abhi-nikki love story spoilt

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Posted: 16 years ago
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whats with the childish scenes between both of them??nikki crying stupidly...looks SO very fake.the creatives better make good use of the actors.i just wish some dmg creative hears our suggestions just like MJHT creatives do.DMG creatives are least bothered with what we want...they just do what they like and give s*** storylines.
lets for example take this story is a different way...
in the locker room...
nikki:dr modi ki toh watt lag gayee
anjie:kya hua nikki..itni khush kyun ho?
atul:haan haan nikki,itni khush kyun ho?
nikki:arey..pata hai...blah blah(u know what😉)
atul:wah nikki mere sher...us abhimanyu ki toh taayi taayi fish kar di...kuch aur help chahiye toh main hoon na...accha idea doonga
nikki:tere paas ideas ke liye aane se pehle mein chullu bhar paani mein doob jaaungi😆
next day
abhi is busy writing something in the lab..nikki passes by
abhi is silent and engrossed in his work.nikki wants to have some fun again..
dr modi...lagta hai aap busy hai?
modi silent....and jotting down some notes.
nikki:hello...mein aapse(and takes the pen to catch his attention)
abhi holds her hand tightly,pulls her towards him,looks into her eyes and says
''mein aapke baare mein galat sochta tha...in do din mein,main har ek second sochta raha ki meine tumhare saath galat kiya..mein apne hi nazro mein gir gaya tha.yeh ehsaas mujhe zindigi mein pehli baar ab hua...woh bhi aapke wajah se,dr nikita!aur is kissa ko aapke pyaare dost ke saamne mazaak udaane ke liye bhi shukriya.mein galat tha....socha tha ki ek dost bani...lekin mein galat tha...akela hu,akela rahunga''
and leaves the room with his killer angy looks.
nikki is shocked with a single tear in her eye...she looks back at the previous incidents...flashes appear...by now a drop falls on her hand....she brings her hand to her eye level and looks at the tear drop...

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-alimabi- thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#2
i couldnt stop laffing lol
rose82 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ummm...ok, whats there to laugh..it was supposed to be a sensitive scene😕...thanks for the comment anyway!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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AWW that waz such a CUTE scene!! good job! it wud be soo cool if that actually happens!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg!!!
that is an awesome scene!!
i hope that happens!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank you!!!and this is my next scene..though not a AN scene..
nikki gets a call on her phone while in locker room...
haan komal...arey bhai...poochne ki baat hai kya??zaroor aa sakti ho!............of course mere ghar mein koi nahi hai...........haan,mein tumhe yaha ke saare doctor friends se milwa doongi,pehle tum college mein admission toh karva lo!!......haa baba...DR ATUL SE BHI MILWA DOONGI...!!arey bhai...tumse peeche kaun chudana chahta hai??tum aao toh sahi!
muskaan hears this...''hey nikki...kaun hai yeh komal??''
nikki"yaar muskaan...meri ek neighbour thi,meri bahut acchi friend hai...vo abhi sanjeevni ki college block mein admission karva rahi hai..toh yaha mere saath rehne ke liye aayi hui hai..
muskaan""accha..toh hamare baare mein kyun pooch rahi thi?aur haa...ye atul ko kyun pooch rahi thi😉'
nikki"hamari bahut baatein hoti hai...toh meine sabke baare mein bataaya hai...atul ki love story ko sunke toh vo atul ki fan ho gayi...pata nahi kyun....chal chod yaar...dr kirti ke paas jaana hai..chal bye
next episode...komal ki entry...
now wouldnt it be great to have komal love atul to death??the simple basic is that komal is a naive girl and she hears how much atul loves anjie unconditionally.when she sees atul and the treatment he gets,yet still loving anjie.....komal starts loving atul.her reason is that how can anyone love someone so much and still not expect anything in return?
just to be with atul,she also gets into an accident,gets admitted as his patient.....
now that would be interesting!!!!!
cutie_mahima thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy!!
yess!! that wuld be very interesting!!
wuld love to watch that!!
u know, u shuld write a FF on this! lolz
<33
Mahima
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank you!are FF's allowed here?coz i didnt find any!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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no problem!! =]
no, they're not allowed here...but in the FF section!! =D

here's the link to the section: http://india-forums.com/forum_topics.asp?FID=94&submit1=GO
Edited by cutie_mahima - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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(pehli scene ke baare me bol rahi hu)

kya solid dialogue tha. now that's material for a good show. you should talk to the creatives. they can be emotional and filmy but with some substance. melodrama is fine if it's not ridiculous as now and always is between A and R.

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