How it all began- My journey as a FF writer

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How it all began

(No this is not another fanfic. It is a narration of my personal experience as a FF writer.)

Today I finally finished something I started exactly three months back. Yes, I finished my mammoth FF. What is pending is only the epilogue. Somehow I got all nostalgic as to how it all began. Believe me, I was extremely jittery when I started it. JC and I exchanged several PMs before I started the fic. If it had not been for her I would not have embarked on this journey. Thank you JC for encouraging me to explore my creative writing skills.

Here are the transcripts of the PMs we exchanged (Hope JC does not mind me posting her PMs here).

Opti: Since I am constantly pestered for a FF, I thought I'll give it a try. I just wrote the first part. I want you to take a look. This is something I wrote a long time ago. The story will go into flashback mode after this, tracing how they got here. I have still no clue how I'll take the story but let me know what do you think of this part. Right now this is a nameless story.

I sent her the first part of my fic about the birth of Michi triplets on Novemeber 18, 2008. As soon as I hit the send button, I panicked and shot off another PM titled "Scrap my last mail".

Opti (developing cold feet): I really don't know what got into me. I am not good at writing any FF. I have no story so what will I write? Don't bother to give your expert advice. I am no good at this craft.


JC: Hey didn't read your FF yet. Just got back from work...and now going out. Will come back and read before I sleep. And WILL tell you what I think.

Opti (scared by now): Please don't ruin your sleep. Don't read.

JC : Well why did you want to scrap the idea? Its obviously well written as I guessed it would be when I kept asking you to start one. But since Ii don't know what the flashback will be...all I can say is please do continue. Michi and triplets.

Maybe instead of flash back it should be flash forward to how they handle 3 monsters. OR maybe how Prachi handles 4 monsters. Lolz j/k....When you started to write you must have had some idea about how they ended up to be where they are...? So just throw some ideas at me and I'll brainstorm with you. Well I for one will be a regular reader if you continue to write. So at least you have one reader guaranteed. So you can't say no one will read. I WILL .
Honestly I love your writing...its very...clear...something that isn't so easy to achieve (believe me ). So ok..don't give up...plz try to think of a plausible story behind this.
(It is another matter that JC has given up on this fic long ago like many others although she promised to read it in big bold letters. I think I scared her with the sheer size of it and the frequency of updates)

Opti: Well I did have a vague story which has still not crystallised. Here is the gist of it.

Prachi is Inder's only daughter. He has a wastrel of a son in Alaap. Prachi is the apple of her father's eye. Alaap has an affair with Suki whose father is an accountant with Inder (here the story will mimic the show). Inder wants Prachi to marry his partner Pranay's son Neev who is studying abroad. Prachi and Neev are childhood friends and Prachi thinks she is in love with Neev although she has never let her feelings known to him. P and N's wedding is fixed. Pranay writes to Neev about the date. The letter gets lost so Neev is not aware of the arrangements being made. He lands up on the day of the wedding with a foreigner in his arm whom he introduces as his wife. Everyone is shocked and Inder dies of heart attack. The will is later read. Inder, after providing for his wife, has divided his property between Alaap and Prachi's would be husband (the guy is an MCP who thinks men need to run the business and women are more ornamental). Since Alaap wants the whole empire, he is not too keen to get Prachi married. It is during this time that Suki's affair comes to light and her father has a stroke. He is admitted in hospital. Milind, the self respecting, independant minded brother of Suki demands that Alaap marry Suki. Alaap refuses and ridicules him and even gets him thrown in prison when he gives him a thrashing. Milind realises Suki is preg and on coming out of prison is willing to beg Alaap to accept her. In the meantime, Alaap is facing pressure from PL to get Prachi settled. Alaap comes up with a plan. He agrees to marry Suki under the condition that Milsi marries Prachi and on the day of the wedding writes off his share of property to him. Milsi is not interested in money and considers a slur to marry for money. He would never dream of touching Inder's wealth but he is reluctant to marry because he is in love with Ayesha his childhood friend. In the end he does agree to the marriage for he wants his sister's happiness. So MP marry under compulsion, the same day that Alaap marries Suki. After marriage P comes to reside in the chawl. The rest of the story is how the initial hate on the part of Milsi turns into love, how Prachi adjusts to the life in the chawl, how Michi come up in life, their family ties etc etc. So how is this?

JC: So why did you say you have no story???

Its a promising one. And Michi in Chawl. OK go ahead. Although do consider the length. I mean the story you've told me so far...if you are planning on writing it chapter by capter it would be a long time till Michi get married or interact. From my personal experience ....length tends to be a deterent. People loose interest. Besides I think Michi in chawl part would be of most interest to everyone here. But i guess this part is just the backdrop and will be told in narratives right....I think it's a brilliant idea...I don't know whats wrong with you. You better start writing it.
(Well, as it happened I breezed through the gist I had written to her and spent more time on Michi)

Opti: Ok, maybe I will hang myself to dry or whipped. Guess the updates may not be frequent. Right now I just have that bit I PMed you. So do you think the next part should be the FB from Michi marriage?

(Although I initially thought that the updates may not be frequent, it turned out quite the opposite - the updates were too frequent which itself was the biggest disadvantage of this fic as I realised later).

JC: Here is what I think....start the flashback from the day of Prachi and Neev's wedding. Maybe Prachi will remember her wedding day how much she "loves" Neev and that he is her childhood friend and you can show Inder-Prachi bond and in between you can show Alaap-Suki affair....and say end the first flashback on Neev coming home and being surprised....or maybe if you want to go even slower you'll establish that Prachi is in love with Neev and they are getting married and waiting for Neev.

Next update...Neev comes home with his g-friend and hell breaks loose...you can kill Inder at this point???....

Next update everyone blames Neev and Neev reveals he never got any which letter but Prachi at this point doesn't care is too heartbroken and sorrowful about her father...while Alaap takes the opportunity to self-proclaim himself the head of the household.

Then maybe you can leap a few months ??? and show that ALaap is not really cared to find Prachi a groom and has been detering her from marriage....and this is when Alaap-Suki affair comes to Milind's attention and the drama continues.

My opinion was to be taken as a suggestion. Because I've seen how crazy ppl get to get to the Michi parts fast. No one has patience around here...which is really sad cause i'd rather tell a good story than write a whole bunch of Michi scns in the name of "entertainment". So if that's you plan do go ahead with it.

I for one would definitely read cause I think its gonna come out brilliant. If you want you can show a parallel Milind and his family track while Prachi is going thru her wedding and father's death and all.

Maybe that Milind-Baba tension with him not having a job and all can be written about meanwhile he failing to notice the changes in his sister because of the tension between Father and son.

Opti: In fact I too thought that I should start the FB scene from NP's wedding arrangement. Unlike you I do not have the art of describing things in great detail. So the story may be a little brusk and hurried in places and slow in others. I also am not very organised and may end up rambling my thoughts in places. Hope you don't mind. This FF will definitely not be a literary piece but just expression of my thoughts which sometimes can be chaotic. Hope you would have the patience to continue reading the story through all of it. I plan to title it Destiny's children. What do you think of it? Can I post the little bit I PMed you for starters?

And so began the three-month journey of my "Destiny's children." I posted my first part on November 20, 2008. Although many started the journey with me, many also gave up mid-way. I wouldn't blame them since I was updating at rapid frequency as fast as my thoughts were moving. Being the proverbial impatient person I could not hold my thoughts for long. So if someone does not come online for a couple of days, they missed out in more than a couple of updates. Not everyone had the time or the tenacity to go back and catch up on all the missed updates. The story too may not have been captivating enough for the extra effort required to do so. But I could not slow down.

So here am I! After 50 parts and countless sub parts over 90 days, I finally finished what I started which I think is an achievement in itself even if I bored to death some people with my nonsensical fantasies.
I would specially like to thank all those readers, silent and not so silent ones, who put up with me up to now. I would also thank those who started bravely but got scared away midway because if it had not been for them I would not have been encouraged to continue beyond the first couple of updates.
I don't think I'll write another FF again but thank you for letting me experience this whole journey.
Just an example of how prolific a writer I have become over this three-month span - My first update was the shortest in the fic was just under a page in word document but my last update is over 7 pages in word document, the longest update I have written!

My advice to all those who want to write but are too scared to do so like me. Give it a chance, I am sure you will not regret it.

P.S. I guess this post has become a mini FF by itself!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks opti..for a very beautiful FF. 😃
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Thanks Lizzy for being there till the end.
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Opti--thanx for taking us for the beautiful journey along with yourself!! i didn't give up.....i think ppl also gave up Kymth so they jjust wanted to break off from the the forum in and itself!!there are others reasons which i'll PM you abt!!
you should still expect my comments!! i read the whole bit and was blown away....Thanx for loving Michi soo much to spend time writing it!! We ex-Michi lovers were not as ardent lovers as you, Munee and other writers as we didn't spend time fulfilling our mind's Michi!!
THANNNKSSSSS!! *hugs*
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i'm so glad you tried your hand at this, opti. i've yet to read any other ff, but i think i'm going to read some soon. kayamath seems to have been a catalyst for you to explore your creative side - ff, vms...good work.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Saima. will wait fro your comments as and when you find the time to post them.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Manu for making my FF your first in the forum and being encourage to read others. I am sure you will love them.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Opti, you should write another fic
I do admit that you update too fast and I had a lot to catch up with but still i made it to the end and that was only because of your write very well and make the story interesting to read which made me stick to it and I do not regret it but I am sad that it ended i'm sure the people who left it midway would come back and read the rest of it.😳
Opti Destiny's children is my favourite fanfic ( before it was Life's unexpected moments by BC)😆
Edited by may268 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Opti I somehow always had an inkling you would fare well at writing maybe intition maybe the fact that you wrote such great posts made me think on those lines. I remember sending you a pm to try your hand at it. And look now here you are with your first ff complete..... it was a pleasurable journey I hope you continue writing after this successful first experiment.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Mayuri for liking my FF so much. I am happy that I managed to please a 14 year old with my fic! Good to know my readers are of varying age groups!
Seriously, about writing another fic, I am sorry Mayuri. dont think I'll be able to do that. This one has sapped all my energy. The problem is I get very passionate about what I do and then the rest of my life suffers. Right now I need to buck up at work. I have become pretty slack there. Before I get into serious trouble, I need to get back to being as hard working as I was before. Dont think I can do that if I live in my Michi fantasy world. Thanks for the request though. I am honoured.

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