FF: The Perfect Coincidence Last part+EPI, pg-17

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys,

Mayaa wanted me to write something about jai and bani married in childhood, pooja wanted me to write something on the lines of 'Just married'. I didn't have the heart to disappoint any of them, so I thought of writing both; I have fused both of them in my own weird, different way.

Since you all are pestering me to write a FF, and seriously I have nothing to do except wasting my oil pastels I have finally decided to shed my laziness and write a FF, I don't know how it will turn out.

I hope you all will like it!!!! Comments as usual are expected!!! (-:

ENJOY!!!!
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The Perfect Coincidence

PART 1

A tuft of long, black lustrous hair flew, as if playing with the incoming wind, a petite frame stood by the open window, staring out into the darkness of the midnight, the night was moonless, her fingers mechanically tore apart a medium sized photograph, without giving it any glance she threw those torn bits outside, the pieces flew in the air carried by the strong blowing wind just like a kite without a string? ?she angrily closed the window and plopped her thin frame on the soft bed, refusing to shut her beautiful hazel brown eyes? ?
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The opulent green, rabi fields bowed to the direction of the cold blowing January wind, the wheat crops had flowered, which were almost sown 2 and a half moths ago?the still evening was serenaded by the soft gushing sound of the water flowing in the canal branched from the Satluj River?being the first half of January, the winter was at its peak almost freezing, it was very characteristic of the region of Punjab, the climate was very cold in winters and very hot in summers.

In the interiors of the village, delighted laughters reverberated in the much sleeping village, it was one of the biggest houses of the village with a very wide spread terrace?besides it stood another similar house sharing its boundary wall?the front garden of the house was well kept, with small flowers of the shrubs shining in the darkness of the falling night like dancing fireflies?

"Bhai, maza aagaya?kyun Parmeete?" a very manly authoritative voice roared heartily?

"Sahi gal kida, Balwant?" Parmeet Singh replied?

"kitna acha lag raha hain, sab ko saath saath dekh kar?"

"Haan, rab kare yeh khushiya aisi hi bani rahen?"

"Aur humari dosti ko koi nazar na lage?"

Both the old men said as their strained eyes scanned the house which was filled by the laughter and talkings of their respective families?

Parmeet Singh and Balwant Walia were best friends as well as neighbors; they were one of the most respected and well to do families in the village, they were mainly into agriculture and exported basmati rice and wheat?it was their long lost wish to turn their thick friendship into an everlasting relationship, but to their utter dismay both of them had sons, Mukesh and Preet were Parmeet's sons where as Uday was Balwant's son, their sons also continued the legacy of their friendship ahead, they were also good friends from childhood?they wished either of them had a daughter. Though their sons were now grown up and settled in different places but yearly they came to their native village and spent quality time with their parents, and it had almost become a tradition to meet for dinner whenever they came.

Then suddenly Balwant's eyes fell on the little kids running around, their grandchildren were playing, bani, just 5 years old mukesh's daughter and jai, 11 years old uday's son were playing merrily, jai was pulling bani's ponytail and instead of crying like most girls bani also pulled jai's short hair?Balwant laughed?

"Kya hua?" parmeet questioned?Balwant simply pointed out to the playing jai and bani?parmeet looked confused?Balwant eyes shone with a sudden gleam?
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"Papa, this is impossible?" Jai shouted?dropping the spoonful of cereals he was going to have for breakfast?

"Jai, please calm down?" uday was quite surprised to get such an eccentric reaction from his son, jai was a much sorted out person, calm and composed?

"Dad, if you don't know, child marriage is illegal and an offensive crime and you can be sent to jail if I ever decide to do a court case?" jai said with a cool air?uday looked shocked?

"Yeh kya tareeka hain apne papa se baat karne ka?" Krishna's stern voice boomed from the background?

"Oh!!! Please ma?dad jo keh rahen hain aisa kuch bhi nahin ho sakta?" jai said sipping his juice?

"Jai, tumhare daadaji chahte hain, aur waise bhi ek baar rishta jud jaaye toh usse todna asaan nahin hota?" uday reasoned out?

"I am not listening to all this dad, aap chahte hain ki main ek aise rishte ko maanu jab mujhe rishte ka matlab bhi nahin pata tha toh aap bohot galat soch rahen hain?I am not doing any of this?aap jo karna chahte hain kar sakte hain..BYE!!!" jai declared and got up?Uday and Krishna sighed?

Jai walked towards his car in long strides, sitting in his car his steel grey eyes fell on his grandfather in the wheelchair?he was reading the newspaper enjoying the peace and quaint of the green garden?he averted his gaze?and started the engine? ?he hated chaos, he was too orderly and like everything to be prefect but this sudden unexpected turbulence in his life was disturbing him?no matter what he was not bowing down to his parents' wishes?he gripped the steering wheel hard and zoomed ahead on the well constructed Delhi roads?
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The celebrations were reaching a higher pitch of excitement. The Singh as well as the Walia families assembled outdoors around the large auspicious bonfire which was set up. They were tossing sesame seeds, gur, sugar-candy and rewaries in it. It was the Lohri celebrations. Lohri is an extremely popular harvest festival in Northern India. It is celebrated in January when all the fields are filled with the golden harvest of wheat before the harvesting and gathering of crops. Lohri marks the end of winter on the last day of Paush, and beginning of Magha (around January 12 and 13), when the sun changes its course. It is associated with the worship of the sun and fire. The questions like When it began and why is lost in the mists of antiquity.

They were wearing their brightest clothes and were dancing the
bhangra and gidda to the beat of the dhol. The lyrics of the melodious Lohri song floated in the thick misty air, which was being sung by the ladies of the house?

Sunder mundriye ho!
Tera kaun vicaharaa ho!
Dullah bhatti walla ho!
Dullhe di dhee vyayae ho!
Ser shakkar payee ho!
Kudi da laal pathaka ho!
Kudi da saalu paatta ho!
Salu kaun samete!
Chache choori kutti! zamidara lutti!
Zamindaar sudhaye!
bade bhole aaye!
Ek bhola reh gaya!
Sipahee pakad ke lai gaya!
Sipahee ne mari eet!
Sanoo de de lohri te teri jeeve jodi!(Cry or howl!)
Bhaanvey ro te bhaanvey pit!


{Who do you have
The groom with the tandoor
The groom's daughter got married
He gave 1 kg sugar!
The girl is wearing a red suit!
But her shawl is torn!
Who will stitch her shawl?!
The uncle made choori!
The landlords ate it!
He made the landlords eat a lot!
Lots of innocent guys came
One innocent boy got left behind
The police arrested him!
The policeman hit him with a brick!
Cry or howl!
Give us lohri ..long live your couple!
Whether you cry, or bang your head later!}

{Thanks to Google}

"Sunno sab log?" balwant started?everybody's eyes shifted to him?

"Maine aur Parmeete ne mil kar ek faisla kiya hain?" he continued gaining everybody's attention?

"Hum chahte hain ki Jai aur bani puttar ki shaadi ho?" he announced, he could hear gasps from his audience?

"Par bauji?" uday spoke up?

"Pehle gal toh sun puttar?main aur parmeet hamesha hi chahte the ki humari dosti rishtedari main badal jaaye par humme se kissiko bhi beti nahin hui, par hum na sahi humare beton ke zariye hi yeh khwahish puri karlen?"

"Pata nahin hum woh dekhne ke liye zinda rahen na rahen?bas kal gurudwar main ek chota sa roka hoga, bas aur kuch nahin?phir jab bache bade hojayenge tab aapko jab theek lage tab shaadi kar dena?" parmeet said beaming with happiness?

"Par bauji, bachon ki shaadi?yeh?" mukesh intervened?

"Hum kahaan shaadi karva rahen hain, bas ek rishte ki gaanth band rahen hain?bas?apne bauji ka itna bhi maan nahin rakh sakte puttarji?" Balwant said?

"Aree nahin bauji, aisi baat nahin hain, mujhe koi aitraaz nahin hain?" uday said?

"Haan bauji mujhe bhi nahin, humari dosti rishte main badal jaaye usse achi kya baat ho sakti hain?" mukesh said?

But still there was a dull apprehension at the back of their respective minds, times were changing and what future held was unpredictable?maybe their children would not agree to them?

As proposed, next day the roka ceremony was conducted in the holy Gurudwara?binding the lives of two strangers together forever? ?
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The sight of the Doon valley was looking breath-taking, surrounded by the
Himalayas in the north, Shivalik Hills in the south, Dehradoon was indeed a beautiful place situated in the nature's lap?Bani wound the woolen shawl more tightly around herself, the chilly wind of the dawn was biting, the sun had just risen, slowly the rays of the sunlight were waking up the city and spreading latent warmth?she didn't realize that she had come a long way walking? she tuned to go back home?
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God bless
Dhani

P.S.: I don't much about the Punjabi Culture, just a shallow knowledge from friends and readings. I hope I have not hurt or go against any cultural sentiments of anybody here, if so please excuse me. Roka, as I know is generally an engagement kind of thing and not marriage precisely.

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jeevikagurl88 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG you started a ff. The story line is very interesting.
I just can't wait for the next part.
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Dont worry Im punjabi and u havent offended me...

OMG so they are so young to get married? I hope JW accepts it later .. of course he will :D U know why? becuase! we are jb fans :) lovely start! cant wait for the rest!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey dhani

that was a wonderful start
but as u said jai is 11 yr old
then how come he can he run away and ride a car
and thatt too on the roads of delhi
thats illegal
plzzzz cont sooonn
Edited by jeenal20 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice start Dhani. Waiting to read more.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi
Nice start. So its kind of engagaement I guess. So now we get to see the story move in a fast forward form. Waiting to see how the two of them accept their grand parents desire to unite both familes.
bye
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey another FF cant wait to read the next part please cont soon will be waitng to see what happens
beybye
Love Perveen
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey
you started a ff..i'm so happy.hurray
anyway interesting storyline as usual..
i'm a bit confused as well because jai is eleven an he drives a car??
anyway continue soon
nadia
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i was reading the title again and again... then started reading it... it stopped at an incomplete point... then i realised its a FF... omg,,, dhani writing an FF... its most welcome...

so bani is in Dehradun... and jai in mumbai...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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It was 'My Experiments with Fiction'. Actually I had shuffled between past and present, the lohri part was past, but bani and jai's parts were the present. It was a bit confusing but I think it was understandable. Jeenal dear, you literally had me in splits, jai is now 27 while driving the car, it was 16 years ago he got supposedly got married. I hope it is clear!!!!

PART 2

Mukesh paced up and down the hallway, bani had disappeared from the morning, and still there was no sign of her…he was about to go out to fetch her when he saw bani entering the house, looking lost…

"Bani, where were you?" he enquired…

"Apko zinda logon ki fikar kab se hone lagi, apko toh sirf mare hue logon ki padi hain…" bani said flatly heading towards her room, crossing the garlanded framed photographed of her grandfather…

Mukesh somehow refrained himself from shouting at her…kiran approached him from inside…

"Main baat karti hoon…" she said quietly…

"Bani ko samjhao kiran…" he said desperately…

Kiran left following bani into her room…
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Mukesh queasily sat in his study, his always chattering, prankster daughter had suddenly fell silent after he had informed her about her marriage…over the years he and uday had been so embroiled in their personal lives that meeting each other had become a lost prospect, they didn't even realize when things moved forward so suddenly, it felt as if yesterday only they were sitting in the sugarcane fields and chatting away animatedly… with the death of his father the occasionally get togathers also wore off, but it was the unexpected phone call a few days back that jolted him…it was a coincidence that the same evening he was talking about bani's marriage to Kiran that Uday had called to inform that Balwant bauji was very sick, he had only few months left…and that he wanted to see jai and bani getting married…he had agreed readily and hastily even decided a date for marriage, but somewhere he was fearing about bani's uncertain reaction…

Bani was unlike any other regular girls, she was intellectual and ambitious, she had this positive stubbornness and a driving urge in herself to do something in life, and he as a father was very proud of her academic qualifications, she wanted to study further and he supported her, she was very different, modern in her outlook and thinking but stuck to her traditional roots, but he knew somewhere he was expecting too much, today's generation thought differently and acted differently…but he couldn't break his father's promise…he felt helpless…

Mukesh got up and stood before his family portrait, his gaze lingered on his father who was sitting in the middle holding young bani… the phone ringed…

"Hello…" mukesh said…

"Sir, main Sarveshwar Caterers se bol raha hoon, apne jo shaadi order diya tha, sir uska menu decide karna tha…" a man said from the other side…

"Haan, aap ghar aajayiye, main apko list de doonga…" mukesh replied…
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Jai jerked out of his predominant thoughts…from the morning itself he was not able to concentrate on his work, his father's heavy, dramatic words still echoed in his ears, he loved his grandfather very much, there were two ways about it, but this was something too much to ask, he really couldn't bring himself to accept something as trivial as a baseless ceremony happened nearly 16 years ago which was evidently wiped out of his memory, he was just not ready to settle down, there was so much to be done, so many plans to be executed, so many projects to be undertaken, he was at a very crucial professional juncture where he only wanted to focus on his career, he had pre-planned everything, but all his rosy plans had been flooded in one second…he had nothing against anybody, it was just he didn't want to get married currently and that too with a complete stranger, he was mentally just not ready for it, but the older folk were adamant…

He felt a trapped, age khai to peeche kooan, he banged the table frustration…
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"Bani, meri baat toh sunn…" kiran pleaded her daughter, she knew bani could be stubborn, but this time around her stubbornness was reasonless and clearly overboard…

"Mujhe kuch nahin sunna hain maa…" bani said in an unemotional tone…

"Beta, par burai kya hain…"

"Burai maa, 16 sal pehle ki baat ko leke baithi ho maa, jab mujhe shaadi kya hoti who bhi nahin pata tha…"

"Bani, woh chod de, kabhi na kabhi toh shaadi karegi na…toh ab kyun nahin…21 saal main toh tu mere pet main thi…"

"Maa, who zamaana alag tha…mujhe aage padhna hain, kuch karna hain…"

"Toh shaadi ke baad padhlena…"

"Aapne khatam ki apni graduation, apne toh university top kiya tha, kya hua…parivaar, pati, bache, in sab cheezon main ulaj ke reh gayin, mujhe nahin chahiye maa…"

"Par beta…tere dadaji ne wada kiya tha…"

"Maa please, dadaji se main bohot pyaar karti hoon, par unka wadaa unke saath ki chala gaya…main kissi anjaan aadmi se shaadi nahin karoongi…"

"Shaadi toh hogi beta, faisla tujhe karna hain ki teri marzi se ya teri marzi ke bina…"

Kiran left…a haunting silence crept up in the room, bani started at her mother's retreating back, she was struck in this mess now…she racked her brain to come up with an idea to escape this facade…
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Jai stepped inside his house, it was dark, everyone must have retired to bed, it was almost midnight…feeling a bit happy to have escaped his father he stealthily walked towards his room, when suddenly the lights came on…he stood in the middle of the living room, blinking his eyes, watching his father who was casually sitting in the sofa…

"Dad, aap jag rahen hain…" jai asked…

"Tumhara intezaar kar raha tha…" uday said

"I was caught up in a meeting…"

"I know son…"

"Aapko kuch kehna hain…"

"Look jai, main jaanta hoon, you are working very hard and I know this time is very important for you professionally, aur mujhe poora yakeen hain you will succeed in everything, I just want to request you something jai…" seems these people have mastered in emotional blackmailing, jai thought in his mind bitterly…

"Dad, aap yeh…"

"Let me finish jai, I was a normal working man, but I had this dream of starting my own business, bauji ne apni zaameen bech kar mere business ke liye diya, woh mere sab kuch hain jai, bohot kuch kiya hain unhone mere liye, iss parivaar ke liye, unki bas ek hi icha hain, tumahri shaadi dekhne ka, please jai mujhe apne bauji ki kushi puri karne ka ek mauka do…please jai…" uday said sounding utterly distraught, jai neared his father…

"Dad, aap kaisi baaten kar rahen hain, theek hain, main shaadi ke liye taiyaar hoon…" jai said…uday's face lit up listening to this piece of information…

"Sach…jai…"

"Yes dad"

In a fit of excitement uday hugged jai so tightly that jai failed to breathe for a moment…
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Bani tiptoed into her father's study, after much brainstorming and weighing the pos and cons, she had finally inferred a conclusion, if the marriage was inevitable then she should just give in and enjoy her marriage…bani smiled mischievously to herself as she knocked the study door…

"Papa, main aa jaon…" bani said peeping inside… kiran and Mukesh were busy making the guest list…

"Haan beta…aaona…" mukesh was really elated to see her, it was the first time after he had broken the news of her marriage to her that she had called him so endearingly…

Bani meekly came inside and stood with her head slightly bowed…

"Papa, main jaanti hoon maine aapko bohot pareshaan kiya, hain, par main samajh gayi hoon, I am ready for this marriage…dil se…" bani said sounding sugary sweet…

"Bani, sach main, main bohot kush hoon…" mukesh smiled widely, while kiran looked baffled, her father's happy face pricked bani's heart somewhere but she deliberately ignored it…

"Bani, tumhe pata nahin aaj tumhare dadaji kitne kush honge…" mukesh continued…

"Pata hain papa, unki aur aap sabki kushi se badkar kuch nahin hain…mere liye…" she said a bit melodramatically walking towards her grandfather's photograph and pretending to look at it…

"Hum bohot khush hain beta…" kiran said regaining her self form the initial shock…

"Par papa, I want to continue studying after marriage…" bani said making her trademark puppy face…

"Haan beta, kyun nahin, maine unse baat bhi kar li hain, unhe koi aitraaz nahin hain…" mukesh said…

Bani smiled, showing off her pearly white teeth, she came and hugged mukesh from sideways…

"I love you papa…" bani said…

"I love you too beta…"
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Jai threw away the unopened envelope in the dustbin, it had the girl's photograph in it, he was hardly interested…he felt a sudden rush of adrenalin thinking about his actual plan which he had thought of painstakingly…giving himself a tap on his back he fell on the bed, slipping into deep peaceful slumber…
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Bani came back into her room whistling her new favorite tune…part-1 of her devious plan had succeeded…her eyes fell on the rack full of varied sized trophies and shields…it was not just like that, that she had got half of those trophies in Dramatics, she was indeed a tremendous actress, You can give completion to all the leading actresses bani, she said applauding herself…

She grinned naughtily…and found her sister staring at her open mouthed…

"Kya hua rano…" bani asked feeling all nice and energetic…

"Pichle ek hafte se you were sulking and now all of a sudden itni happy kaise…" rano asked quite startled by her sister's sudden change of behavior…

"Because I am getting married stupid…" bani hit rano's head playfully...and inserted the speakers in her ears, switching on to her favorite song…
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God bless
Dhani

P.S.: Jai and bani are upto something, wait and watch!!! Masala nahin hoga toh mazaa kaise aayega!!!!

A Happy Lohri to North Indians and a Happy Bogi to South Indians!!!!!

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