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Posted: 16 years ago
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Lo aa gayi main dusri bar 😳

Lekar apni bekar sayari ka bharmar

Kyunke ye forum hai kamal

Karta rahta hai dhamaal

Sare topic reh jate hai dil ke ekdam paas

Is serial ke creatives humlog hote kaas

Suno meri dil ki baat

Dekh ke Kranti-Veer ki halat 😉

Dil kahta hai bar bar

Hor roj ho Sukkarbar (Friday episodes dekh ke hum bhi khus aur woh bhi khush)

Hamari neshili akhonwali khule balowali khubsurat confuse Kranti

Bechari keya kare woh apni hi dil ki baat nehi hai janti

Aur filhall without hat coat wala hot hot Punjabi munda raj

Dekhta rehata hai peyara peyara sapna chodke apna sab kam kaj

Abhi batana hai my POV as gist

On various topics in the list

Pehle to such me humko likh likh ke chahiye julus hai nikalna

No promo, late start, less repeat telecast etc. bahot sara hai bahana

Sab ne jo kiya hai bariya chir far (Described emotionally, physically, seriously, lightly)

Karib karib on sabhi character

Kabhi to huye bahot he serious 🥱

Kabhi to sarmake aaye Goosebumps 😳

Video mixes ke tarif me keya kehna 😛

Masha alla subhan alla keya scene, keya gana

Last but not the least mention karna hai off course

Waiting eagerly for Jyoti's jhakkas daily update dose 👏

Aj hai Friday aur abhi hum hai chalte

Sabko meri taraf se happy viewing aur namaste

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bonai.. it was a superb peom👏... yaar(i hope it is a kavita/ dohe)
so simple language ... i was blushing☺️.. smiling😊, laughing🤣 and dreaming😍 while going through your each and every line....you didn't forget anyone to mention here.... Actually i am not much interested in peoms.. but i was forced to read yours....
thanks yaar... a fantastic job👍🏼....
hmmm.. so all are waiting for thier friday treat.....
hope it will give some hope to us....
now you forced me to write my creation...
I am sorry i am not at all good in writing, and don't even think about the poem/dohe.....
But I am sorry to say.. you people must have done some sin in last janam.. so you should tolerate my dohe...
aarz kiya he....
"voh mrd ki forum bhi kya he... jisme hot discussion na ho...
voh mrd ki forum bhi kya he... jisme hot discussion na ho...
aur voh friday bhi kya he... jisme Raj-Kranti ki hot scene na ho...."
taaliyaam....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bonai .......... 👏
Beautiful poem .............loved the descriptions ...... easy flow and gives a very feel-good feeling ...
Keep up the good work ........... you should write more often !!!!!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pennu

aarz kiya he....
"voh mrd ki forum bhi kya he... jisme hot discussion na ho...
voh mrd ki forum bhi kya he... jisme hot discussion na ho...
aur voh friday bhi kya he... jisme Raj-Kranti ki hot scene na ho...."
taaliyaam....

Wah Wah Wah Wah .........
Pennu ................ that was fantastic ...........
I think summed up all our thots ..........
Everyone is like TGIF ............ waiting for the weekly dose of hot RK scene ..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

Wah Wah Wah Wah .........
Pennu ................ that was fantastic ...........
I think summed up all our thots ..........
Everyone is like TGIF ............ waiting for the weekly dose of hot RK scene ..........

thank you thank you....☺️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bonai cool one... :) and Pennu hot one... 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Woww Bonai...what an amazing poetry😳👏👏..Mazaa aa gaya padhkar😛...and Pennu getting naughty kya😉...enjoyed reading both of them😃
Bonai remain more active yaar.,..I remember your early poetry also..u really write very well👏👏
And both of u r right..Fridays r really very special and naughty for MRD members😉😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Bonai, good one 👏... i really liked this poem as well😃.... hope u continue with your shayari😊

@pennu...u ve also joined the hotness discussion club kia 😆 i enjoyed reading it.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Bonai!!!!!!! be regular here dear!!!!!!!! 👍🏼 that was so nice
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks jo, dawn arwen and an123....

naughty kyu na hooo... hamre Raj-Kranti ithne hot jo he...

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