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Noor

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Posted: 16 years ago

#71

:( SooOOooorry 4 my absence(my internet was not active!) :( .

Thank you sooooOOOOOooooo much 4 ur efforts ..

Gr8 done..

Liked it sooo

With love..

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Hala

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Posted: 16 years ago

#72

lovley mahi i love ur story soooo much when will you update?

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mahi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#73

^^ i will upload the next part a few mints

@cardenia thnx for liking

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mahi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#74

Part 52

Everyone are sitting at the table and having their breakfast. Poonam is still dreaming lolz and looking after sec. 2 Rajatr. Rajat doesn't note. he talks 2 manu bhayya abt yetserdays fight.

Rajat: i mean it was... woaaah!

Gautam: leave it guys im not interessted anymore in it and i hope uncle g will realizes his mistake ..

Rajat: yup i agree..

Manu: how someone can be so... i dont have the word ...

Pooja: lolz... selfish???

manu: ya maybe..

Pooja's mom: so guys u think that Rohit's dad is selfish abt his kids

Manu: maybe ma maybe...

Pooja's mom: wrong! he wants his children like Poonam and Gautam which is impossible...

Pooja: that's the point ma!

Rajat: may i say something

Pooja: ya sure

Rajat: we think we should them both alone and let uncle g decide after yesterday what he has 2 do next! i hope he will change hisself for his kids. qauz its natural that for example if my dad wouldnt care abt me his own SON! and looks after other kids it will frustrat me.. so think logically guys!

Pooja's mom: ya ur right

Rajat: c... hahah

Rajat's dad: well he was really mean to Gautam and i hope he will not do this again

Poonam: u dont know him uncle g he is a swine!

Poonam's mom: behave urself

Poonam: sorry...

Rajat's dad: hahaha Poonam ur great i love u dear! ek dum bindaas

Poonam: yeah... dats what Poonam is...

Rajat: strange.... :p

Poonam: what?... *confused*

Rajat giggles: nothing....

Poonam: heyyy fake rajkumar dont mess up with me remember that

Raja: mummyyy im scared... lolz... im kidding

Poonam: hmmm... got scraed

Rajat: me and scraed! only in ur dreams

Poonam: well....

Rajat's dad: stop it guys

Rajat: sorry

Poonam's dad: hey girl! quit!

Poonam: sorry dad...

They boys are getting read for the wedding

Mannu is wearing a black suit with sky blue shirt. he looks really hawt.

Gautam wears black salwar kameez with golden dots in it. wearing golden shoes and a black shawl on his neck.

Rajat is wearing the same as Gautam but only in beige colour but his shoes are golden too.

The girls are getting ready. Pooja wears black fish ghagra and choli. She wears black jewellery and black bangles.

Poonam wears a very pretty sari, it has the colour rose, she wears big earings with them and ofcourse pink churiyan... her chandi ki payal... but one is left ... which Rajat has... =D

POonam: oh shit! where's is my other payal?.. Pooja di have u seen my other one!

Pooja: no dear... u can have mine

Poonam: nooo... thnx! ill find my self

Rajat: Pooja di may i disturb u?

Pooja: ya sure... Poonam *tries 2 find the payal*: ufffo where it is..

Rajat: i... haiin Poonam what's wrong?

Poonam: i cant find my other payal...

Rajat puts the payal out: this one?

Poonam: heyyyy! dat is it! where have u find it?

Rajat: at the wedding party u hv lost it while dancing i thaught i will give it 2 u later but u were so busy so i thaught ill give u it tomorrow * Rajat lies, but why? ... hmmm*

Poonam: oh thnx! thnk god!

Rajat: happy?

Poonam: ya thnx buddy!

Pooja: lolz..

Poonam stand up in her pretty saari and Rajat starres at him like... * he blushes*. Poonam doesnt note...

Pooja: rajat.... Rajat... RAJAAATTTT!!!

Rajat: WHAT!!!

Pooja: she is gone

Rajat: who?

Pooja: Poonam

Rajat: so...

Pooja: hehehehehe

Rajat: DI!!!

Pooja: RAJAT!! u were starring at Poonam... may i ask why?

Rajat: i didn't ... * runs away*

Pooja stand their and shouts LOVE IN THE AIR and laughs!

All are standing outside and waiting. Poonam comes out wearing her pretty rose colour saari with pink churiyan and and and... Rajat again starres at her ... Pooja looks at him and pinches him

Rajat: ouch!

Pooja: shall we go?

Rajat: did i stop u?

Pooja: no but urself... without knowing

Rajat: oh yeah * he blushes and gets into car*

Pooja: pagal ... hehehe

Rajat: thnx! .... *oh god*

Pooja: ur welcome... hey come buddy cheer up i was kidding

Rajat: i know lolz

They Arrive the Wedding hall where all were waiting. Mansi comes there. She is wearing blue salwar kameez with blue jewellery.. just like blue angel.

Manis: hi guys!

Poonam: hi yaar u look great

Mansi: u 2.. hi Gautam

Gautam: hi mansi... u look very pretty

Mansi: thnx ... how is ur pain know

Gautam: so so... but it will be better

Mansi: im really sorry for yesterday i had a big fight with them both last night

Poonam: what?

Rajat: for Gautam?

Mansi: ya ofcourse... i mean hello he is my best friend i dont like it if somebody blames my friend...

Poonam: thnx mansi for supporting us its very kind of u...

Mansi: ya leave it... let's go guys! having some masti...

Rajat: she likes u

Gautam: who? what?

Rajat: she likes u..

Gautam: what do u want 2 say?

Rajat: she likes u lol

Gautam: we are really god friends and i think its okay that she supports me as a good friend .. if she will get any problem i will stay at her side and i will help her out... friends always likes eachother?

Rajat: i know i know! but i was saying something else...

Gautam: means?

Rajat: love... * runs away*

Gautam: abeeeeeeeee wait ill tell u...

They run and Gautam tries 2 catch Rajat but suddenly Mansi comes in his way. Mansi slipps and Gautam holds her.... * wub*. Rajat laughs.

Mansi and Gautam look eachother into their eyes. how romantic. suddenly someone calls Mansi and they get out of their eyes dreaming. Gautam blushes.

Mansi excuses and goes away.

Rajat: i told u...

Gautam: uuuuuuu......

Rajat: meeeeeeeeeee yeah meeeeeeeeeeeee *hugs him*

Gautam: be quit... samjhe?

Rajat: ya... my dearest friend and bro.. nobody will know abt this one scene my dear!

Gautam: thnx... hey buddy let's have some drinks...

Rajat: ya sure sure sure... *winks*

Gautam: stop it yaar lol

They Kiddis run to Rajat and again they want 2 spent some time with him. Rani (3yrs old kid) comes 2 him hugs him tighlty and gives him a cute kiss. And Rajat does the same.

Rajat: heyyyyyyyy raniii i missed ya soooo much last night

Rani: me 2 hihihihi

rajat: hihihihih hey guys let's have some dance?

All kids go with him 2 the stage and dance with them

how cute....

2 be continue...

plz have a look and do comments...

Edited by dv_freak - 16 years ago

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Hala

@MrMonster

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Posted: 16 years ago

#75

soooo cute i loved how everyone was teasing each other aww and rani i love her awsome plzz cont..

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

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Posted: 16 years ago

#76

^^ thnx for liking soon i will continue...

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

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Posted: 16 years ago

#77

Part 53

Chandni and Rohit are sitting and talking abt yesterdays fight with Gautam.

Chandni: u know they cant stand out us so why did u do this?

Rohit: qauz i hate them...

Chandni: u know what? Poonam blames me all the time for u... she hates me like hell ... we cant be like them and u know that

Rohit: oh thatswhy dad doesn't care abt us right?

Chandni: wel that makes me frustrated too but it doesnt mean that i go and fight with them like u did yesterday

Rohit: then what should i do? tell me... i cant c my dad always being on their side what abt his own son and daughter?

Chandni: but figthing is not the solution.

Rohit: oh yeah.. then u tell me what's the solution then?

Chandni: we should try 2 impress dad with anything what he would never expect by us dear.

Rohit: oh yeah for example?

Chandni: hmmm... like u help dad a lili bit in his work, he always demand from 2 help me but u never did qauz u think its boring if we really want our father back we have keep ouself with him like chewing gum u know what i want 2 say?

Rajat: right! absolutly right i agree with chandni! what u say rohit?

Rohit: GET LOST!

Rajat: oh come on yaar ! let's be us good friends and i know Rohit can be a very good friend right?

Chandni: sorry Rajat but my brother doesnt likes u qauz ur Gautam's and Poonam's cousin friend and u know he hates them a lot.

Rajat: i know but i would like having friendship with Rohit

Rohit: u dont know anyting abt this fighting between us so why are u playing the * good angel boy* here?

Rajat: hahahahahhhhaaaa, me and good angel boy? u dont know me buddy im very naughty... as everyone say if u dont belive then ask my mom my dad my friends hahahah u know what is angel?

Rohit: NO... and dont want 2 know !!!!

Rajat: oh really? but u have to know that lemme tell u angel are souls which never makes any mistake and we are humans who everywhere anywhere does mistakes am i right?

Chandni: ya right

Rajat: so ... u can do a mistake, i can do Gautam does Poonam does every do so what's new?

Rohit: means?

Rajat: that...look this life is very hard and long ofcourse and i think that get tensed on lil things from know u cant get anything in ur life. if you are know like this then what will u do forward? life is getting really hard day by day what will u do then?

Rohit: oh come dude its not ur porblem its my life how to live.

Rajat: exactly!!! its ur life u should know what 2 do... so... i hope u will think abt the points what ihv given u.. c ya later dude .... and yeah thx for calling me friend... dude! ;-)

Rohit: ahhhh....

Chandni: woow he so sweet and intelligent. that's what dad needs....

rohit: so u mean 2 say im dumb?!?!?!?!?!?

Chandni: oh god!!! what will happen next 2 this boy im leaving bye

Rohit: bye!

Poonam sees all this and gets a lil tensed and shocked. she talks with Rajat abt it

Poonam: hey what was that?

Rajat? what?

Poonam: u were talking to those loosers? ewww

Rajat: i hv tired 2 give them a lecture abt life...

POonam: abt life?

Rajat: ya... they should get a life... ;-) *winks*

Poonam: woooowww! ur gr8!

Rajat: ahhhh aaahh one mint one mint! it was not in a bad way i have give to them a good suggetsion

Poonam: oh.... i thaught u will feel them they are loosers!

Rajat: no its unfair! if somebody doesnt has the guts dont try 2 feel him as a looser! he will get more crazy like always.

Poonam: hmmmm

Rajat: understood?

POonam: a lil bit...

Rajat: and u know what?

Poonam: what?

Rajat: he called me dude...

Poonam: no!!

Rajat: ya...

Poonam: how was his tune?

Rajat: angry... hihihih but he was very confused after he said it to me.

Poonam: wah rajkumar wah! really acha khilari to Veer hi hai lolz

Rajat: c... hihihihihi

Poonam: anyway... hey come on let's dance

Rajat: ya sure....

They dance in the crowd!

They real wedding time comes:

Groom is sittng in the Mandir and the Bridal sits to him. Pandit goes with his mantar and both of them shy.... Groom puts sindoor and Mangalsutar in Bridals neck. They stand up and all starting put flowers on them... Poonam Enjoys the wedding and at the same time she dreams abt herself and Rajat... opppsss.. Poonam wake up! lol. Rajat is busy in putting flowers on them suddenly he looks left and asks Poonam.... Poonam refuses * poonam blushes*

Its time 2 say bye to The bridal, everyone meet the Bridal and Groom to wish them good luck. All staying out side and saying good bye to the couple.

Poonam: wooow so cute..

Pooja: right!

Poonam: let's go im tired...

Pooja: wait what u were dreaming?

Poonam: when? where what?

Pooja: oh come on i saw u from the other side while u was putting flowers on the both u were dreaming .... what was that?

Poonam: i was not...

Pooja: come one yaar stop lieng u were dreaming abt ur marriag with him right right right????

Poonam: oh shut up di *runsaway*

Pooja feels really happy abt it. Suddenly Manav stands behind her and holds her hand.

she turns and get in anger....

2 be continue

plz have a look and do comments...

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

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Posted: 16 years ago

#78

Part 54

Pooja: leave me!!

Manav: hey babes what's wrong with u? im treing to talk 2 u but...

Pooja: i dont want 2 talk 2 u man!

Manav: but why?

Pooja: i...

Rajat: Pooja diiii!!!! Pooja didii... Pooo...... oops sorry

Pooja: what?

Rajat: nothing ill come later...

Pooja : leave me..'*goes 2 Rajat* what happened?

Rajat: we ... are... leaving...

Pooja: okay come....

Rajat: but ?

Pooja: what? he???? leave him! ... let's go

Rajat: sure?

Pooja: ya sure! come .... im tired

She goes in with Rajat and Manav staying there and watching all this. he thinks that why Pooja does with him like this? why is she ignoring him. and at the same time he gets angry on Rajat that what kind of bacha he is and why he is with her like chewing gum. suddenly he gets a plan is his mind.

Rajat: what was he saying 2 u di?

Pooja: ahhh forget it!! i dont want 2 c him know... duffer!

Rajat: maybe he feels guilty abt why u dont talk 2 him...

Pooja: guilty feeling and he? hahah what a joke! he is very annoying u dont know him. he can do anything for his best u know!....

Manav: yes i can....

Pooja: not again! let's go Rajat we are getting late

Manav: hey u... kid... Rajat.. or what ever ur name is

Rajat turns in a hot angry mood 2 Manav * like Veer*

Rajat: what?

Manav: what's ur problem? why do u always beign with my fiance like a chewing gum? is Shera not enough for u? or u dont find a girl like ur same age? huh?

Rajat: excuse me... ???

Pooja: Rajat! leave it let's go ... come on....

Manva: ya go go... and have some fun with this kid Pooja! im 2 much boring for u maybe he is better for u hahahah

Pooja: shut up Manav!!! just shut up he is my brother how dare u???

Manav: brother? hahahahahahahahahahh ok come on Pooja! brother hahahaha

Pooja come to Manav and gives him a big slap on his face

Pooja: this is not enough!!! ill c u

Rajat: di.... let's go!!!! come on....

Pooja: ill c u....

Manav. just have some fun with this kid!!! bloddy....

Pooja turns and goes 2 fight with him.... All the Adults come to get out them of the fighting.

Pooja's dad: leave him Pooja leave him!

Mansi: go Pooja go Pooja! push him donw! go Pooja di go!

Poonam: and here comes one punch from me * on stomatch*

Manav: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Poonam: how dare u 2 talk abt Rajat and Pooja di like this u bas***d!!!! * another punch*

Aftrer the big fight the adutls succeed to cutting them apart of the fight. Pooja is bleeding on her lips and Manav has a big blue blead on his forehead.

Pooja: Manav: ill c u buddy this is not the end.... but before we go u go and apologioze to my brother Rajat right know

Manav: ahhh ... ssss... i dont !

Pooja: u will!!!! right know

Rajat: Pooja di leave it... it doesnt make anysense

Pooja: ofcourse it does.... im telling u the last time say sorry 2 him right know!

Manav: i wont! * and he leaves*

Pooja: where are u going im not finished with u

Manav's mother: im sorry beta really *2 Rajat*

Rajat: aunty plz... i dont want 2 talk abt this its really mean i know and ofcourse u feel very bad qauz of his attitude... there is no need 2 sorry

Manav's mom: why beta! he was talking abt u both so cheap and i think its not right

Rajat: ya... but i mean if he talks like this in a cheap way it doesnt mean that is happens at the same time aunty g... come leave it...

Manav's mom: plz beta im really sorry... Pooja my dear... im sorry 2 u 2 i dont know what will happen after this! i hope ...

Pooja *tears*: what u hope aunty g? what? dont hope anything positive by my side im telling u...

Manav's mom: beta... i know...

Pooja: plz aunty! enough! good night...

Everyone leave.

2 be cobntinue....

plz have a look and do comments...

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Hala

@MrMonster

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Posted: 16 years ago

#79

i love the fight awsome but i iwould like it more if there was a poonam and rajat scene well poonam day dreaming was good but likein reality and i just loved it how pooja gave manav a slap.. and the punch that poonam gave him LOL continue..