Unwanted Destiny ~ Ch4 - Pa3/Pg 30 ~ 03-15-09

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Miketa H Patel

@Pyaar-Ki-Chahat

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Posted: 17 years ago

Unwanted Destiny is similar to the shows "Ek Ladki Anjaani Si" and "Kahe Naa Kahe" but it's written in my own style with plenty of emotions, misunderstanding, and passion full of love between two individuals who have never met in their life before but they are connect by destiny.

Main leads are' Ram Kapoor as Jai Walia, Prachi Desai as Bani Basu and Naman Shaw as Sharman Wadhwa

Characters
Sharman - Naman Shaw
Bani - Prachi Desai
Pia - Roshni Chopra
Kunal - Ejaz Khan
Prerna - Shweta Tiwari
Prem - Harshad Chopra
Yudi - Karn Vir Bhora
Sumit Wadhwa - Hussain KK
Kumkum Wadhwa - Juhi Pamar
Jai Walia - Ram Kapoor

Character Sketch

Jai's family is same from the show before the generation leap... but I only added Akashdeep Saigal as Ranbir Walia Jai's younger brother.

Bani's family & Sharman's family

Bani Basu: Main protagonist, by mistaken impregnated with Jai Walia's child
Sharman Wadhwa: Bani's love interest from childhood
Prerna Basu: Bani's mother
Prem Basu: Bani's elder brother
Pia Dasgupta: Bani's elder sister after Prem and married to Kunal
Yudi Basu: Bani's twin brother
Rano: Bani's cousin
Kunal Dasgupta: Pia's husband
Mr. and Mrs. Sumit Wadhwa: Sharman's parents
Aashka Wadhwa: Sharman's sister

Other Characters
Methali: Bani's best friend
Pragati: Bani's mom side cousin came for her wedding
Veer Sir: Bani's commanding officer
Abhimanyu Adhikari: Known as Abhi & Bani's best friend & her partner in crime up in the sky. Part of the Hawks....
Vikram Sir: Anurag's best friend & father figure in Bani's life like Sumit.
Chotu: Bani's cousin brother
Vikram Aditya Mehra: Known as Adi & Mayuri Auntie's son

Index
Introduction - Page 1
Chapter One - Unwanted Relationship
Part 1 - Page 1
Part 2 - Page 1
Part 3 - Page 4
Part 4 - Page 5
Part 5 - Page 6
Part 6 - Page 8
Part 7 - Page 9
End of Chapter One - Unwanted Relationship
Chapter Two - Humara Farz or Kartavya
Part 1 - Page 11
Part 2 - Page 12
Part 3 - Page 13
Part 4 - Page 15
Part 5 - Page 17
Part 6 - Page 18
Part 7 - Page 18
End of Chapter Two - Humara Farz or Kartavya
Chapter Three - Dosti - Ek Rishta Yeh Pyaar Ka Bandhan
Part 1 - Page 20
Part 2 - Page 21
Mini Summary/Part 3 - Page 22
Part 4 - Page 23
Part 5 - Page 24
Part 6 - Page 24
Part 7 - Page 26
Part 8 - Page 27
End of Chapter Three - Dosti - Ek Rishta Yeh Pyaar Ka Bandhan
Chapter Four - Yeh Humari Jung Hai
Part 1 - Page 28
Part 2 - Page 29
Part 3 - Page 30

Edited by Mp_Desigirl - 16 years ago

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Miketa H Patel

@Pyaar-Ki-Chahat

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Posted: 17 years ago

Chapter One - Unwanted Relationship
Part 1

Kehte hain...
har Kisi ko muqammal jahaan nahi milta
kabhi zamee toh kabhi aasamaa nahi milta
mujhe pyaar toh mila, meri bhi khwaish poori toh hui par
Poori hokar bhi adhoori – Khwaish...

I never knew that one mistake can change many lives in one second… Here I am sitting with man I never loved, never met in my life and still I am getting married to him because I am carrying his child by mistake… She closed her eyes and cursed the moment she went for her check up at Sanjivani Hospital witch changed her life forever...

~ Flashback ~

Far angle, we see a house decorated for the upcoming engagement at their place when young girl comes home from her routine check up at the hospital.

"Beta, how was your routine check up?" asked by her dearest mother Prerna

She looked at her mother and says "absolutely great… in fact I was amazed that I don't have to continue those pills for my allergies anymore."

Prerna looked at her daughter for awhile than said "that's great!"

"I know Mummy… anyways I am going to have quick nap before my engagement" she announced to her mother before going up the stairs.

~ Sanjivani Hospital ~

Confused, scared nurse walked into Dr. Roshni Chopra's cabin with fear because of her mistake someone else got impregnated than the person who suppose too because of the exchanged files.

Roshni was talking to her patient about his case when Ritu says "Ma'am, I made a huge mistake…."

Dr. Roshni: What type of mistake?

Nurse Ritu: Because of my mistake someone else got impregnated because of the wrong file I gave you instead of the person suppose too get pregnant.

Roshni wasn't satisfied with the news and says "what are you saying that your one mistake and we impregnated the wrong girl? How can you be so careless?"

Ritu began to sweat with fear while Roshni continued yelling at her about her mistake while her patient listened to everything with a shock facial expression.

Suddenly Roshni's mouth drops down because she realizes that Mr. Walia heard everything and he isn't going to spare her now because of their one huge mistake.

Roshni looked scared to even meet his eyes filled with answers for their mistake. Roshni began to say "we are extremely sorry for the huge mistake accrued Mr. Walia."

"Mistake" he bang the desk with hatred

Roshni steps back in fear with Ritu crying

Mr. Walia stands up and says "who did you guys impregnated? (Someone is shown getting dressed for her engagement ceremony) Who is carrying my child? I have to find out… before end off this month or else I will loose my entire property to my stepbrother if I don't have a child in one year? Thanks to my Dad's stupid will!" (She wearing a beautiful pink lengha with matching jewelry set with the help of her friends).

Prerna enters her daughter's room saying "Bani, I can't believe that my daughter is getting engaged today."

Bani looks at her mother with a cute smile while she asked her friend show her a different pair of payal.

Prerna stares at her daughter than says "how much will you adorn yourself, Sharman's getting impatient."

Bani looks at her mother while saying "tell him to wait… this bride is going to take sometime."

Many people are running down the stairs with laughter to welcome the groom with his family….

Kabse aaye hain tere dulhe raja

Ab der na kar jaldi aaja
Kabse aaye hain tere dulhe raja

Ab der na kar jaldi aaja

Sharman walks into the middle and begins to sing..... Tere ghar aaya main aaya tujhko lene

Tere ghar aaya main aaya tujhko lene

Dil ke badle mein dil ka nazraana dene

Meri har dhadkan kya bole hai

Sun sun sun

His friends around him sing: Saajanji ghar aaye hay

Saajanji ghar aaye

Dulhan kyon sharmaaye hay

Saajanji ghar aaye

Bani walks down the stairs with her friends while joining in with the song: Ay dil chalega ab na koi bahaana

Gori ko hoga ab saajan ke ghar jaana

Maathe ki bindiya kya bole hai

Sun sun sun

Their friends around them sing: Saajanji ghar aaye hay

Saajanji ghar aaye

Dulhan kyon sharmaaye hay

Sharman tries to catch Bani, but she runs pass him and he begins dancing with her friends.

Mr. Walia is shown arguing with Roshni than Ritu gives him a wedding card by saying "the person we got impregnate left this wedding card behind before I could return it back to her. It might come in use for you."

He takes the wedding card with full forces witch scares nurse Ritu a-lot by his anger. Roshni tells her to leave and Jai also leaves from there with the wedding card witch had all the details of each function happening before the wedding.

Bani shown walking toward Sharman with a tray in her hand filled with Kumkum and flowers. She does few circles in front of him than takes a pinch at the sindoor. Instead of putting at his forehead, she puts it on his cheek and runs away with naughtiness filled her eyes.

Sharman also runs after her and Bani runs behind her mother Prerna who was holding a try in her hand.

Prerna walks away and Sharman gets hold of Bani's dupatta… afterwards Bani dancing with her friends while saying "Deewane ki chaal mein

Phas gayi main is jaal mein

Ay sakhiyon kaise bolo bolo"

Sharman show dancing alone for awhile than he joins Bani's friends while he says "Mujhpe to aye dilruba

Teri sakhiyaan bhi fida

Ye bolengi kya poochho

Poochho"

Bani: Ja re ja jhoothe

Tareefein kyon hai loote

Hay ja re ja jhoothe

Tareefein kyon hai loote

Sharman: Tera mastana kya bole hai

Sun sun sun

Their friends: Saajanji ghar aaye hay

Saajanji ghar aaye

Dulhan kyon sharmaaye hay

Saajanji ghar aaye

Mr. Walia showed looking at the wedding card while driving the car toward his place with confusion filled in his mind.

Bani dancing around with her friends when Sharman joins her but he was teasing her by copying her moves.

Bani: Na samjhe nadaan hai

Ye mera ehsaan hai

Chaahe jo isko keh do

keh do

Sharman: Chhede muhko jaan ke

Badle mein ehsaan ke

De diya dil isko keh do

keh do

Bani looked sad while singing this line of the song: Tu ye na jaane dil toote bhi deewane

Tu ye na jaane dil toote bhi Deewane

Sharman: Tera deewana kya bole hai

Sun sun sun

Prerna stared at her daughter and couldn't stop herself from singing "Mehndi laake gehne paake

Gehne paake hay roke tu sabko rulaake

Savere tu jaayegi tu bada yaad aayegi

Tu bada yaad aayegi yaad aayegi

Mehndi laake gehne paake

gehne paake hay

Gehne paake hay roke tu sabko rulaake

Savere tu jaayegi tu bada yaad aayegi

Tu bada yaad aayegi yaad aayegi"

Bani wipes her mother's tear while her elder sister Pia held her mother by her shoulders.

Sharman ignores Bani and dances with her mother by saying "Tere ghar aaya main aaya tujhko lene

Tere ghar aaya main aaya tujhko lene

Dil ke badle mein dil ka nazraana dene

Meri har dhadkan kya bole hai

Sun sun sun"

Everyone joins in by saying "Saajanji ghar aaye hay

Saajanji ghar aaye

Dulhan kyon sharmaaye hay

Saajanji ghar aaye"

Afterwards Sharman slips his ring in Bani's finger and Bani does the same with her ring in Sharman's finger.

Mr. Walia throws the wedding card saying "I won't let this wedding happen… no matter what! I am not going to loose my child for no reason even if I have to break your marriage Ms. Bani Basu."

Sharman twirls Bani in his arms and Mr. Walia shown making a phone call...

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Please comment on it... either positive or negative... 😳

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Mickey P

Edited by Mp_Desigirl - 17 years ago

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Abhilasha Sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

will read after u post and comment. saved

so... i read both the parts... nice start... bechari ki poori sapna is going to shred into pieces... but how could jai say the news to her in an insensitive way... but what more can we expect from JW

Edited by abhilashasharma - 17 years ago

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey mickey

thatw as agr88 start

loving the story so far

and now what jai will do? dont know

but u have written the story in style

and now bani is also getting married to jai

kab kaise?

bohot saare sawaal

plz cont soon

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Miketa H Patel

@Pyaar-Ki-Chahat

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenal20
hey mickey
thatw as agr88 start

loving the story so far

and now what jai will do? dont know

but u have written the story in style
Thank you 😳

and now bani is also getting married to jai

kab kaise?
Upcoming parts will answer your questions 😃

bohot saare sawaal

It will be answered soon 😉

plz cont soon

Love
Mickey P

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Miketa H Patel

@Pyaar-Ki-Chahat

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma
will read after u post and comment. saved

Take your time.... I'll wait for your thoughts.... 😃

Love
Mickey

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Miketa H Patel

@Pyaar-Ki-Chahat

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Posted: 17 years ago

Chapter One - Unwanted Relationship

Part 2

Next day, Bani slept entire afternoon after coming back from the Wadhwa house. Pia was engrossed putting her new born son to bed in her room. Rano was busy studying for her midterm while her parents are out of station witch is the reason she living at her cousin's place until they come back.

Opposite Rano's room was Bani's elder brother Prem's room. Prem was sleeping peacefully in his bed while reading a novel. Opposite his room to the right was Yudi's room. Yudi is Bani's twin brother, but spoiled than anyone in this house. Yudi hardly gets along with anyone in this house except for his twin or Prem because he had created a wall between him and his mother after suddenly loss of their father Anurag.

Many people say that Anurag Basu was murdered and some people say he committed suicide. But Yudi knows his father and he would never commit such a crime by taking away his life. Even the police officers gave up in finding the truth witch brought a distance between a mother and son.

On the other hand Sharman also gets up from his afternoon sleep since he won't be joining office until his honeymoon isn't done and thinking of honeymoon made Sharman call Bani on her cell phone.

Bani was sleeping peacefully when her cell started to ring… first she thought to disconnect the phone… but when she saw the display she lifted it up.

"Hi Sweetie" Sharman said with pleasant tone

Bani also said "hi" in a low voice

"Why such a low hi instead of a cheerfully hi like always?" Sharman asked with a frown over the phone.

Bani took a deep breathe than said "because I have just woke up by your call."

"Oh! I see" he told her with a disappointed look over the phone

"Hey Jaanu… don't be disappointed now" she begun to say in a pleasant tone after yawing over the phone.

"I sense that you're still tired from the long journey" Sharman said in a teasing tone

"Nah…! It's not about the long journey to your house but the fact is that I hardly could sleep last after we got engaged. Afterwards you kept on popping in my head whenever I tried to sleep." Bani clearfield herself over the conversation they were having instead of getting to the main point.

"I see" he begun to say while getting out of bed and walking toward her picture hanging on the wall. Also he said "even I couldn't sleep entire night thinking about our marriage and plus all the events taking place before we can go out on a proper date."

"Sharman… after marriage newly wedded couples go on their honeymoon instead of dates but if you since we will spend our honeymoon going on a date." She teased him over the phone witch made him a-little annoyed.

Bani was busy chatting away with Sharman on the phone that she did not hear the bell ring in first place. After the second time she went to open the door without looking who was standing there… She continued talking to Sharman on the phone while inviting the person inside.

The person came inside staring at her chatting away on the phone… He looked deep into her beauty… at first he thought she can't be the girl who must be carrying his baby but when he heard someone shouting the name Bani she covered the phone with her hand and shouted back saying "I am talking with Sharman so I don't know who is here, but I think he might be Papa's friend or Mummy's friend or maybe Juju's friend. Why don't you come out yourself Pia di to check who it is since me and Sharman are planning honeymoon plans over the phone? I hope you understand Sis?"

He froze on his spot when he heard her saying "honeymoon plans" witch made him to think faster than before he was. If I tell her that she can not marry the person she wants because she is pregnant with my child. Witch was a mistake in first place by the stupid nurse Ritu. He thought to himself by he had no choice in hurting he feelings or else he would loose his entire property, his business empire, and his status in society in front of his stepbrother Rishab who had everything… a wife, a son, a daughter but not the success like him. After Rishab's arrival at Walia Mansion made him realizes about his father's will after his death and also about his extra marital affair cost his mother's life. Afterwards that he became the elder sibling for his sister Jigyasa and Ranbir. His entire life took him taking care of their needs before his needs and plus making the business grow father than before. In this process made him greedy, ignorant, and aggressive toward certain things. Someone's touch brought him back to reality…

Pia stared at him for awhile than said "who are you? I haven't seen you before in my life?"

He stared at her for along time before saying "he is Jai Walia, CEO of Walia group of Hotels and I'm here to see Ms. Bani Basu."

Pia stared at him for quit along time before saying "please have a seat since you will have to wait until Bani is finish talking on the phone with her fianc."

He nods his head and settles down on the sofa while he watches her speak on the phone with mixture of excitement.

"Sorry… sorry… sorry" she said over the phone afterwards disconnects the phone and comes near by him saying "Pia di said you are here to meet me, but have me met before because I don't recognizes you."

"Umm… we haven't met before in our life but I am Jai Walia from Walia group of Hotels" he started to introduces himself.

Bani looked at him like he was going to offer her a job on the spot but when he said that she is pregnant with his child by mistake. I didn't understand him at all.

"Are you listening to what I am saying because I don't want to repeat myself again?" he told her with full confident…

Bani who stared into his eyes for awhile before laughing out what he said to her…

Jai got irritated by the way she took in the news.... about her carrying his baby. When he heard her saying "are you joking with me? I never slept with you so how can I be pregnant with your child in first place. Also this joke is very old."

"I am not joking or playing an April fool with you. In fact I have full proof that you are pregnant with my child." He told her in a possessive way.

Bani herself was getting irritated by his joke and said "I have never seen you in my life… I have never slept with any man in my life not before my marriage and it's a whole different story after marriage. Than why do you keep on saying that I am carrying your child? Please don't spoil my mood since today is my haldi rasam (traumatic powder celebration) and menhdi rasam (henna paste). If you don't mind I have to go and get dress before my mother-in-law Kumkum comes over for my haldi rasam?"

Bani showed him the door before she left toward her room…

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Mickey P

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jeenal

@jeenal20

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey mickey

the second part was also good yaar

bani and sharman planning their Honeymmon

and then jai coming there and telling that bani is pregnanat with his child

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

this is getting interstsing

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey mickey.. ur back.. wow.. poor bani.. shes pregnant despite not wanting to be.. yeh hota hai kismat ka khel.. hhee.. anywayz coninue sooon yaar.. that was a great part..