other book was lying for reference. He then bent to grab his pen which he found had just falled on the floor, and while doing this the file from the edge of his desk fell on the floor, and a folded peice of paper fell down beside it. 😲
Mayank picked up the paper confusedly, trying to remember what this was. Opening it he realised it was the letter Nupur had given him right before he had called her a liar and they had stopped talking...until this trip where something about her had made him remember her everywhere in everything he did everywhere he went, and he coudn't help but smile as a series of memories attacked him: 😊
Nupur dancing on kajra re looking gorgeous in that green dress, her calling him "gur se bhi meetha" in that cute drunken state of her, her hugging him when he had hidden behind that tree, him falling over her while they had been fighting in the forest, & her peaceful sleeping face as he had pushed her face away from her face.......
What was Happening to him???....😳❤️
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Alright guys, this ff took me an hour to do, more would be coming up, but I need some major feedback on this because I need to decide whether to keep this on a light tone, or to give it sum "bhaari bharkam' (heavy) Ekatish Jhatkas (which I had originally planned)..& like i said this is my first very own ff so keep the feedbacks coming (positive and negative both!😊)
How ever I proceeed with the story will depend on ur feedbacks, but don't worry even if i do give it ekta-ish jhatkas the end would be happy, there would be lots of mayur in it, but there also would bea mayur separation...so hold onto your hearts this isn't just a cheesy mayur story..like the title says..this is MJHT Mayur story with a Twist!!😉
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