Ek prem Kahanii

Hi! Friends i am making an attempt to write a story i hope u like it. Here is the introduction of the charchters. If i get a good response then i will continue wiht my story.

Garewal Family

Chetan Garewal - a rich businessman of delhi. - Someone who is and was always busy in his business and hardly had time for his family.

* Veena Garewal - Chetan's wife - A very simple lady. loves all her children but closest to Sujal her elder son.

Children:

* Sujal Garewal - 26 yrs old- Eldest son of Chetan and Veena. Handles the business along with his brothers. Very close to his Mother. Not so close to his father though respects him. All his brother love him and respect him. He has always been ther for them wen ever they need him.
He is someone who doesnt show his emotions to anyone, not very expressive about his feelings . Sujal is also close to simran he cares for her as a father does for a daughter. Sujal got engaged to Diya 3 yrs ago and she dies after 2 months of thier engagment. Sujal loved her a lot and is changed prson after her death.

* Akshat Garewal - 24 yrs old - A lawyer by profesion. :Loves sujal a lot and works with him. Handles the legal matters of the company.

* Varun Grewal - 22 yrs old- Also helps sujal in business. Looks after the financial dept of the company. He is a C.A by profession.

* Rishi Grewal - 20 yrs old - Youngest of all brothers. Loves sujal a lot. Closest to sujal than anyone in the family. He is also afraid of sujal. Though a very good person at heart but at the same time naughty.

* Simran ( Veena's sister daughter staying with them since her parents death) - 8yrs old - Darling of the house. very close to sujal. Sujaljust adores her can never say no to her for anything. Drops her to school, takes care of her studies even at times help her in her homework, takes her out for shopping. She is the only person other than his mom he goes out with in the last 3 years.


Lalit Garewal - Chetan's younger brother. (His wife died when piyush was 5 yrs old) a simple person.

Piyush Garewal 25 years old- Chetan's son - sujal's closet buddy and his best friend. Veena has taken care of him since his mothers death calls Veena "mumma" like everyone else. He is someone very talktive. Haapy go lucky person. Sujal shares everything wiht him. Really lokked after sujal after Diya's death.


Aggarwal Family

*Diya Aggarwal - Sujal's fiance who died in an accident 3 yrs back. Daughter of Om and Parvati agarwal.
*Om Aggarwal - Family friends of garewal have. Also a big buusinessman.
*Parvati Aggarwal - Om's wife.
*Aman Aggarwal - Diya's brother and Rishi's Best friend. He also respects Sujal.
*Nandini Aggarwal - Om's brother's daughter. Was Diya's best friend. And is also a good friend of sujal because of Diya.

Raheja's

*Mihir Raheja - Businessman staying in US wants to shift to India. Close friend of Chetan.
*Tulsi Raheja - his wife

Children:
*Kashish - his eldest daugther -24yrs old. She is very beautiful. Though she has stayed in US but has traditional values. A very sweet natured person.
*Charu - 22 yrs old
*Mehak - 21yrs old
*Kanan - 20 yrs old
*Mouli - 18yrs old.

Sujal who was a very friendly person and loved going out for picnics, parties, etc,. is now a totally changed person since death of his fiance Diya whom he loved very much. He is now a very quiet person. Doesnt talk to anyone much. Is always busy in his own work.
This story is about Sujal and Kashish. Sujal after Diya's death thought he would never

This story is Set in Delhi

It is 7:00 o' clock in the morning Veena enters Sujal's room sees him
sleeping. She has come to wake him up but decides not to as she knows
he works late in the night and gets up early and leaves for work. So
she decides to let him sleep for some more time.

Sujal gets up early everyday and drops simran to school.Simran also
loves to go to school with him. Being with simran relieves him from
all his tensiona nd problems. She is the only person with whom sujal
goes out. Since Diya's death he hardlymoves out of the office he goes
to offie early in the morning and comes back and then works till late
in the night. He has stopped socialising since the day Diya died.

it is 8:00 o' clock Veena again comes to check on Sujal. He is awake
this time.

Sujal: Good Morning Mumma. (Sees his watch it is 8:00am) Mumma yeh kya
aapne aaj uthaya kyon nahin. Simran ko school mein late hojayega.

Veena: Uski fikar mat kar woh driver ke saath school chali jayegi. Tu
itni der se soya tha apna thoda dhyan rakha kar.

Sujal: Mumma aap ko pata hai na Simran ko mere saath hee school jana
acha lagta hai. Jaise mujhe papa.....(keeps quiet)

{Wen sujal was a kid he always liked that his dad drops him to school
like most of his friends dad did But Chetan never had any time for the
family he was always busy in his business. So sujal wants tto give
simran all the love, affection, care which he always wanted from his
father}

Veen understands wat sujal wanted to say.

Sujal goes to Simran's room and wakes her up. her room is just next to
sujal's.

Sujal: Gudiya Good Morning. (Kisses her on her forehead) Jaldi uth
der ho rahi hai school jana hai na.

Simran: Bhaiya bas 5 minutes aur.

Sujal: It is already 8:15 u will be late for school. Chalo jaldi utho.

Simran: Achha hai na bhaiya late honge tho school se chuti miljayegi.

Sujal: Theek hai phir tum so jayon but then i will have the choclate
which got for u last night.

Simran: Maine yutha rahi hua. (Gets up) Meri choclate.

Sujal: Jab tum tayar hokar neece aayogi tho milagi.

Simran: (makes a face) okay..

sujal smiles at her. sujal and Simran get ready. Sujal is on the table
waiting for simran to come and take her breakfast.

Simran and sujal take there breakfast. Simran is refusing to take milk
and doesnt listens to Veena. Sujal takes the glass and makes simran
drink the milk. She cannot refuse sujal as she really loves him and he
also always listen to her and give her wat all she wants.

Sujal and simran leave . he drops simran to school and then goes to
his office.

Sujal is sitting in his office the window behind him is open. Cool
breeze start blowing. He gets up and goes to the window and sees
outside it is raining outside. He thinks of Diya.

FLASHBASCK
(Sujal and diya met in the college there love started wen it was
diya's first day of college(1st year) and sujal was in the second year
and ragging the newcomers)

Sujal is sitting in the college canteen Diya comes to call him
Diya: Sujal yahan kaya kar rahe ho?

Sujal: kya hua diya?

Diya: Jaldi bahar chalo bahut zaroori kaam hai/

Sujal comes out and sees it is raining and stops.

Diya: kya hua wahan kyon ruk gaye.

Sujal: tho yeh tumhara zaroori kaam hai. Tum bhi naa.

(diya loved rains)

Diya: sujal u r so unromantic. Itna accha mausam hai aur tum. makes a
sad face.

(Sujal could never see Diya's sad face. he loved her very much.)

Diya is still standing in the rain. sujal goes near her and kisses her
on her cheeks and everyone around are watching them and the start
clapping. The whole campus know how much sujal and diya love each other.

Diya gets embarrased and hits sujal and says kya kar rahe ho.

Sujal : (smiling looks towards her)Pyar!!!!!!!

Diya runs away from there and sujal follows her.

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Old memories of Diya bring a smile on his face and then he becomes sad
and thinks why did u leave me alone.

His phone is ringing but since he is standing on the window and lost
in his thoughts he does not pick his phone. Then his cell phone starts
ringing. He sees it is his mom he picks up the phone.

Sujal: jee mumma

Veena: Kahan thee

Sujal: Yehi par tho hua kaam kar raha tha. (he doesnt know his
landline was ringing)

(Veena can make out from his voice wat is his mood. She is really
close to Sujal can make out from his voice, his face in wat kind of
mood he is in)

Veena: Sach bol.

Sujal keeps quite he knows his mom knows wat is going in his mind.

Veena: Achha aaj ghar jaldi aa jana next week Simran ka b'day hain
uskeliya shopping karni hai.

Sujal: Mumma aap rishi ke ko lejao. aap ko tho pata hai na mujhe
shopping karna accha nahin lagta.
(sujal has jst stopped moving out since diya died. He used to go out
very often with her for shopping. She loved it.)

Veena: tere ko tho pata hai na usko tho wahi pasand aata hai jo tum
uske liya pasand karta hai. I will wait for u at 4:00pm.

Keeps down the phone.

Sujal then starts working. Suddenly sees his watch and it is 3:45pm.
He calls piyush and says he is leaving for home and if there is any
imp work he can call him. (Piyush and Sujal take care of the business)

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Sujal and Veena go out for shopping Sujal and Veena buy gifts for
Simran and then they buy gifts for Akshat, Varun, and Rishi too. Veena
asks sujal tumne apne liya kuch nahin lena.

Sujal: Mujhe ab kuch nahin chahiya. mera tho......

and keeps quite( he was refering as he has lost Diya he doesnt need
anything now.)

Veena: Beta 3 saal ho gaye hai. Tu aaj bhi purani baatoin ke baare
mein hee kyon sochta hai.

Sujal is quite but his eyes are moist. He thnks how can i ever forget
Diya she was my life and i dont know why i am even living without her.

They come home. Sujal goes to his room and lies down in his bed
thinking abt Diya.


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Chetan gets a call from his friend Mihir Raheja who stays in US.

Mihir calls up Chetan to find a business partner for him so that he
can set up his business in India as he wants to come back to Inida and
settle down in India. Chetan suggests why dont he and mihir do
business together wen he is coming to India. Mihir agrees and says
that his is eldest daughter KASHISH will be coming to India so that
she can make all the preperations for us to come and settle down here.
Chetan assures him that she will stay with him and by the time he
comes to India with rest of his family all the merger requirements
would be done and he can send Kashish.

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this story seems to be very similar to one tht i read in one of the yahoo groups...have u written it originally?

yes i wrote in that in yahoo groups not only me with ma cousins and friends and now i will continue it soon... 😊

30 VIEWS AND NO REPLIES???

ya even i hav read it in yahoo grps.tell the name of the story in yahoo groups na plzzz.

Hi! friends this is the second part of my story. I hope u like it next
part will be posted by sunday.
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Sujal is lying down in his room and remembring Diya. He is thinking
why has Diya left me alone.

FLASHBACK

Diya: Sujal aaj gadhi maine chaloongi. mujhe chabi doon.

Sujal: Tum rehne doon maine chaloonga.

Diya: Nahin maine chaloongi har baar tum mujhe Drive par le jate ho
aaj maine tumhe le jaoongi.

Sujal: tum chup chap baitho maine chla rahahoon na

Diya forces him and takes the keys from him.

Sujal: Diya ghadi dheere chalo?

Diya; kyon Daar lag raha hai kya?

Sujal: Haan jab tum chaloongi tho daar tho lagega hee.

Diya is really driving fast on the Delhi - Jaipur Highway (NH - 8).

Diya: Achha tho yeh baat hai. (she increases the speed)

Sujal: Pls diya dont drive so fast. Pls speed kaam karo.

Diya is looking towards sujal and she bangs the car into a speeding
truck coming from front.

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Sujal gets up from his bed and goes to his window he has tears in his
eyes remembering Diya.

Veena sends Simran to ask him to come and have dinner. She knows he
wont come unless simran forces him. Simran goes and calls sujal for
dinner.

(Since Diya's death wenever he is upset he avoids joining the family
for dinner he knows if they see him like this they would also get
upset so he stays back in his room and makes the bahana that he has
some office work and all them know how deeply he has immersed himself
into his work)

Sujal comes down with Simran for dinner.

Chetan: Sujal my friends daughter Kashish is coming from states next
week and both of u have to work on merger of Grewal group of
industries and Raheja group of industries. Since they are shifting to
Delhi soon and Mihir and Me would like to work together.

Sujal: But Dad, why is there a need for merger?

Chetan: It is for betterment of the company that is why we r going in
for this merger.

Sujal: But i dont think soo.

Chetan: we r going ahead with the merger and u and kashish will b
working on it.

Sujal: okay if u want u can but let piyush or akshat handle the
merger. (Sujal hesitate to meet people since Diya's death.)

chetan: You are the MD of teh company and i would like u to work with
her. Infact u r the one who will be working with her.That's my final
decision.

After being forced by Chetan he agrees.

Sujal: Okay dad.

The week passes by the all celebrate Simrans birthday. Chetan tells
sujal that day after tommorow morning Kashish Mihir's daughter is
coming and u hv to go to the airport and pick her up. Sujal doesnt
want to go but Chetan forces him and he agrees. He asks piyush to come
with him as he doesnt want to go alone.

Sujal and Piyush go to the airport to recieve Kashish. Piyush has
Kashish photograph to recognise her. But sujal doesnt even look at the
photograph.

Kashish is waking towards the exit gate and loooking here and there
for sujal as her dad told her that sujal will be coming to pick her up
at the airport.

Sujal is standing in a corner. Piyush is looking for kashish he sees
herand tells sujal see there is Kashish.

Piyush goes forward to recive her. Sujal looks up and sees Kashish.

Kashish has has long light brown hair, beautiful light brown eyes, she
has a fair complexion, a glowing skin.
She is wearing a short red kurti and black parallels and looking
really beautiful.

Sujal as soon as looks at her and keeps looking it is as if his heart
skiped a beat. (something like kuch kuch hota hai kissi ko dekhte
hee). Then he says to himself her hair, eyes and smile are so much
like Diya. Sujal still keeps standing at the back and starts thinking
abt Diya as Kashish's hair, eyes and smile remind him of Diya.

Piyush Recieves Kashish.

Piyush: Ms Kashish Raheja?

Kashish: Yes, u r mr Sujal Garewal?

Piyush: No, I am Piyush Garewal Sujal's cousin. Welcome to India Ms.
Kashish.

Kashish: I am sorry but i was told that Mr. Sujal will come to recieve
me. I am extermely sorry Mr. Piyush.

Piyush: no problem, Ms. Kashish actually i have come to recive u with
Sujal only he is standing there lets go.

Sujal keeps standing there. Kashish and Piyush move towards sujal.

Sujal comes forward.

Sujal: Welcome! Ms Raheja

Kashish: Hi! Mr. Sujal.
(His tone is very cold as if he is not interested. She doesnt like the
tone)

They walk towards the car. Piyush is talking to Kashish but Sujal is
quite he doesnt talk at all. In the car also sujal doesnt talk to
kashish but he is in between he sees her thru the mirror at all and
piyush is constantly chatting with kashish.

Kashish thinks what is the problem with him. he cannot even talk to
me. So much of attitude. and wat an arrogant person.

They reach home around 7:30a.m.

Sujal, Piyush and kashish reach home. Veena, Chatan, lalit, akshat,
varun, Rishi are all waiting to welcome Kashish.

Sujal goes straight to his room without meeeting anyone. Everyone
knows it is time for him to go to office and they know he doesnt like
going late.

She is introduced to all of them by Chetan. She suprised that sujal is
not there with family. She thinks he cant even sit with his family for
some time. He didnt even meet anyone and has gone up to his room.
Kaisa insaan hai yeh??????

Veena shows Kashish her room and tells her if she needs anything she
can ask her, she is in the kitchen.

Sujal goes to his room and as usual wakes up simran and asks her to
get ready as she has to go to school. Sujal and simran come down at
8:30am. By that time kashish is in her room and everyone else hv gone
to there rooms. They both take there breakfast and leave.

(Everyone gets up late except sujal, veena and simran. Sujal leaves
for office before anyone else gets up. He leaves early only to drop
simran to school.)

end of part plz send me the replies ok

urmmmm in yahoo grps this story was written by golu and she had posted this story here too name LOVE STORY
u gave the name in hindi version...she posted all the parts here in india forum too...anyway thought to inform u...