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Posted: 16 years ago
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Before I write too long I'm sorry if my english not good. But I hope everbody understand it. Just want to share my feeling and my hope with RKB's fan...

I wait till 1.00 a.m to watch the last episode of RKB. Although I couldn't watch it online, I must wait somebody upload it at RKB forum and wait someone made update for that episode coz I couldn't understand Hindi. And after I read the update and watch the last video, I feel bad coz the ending 'just like that?' . Maybe T &D not have enough time to clear all situation or the storyline so 'simple'. After that I go to sleep and still thinking about it and then I have a dreams...

The next morning I wake up and then think...if there are a few minute more for the last episode, it should like this. Before that I'm sorry if I hurt anybody but coz I'm one of RKB's fans and watching it from beginning till last night so I should write this to satisfied myself. After this I could feel better and just accept that RKB was ended...

The story continued...

After Shekhar-Rohini married, Radha and Ammu make some party to celebrate all good news and good day for all her daughter. All character are there. They enjoyed themselves and Shekhar-Rohini are the happiness couple but still shy. At last the party over and just stay Ammu, Anaro, Shekar, Radha and her three daughters. They talked and laugh together till someone rings the doorbell of Roshan Villa. They keep quiet and look each other. Radhaa sit up and just says, "I have invited someone special for us." She goes near the door and open it. Raunak stands in front Radhaa and then smile to her. They hug tightly. Everybody shocked. Ammu and Shekhar look uncomfortable. Rohini and her sisters look each other.

"Why you let her come here, Radhaa? I don't want she ruin ours happiness!" said Ammu with high voice. Shekhar hold her shoulder and just look at them. Radhaa and Raunak come in front Rohini," Rohini, congratulation. I hope you'll have happily marriage. Shekhar was very nice person and you deserved to have him. I hope you'll make him happy forever. Shekhar, I'm very sorry. Ammu, I didn't come here to ruin your happiness. I hope you can accept me again. I didn't mean to hurt you and Shekhar. I'm really love you and I hope you can forgive me. Radhaa aunty was too nice and I'm very happy coz she decides to take me as her 4th daughter." Radhaa just look at Raunak face and she doesn't release her hand from Raunak's shoulder.

"Ammu, please forgive her. She was not bad person as you think. Shekhar-Rohini have married and we should forget the past. Everbody must do a mistake but deserve forgiveness," said Radhaa.

"You don't know what she have done Radhaa..."

"Please Ammu, I appeal..." cut Radhaa and put her hand together. Ammu shocked with Radhaa behaviour. Shekhar and Rohini look each other but couldn't say anything.

"Radha aunty, it's okay. I understand if Ammu still angry with me. I must go now. I hope this house will full with happiness ever after," said Raunak and hold Radhaa hands tightly. Radhaa look helpless and sympathy with her. Before she talked again, Raunak put her hand in front her mouth and shake her head repeatedly. Tears are fall down on their face. Raunak just walked about a few step from them and suddenly she become to fainted. Thanks God Radhaa quickly come to her and hold her.

"Shekhar! Please help me," shout Radhaa. (actually only Shekhar a man there. If Adi or Nikhil also there, she probably call them). Everybody shocked. Shekhar as a doctor quickly come to help Radha.

"What happen to her?" ask Shekhar.

"I'll told you later. Just brought her to hospital quickly!"

Shekhar just nods and then lift Raunak's body and brought her to her car. Everybody follow him.

Last scene...

Raunak lie down at Shekhar'c Clinic. (Just remember there are Roshan Cancer Treatment) She is still unconscius. Shekar was there as a doctor with a nurse. He look at Raunak helpnessly.

"Why you doesn't told me the truth? You let me hate you and talk nonsence to you. I feel guilty to you. I'm very sorry Raunak coz didn't realize it. But it was too late...," said Shekhar with long deep breath. He close his eyes and feel very guilty.

Next scene it showing Radhaa and Ammu keep talking about Raunak. "I speak rudely to her and never let her told the truth. Why must she hide that big secret from me?"

"She loves Shekhar and you very much. She doesn't want you and Shekhar sad. She come back just to live happy with both of you for a while but the situation are different and doesn't side her. I also say rudely with her yesterday. She doesn't want sympathy from us. She wants we live happily. She doesn't want ruins Shekhar-Rohini happiness. She just want you and Shekhar forgive her. We must make her happy now..."

THE END

p/s: I think i want make one simple mix for my story but it will take some time...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow Ekfy thatw as soo beautiful !! Nuts T&D they coudl'nt keep this for today and had the episode of today yesterday !!!
I wish they take some tips from talented writers in the IF !! We have plenty here and they are soo talented !!!
It was very nice Ekfy and I loved it !!!🤗👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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in this world some ppl dont want to use their head. may be they dont hav any.
but great ekfy .at least raunak deserv this happiness in d end.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ekfy it is just tooooooo good.loved it.keep it up👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you ekfy, it was great!

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