FF: Yeh Dosti 4 ria p.1 updated

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yeh Dosti

Hey guyz.. im starting a new FF for Ria turning into a goldie.. Congrats ria.. .. lol.. this is a FF like its name about 5 friends and their love for eachother and etc.. they met in st. Xaviers college and although they r in different fields they never break their friendship. Lets see how the story progresses..

Jai: 26, banis boyfriend and friend, he is a businessman' not Famous yet.. still struggling

Bani: 25, jais GF' she is a Famous Social Worker'

Ria: 25, Rajas GF and a Famous Doctor

Raja: 26, Rias BF and a Famous Lawyer

Radha: 28, the oldest and everyone looks up to her.. shes not married yet.. that is important.. she is a Famous history teacher, lecturer and fashion designer. She helps all of her friends..

Ok shall I post the first part?

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Part 1

Down the road u see a big house with 5 friends talking, laughing and chatting away.. it was their friend ria and raja's engagement party.. it was a small get together only between the 5 special friends. You hear them singing together

Yeh Dosti, Hum nahin Todenge

Todenge Dum magar tera saath na chodenge

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Jai: so Raja now what r u planning to do.. I mean wen r u and ria getting married

Raja: yaar jai, I don't know, I want radha didi to get married first.. u knoe be settled in life.. nd that's what ria wants as well.. we have to do something jai.. we have to help radha didi

Ria: I agree with raja, jai..

Bani: yeah u guyz r right

Just then radha comes with some drinks

Radha: agree with what guyz

Jai: nothing didi, we were just making plans..

Radha: plans for what

Bani: o hoo didi u ask too many question, ok lets play a game

Just then Jai's older brother Aditya comes there

Adi: hi bacha party, (softly) hi radha

Every1: hi Adi bhaiyya

Radha: hi adi, wen did u come? We were just about to play a game

Adi (shy): really what game

Bani and Ria: scream : Antakshri HEHe

Ria: ok so now we have girls on one side and boys on the other, baite baite bore hue karna hai kuch kaam, chalo shrru karein antakshri leke khuda ka naam… ok boys u start

Raja: mann tera mera mann, ek rahe, tera mera mann

Radha: na kuch pucha, na kuch socha, tune dil se diya jo diya, tujh me rab dikhta hai yaara mein kya karoon..

Jai: na chahooon sona chandi, na chahoon heera moti yeh mere kis kaam ke, na chaahoon bangle gadi, na chahoon motor gadi yeh toh hain bus naam ke, eti hai dil de badle mein dil ke

Bani: ek do teen, teran karoon gin gin ke mein intezaar aaja piya aaye bahaar

Adi: Raja ko rani se pyaar ho gaya, pehli nazar mein pehla pyaar ho gaya, dil jigar dono ghayal hue, dheere nazar dil to paar ho gaya (secretly looking at radha)

Radha: ae dil, laya hai baahar, apno ka pyaar kya kehna, miley hum, subha sham, apni ka pyaar kya kehna

Just then bani and ria get an idea looking at adi

Bani to ria: chal,, lets get tea

Ria: ok (once in the kitchen) bani tu kya wohi soch rahi hai jo mein soch rahi hoon

Bani: haan ria.. I was thinking y not hook up aditya bhaiyya with radha didi.. I think aditya bhaiyya loves radha didi but radha didi bhi naa, she absolutely blind..

Ria: haan yaar.. lets go tell jai and raja

Ok I gotta go get ready for class now.. will update more tomorrow or tonight.. and thanx for liking yaaar..

Edited by phool527 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thankyou so much dear!🤗 you are a sweetheart! I would love to read a story with me int! have thought of so many in my head! it would be nice to read one from a friend!

Looking forward to the first part and i am sure you will rock!
Edited by ria_h85 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey bini
o cont soon dear
the start is gr88 till now
i mean liked the intro
jadli se update post karoooo
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww that was a cute part! you got me engaged right away😉😆 ok so they all seem to be really close friends! lets see how they hook up Adi and Radha! continue soon!

p.s: the songs were all very good!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEY BINI
THAT WAS A CUTE UPDATE
SO now the 4 freinds are gonna hook their eldest FREIND RAdha with adi
soo sweetet
cant wait to see the story progressing
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

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