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Posted: 16 years ago
#21

Hello everyone.

Thanks mini for ur encouraging words and of course to kiddos and to all the silent readers as well part 5 would be updated by Monday this time positively......... 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
Hey Bhaiyya...
No need for THANX and all...😛 Itna formal hone ki bhi zaroorat nahi hai.... All the best for part 5.... Pls do post it tomorrow.... And NO DELAY this time...
Loads of Love...
Mini⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
hey mini i promise i wont delay it this time...... but i will update it by 9 at night ...... lil busy tomorrow u c AND

guys i know abhi thoda rona dhona chal raha hai but once all the characters get settled u will get to read the fun stuff..... armaan and his pranks at the school...... his gang and surya's success at business and lot more....... villians will be joining us soon too....... just wait and watch 😃

RR
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
KAL HO NAA HO
part-5


Kaka held him close . it was almost dark now the lights were switched-on on the rides and they could hear the sounds of people shouting in excitement ...... but both rudra and virendra were oblivious of their surroundings..... by then rudra had stopped crying and simply sat there with his head on his chest the onlookers thought that may be the child was not feeling well ........ then kaka spoke

'rudra " softly " ghar chalein beta...?? "

rudra noded and they both leave kaka held on to rudra's hand gently yet firmly as if to assure him that he is not alone ...... in the car too rudra looked lost .......

"rudra ... beta kuch bologe nahi"

he remained silent as if thinking what to say whether to say or not ...... but then he finally broke his silence

" kaka ...... papa aaye the mujhse milne....... unhone bataya tha ki wo jaa rahe hain...... hamesha ke liye ..... veer ke sath... ....... papa mujhse gale mil kar rone lage kaka ....... unhone kaha ki woh yahaan nahi reh sakte kyunki dadaji aur mumma unse naraaz hain ...... but he loves me very much" he pauses for a moment " kaka ?? papa aur veer kya kabhi wapas aayenge ??...... i miss them kaka ... i miss them very much....." he could not speak anything else and felt a lump in his throat

" beta kuch baatein hamein waqt aur haalat par chhod deni chahiye....... lekin beta aap kabhi umeed mat chhodna ...... n i know u will meet ur papa one day and veer too ...... and beta agar wo nahi aa sakte to kya hua aap to jaa sakte ho naa......"

rudra got hopeful at this " sach kaka !!!!..... lekin main to janta bhi nahi ki wo kahan gaye hain ..... kya aapko pata hai ??? "

" nahi beta i dont know but dont worry when the time comes your heart will tell u where to find them...." and he smiled at his grandson rudra too gave a half hearted smile and got lost in his thoughts looking outside the car window........

he was sitting in his classroom and Mrs.Kohli "the great hitler" was teaching them a poem "The road not taken' by Robert Frost she was blaring like a horn and there was a pin drop silence in the class he sat there supporting his head with his palm blankly staring at her face

'excuse me madam"

"huh... haan bolo tikamsingh.." (it was the school officeboy)

"madam principal saab ne rudra pratap singh ko bulaya hai..."

"O.K.... rudra !!" she yelled " go... principal sir is calling you.... and what have you done now hmmmm....?? "

sitting up straight he came out of his desk... " nothing...." and simply went out without giving her a second look he had never liked her much...... as he started to move towards the principals' office Tikam Singh said....

'wahan nahi.... chhote bachho ke ground ke paas bulaya hai.... wahan jaao mujhe medical room jaana hai dawai lene ...... tum seedhe wahin jaana ..... pata hai naa kahan jaana hai ?? "

"tikamsingh !!!! mujhe pata hai juniors playground kahan hai samjhe...!!! " he knew that he was afraid that he might play a prank on the way to ground he was mighty famous for his pranks and trips to principals office were quite common.......

as he started walking a thought came to his mind "juniors playground ???" and why Tikam Singh is going to medical room ???

" Veer !!!! kahin veer ko to kuch ......" and he started running skidding at the turns.......... jumping 4-5 stairs at a time

" heeyyyyy....... watch it ' cried a girl whose books went flying when he bumped into her

" ouch ...... hey r u mad...." shouted another boy as he pushed some of them to make way

* whistle* *whistle* the guards cried out "don't run in the corridor" but he was deaf to everything else what was in his mind was ......' is his brother alright ?? '

"god .... veer i told u not to be naughty......." he mumbled to himself it was a huge school with different building for juniors and separate middle and senior wing .... he came out to
the swing area of junior section and saw........

Veer climbing on the monkey bars.......... and as he saw rudra he shouted " bhiyyyyyyaaa come here...."

" veeeerrrr .... " coming toward him panting " aap jaante ho aapne bhaiyya ko dara diya tha..... aap class ke bahar akele kya kar rahe ho...???"

Rajveer chuckled " bhaiyya aaj hamari jaldi chutti ho gayi ...... papa hamein lene aaye hain humne ghumne jaana hai..."

"jaldi chutti..... kahan jaana hai aapne???"

"pata nahi aap papa se pooch lo wo rahe papa...." saying so jumped down the monkey bar and ran towards the other swings.....

his father was standing with the principal and he started walking towards them

" good morning sir ...."

" good morning rudra..."

" dad...?? "

" rudra your father wants to have a word with you... as soon as you finish go back to your class o.k "

" yes sir "

"thank you Mr . Mathew" shaking hands with him

" no problem Surya .. anytime .... i will take your leave now you guys carry on "

" rudra how r u beta ?? " putting a hand on his shoulder

" i m fine papa magar aap yahan..... "

" haan beta hamein aapki bahut yaad aa rahi thi ..... aur hamein aapse kuch zaruri baat bhi karni thi ....... chalo wahan chal kar baithe...??" pointing to a shady area which faced swing section fenced with fencing bushes . they sat down there as they had to keep an eye on a 'monkey' who was running around from one swing to another

" veeer ... be careful beta "

" oooookkkkaaaaaayyyyyy " as he ran towards the sand pit and did a high jump surya smiled

" i wonder how his teacher manages him ....... "

" don't worry papa he gets little mad when he comes here... "

" really !!! "

" hmmmm " and they both chuckled and as surya becomes serious so did rudra

" papa aap ghar kab aaoge ?? "

" rudra.." waiting for a moment " hum isi baare main aapse baat karna chate the beta...... ab aap bade ho gaye ho..... aur hum aapse kuch nahi chupana chahte after all u r my best friend...... ( smiles a little) aap to jaante hi hain ki dada ji aur aapki mom humse naaraaz hain ....."

" magar kyun papa...... i have asked them so many times but no one tells me.... mom veer se bhi naraaz hain .... kyun papa usne aisa kya kar diya ?? ghar par koi uska naam bhi nahi leta...."

" rudra hum jo aapko batane jaa rahe hai use jaan kar aapko shayad achha naa lage ..... aur ..... shayad aap hamse nafrat bhi karein ...... magar aapke liye yeh jaanna zaruri hai... the truth is that - Rajveer is your half brother "

" what .....!!!!!!!"

" yes...... Veer's mom Ragini died when he was born and i brought him home as your brother even your mom didn't knew about it but now....... aur isliye mom, dada ji aur baaki sab hamse naaraaz hai..... "

he was shocked ' what is he talking about.....'

" you had another wife....??? "

" huhhhh..... nahi Rudra she was not my wife she was my best friend ....... best in this whole world......"

"but... but you cheated on mom....!!!! " he was angry now he worshipped his father and is he the same man he is talking to now...... this man cheated on his mother

" no!! Rudra no !!! I never cheated on your mother I love her and even I didn't knew ....." he felt helpless as in how to explain..... " beta i can not explain what the circumstances were but I assure you i have always loved your mother no one can take her place in my heart beta.......... plz. try to understand me "

he turned to look at Rajveer

" Rajveer is not my brother " he mumbled

" NO !!" firmly " no Rudra he IS your brother plz. don't let this reality get between you two he worships you beta you are his idol ........ infact you have taken more care of him than we could ...... plz beta i need your support here plz. dont desert me...." there were tears in his fathers eyes .... god he has never ever seen him cry even when he got a nasty cut on his arm..... but the truth.... it was really shocking what should he do....??

" bhayyiiiaaaa......... bhaiyyaa......" Veer came running to him " huh...... huh..... yeh lo...."

taking something out of his pocket.... it was mars chocolate bar " yeh main aapke liye laaya tha aapko pasand hai naa....... " he said smiling , surya quickly wiped off his tears

" achha bhaiyya ke liye chocolate aur hamare liye kuch nahi.... to kya hum issme se thodi si le lein...??" surya said teasing Rajveer, making a brave face before him

" nahhhiiiinnnn yeh bhaiyya ki hai...... bhaiyya aap jaldi se kha lo nahi to dad kha jayenge....... "

he smiled at his brother who again went to swings jumping it was strange ..... what is he suppose to do?? how is he suppose to feel after knowing the truth...... but.... but he felt the same for veer ...... for his dad.... he could not speak anything he was confused with his emotions

" Rudra.... plz. forgive me son..... and .... and i wanted to tell u something else too...... we r going abroad ...... forever....... "

another thunderclasp

" leaving the country....???? "

" yes son and jaane se pehle hum chahte hain ki aap apne bade hone ki zimmedari sambhal lein..... beta aapki mom ki aur dadaji and dadi ki zimmedari hum aap par chhod kar jaana chahte hain hum jaante hain ki aap apne parivaar ka khayal rakhenge ..... plz rudra mom ko kabhi rone mat dena ....... and plz. remember beta no matter how far i m i will always love you..... plz. beta promise me ..... promise me Rudra ...."

he stared at his father what else is going to come up now ...... what other news to break him why can't he just say sorry to mom and dada ji but ... why am i thinking about it this man cheated on my mother he made her cry...... and all this while i was thinking that he cannot be wrong......... how stupid i was ......

" daddy i m tired.... i m thirsty....."

" haan beta chalo hamare jaane ka bhi time ho raha hai..... bas ek minute ok hum bhaiyya se kuch baat kar lein.... Rudra ......" he looked up at his father " plz. rudra..... " he hhugged him and then he saw his father again teary eyed ...... "yeh hum aapko aapke 15th birthday par dena chahte the...... hamein bhi yeh tabhi mili thi...... magar hum shayad tab yahan nahi honge hum chahte hain ki ise aap rakh lein ....... " giving him a gold pocket watch with a long gold chain Rudra held it blankly there as a time when he could do anything to get that watch he was fascinated by its beauty but he never imagined that he would be getting it in this manner....... " rajveer chalein beta..... "

"one minute daddy...... bhaiyya mam ne kaha tha ki jab jaate hain na to gudbye present dete hain taaki koi hamein bhule nahi...... main aapke liye present laya hun....." and he took out a red squeezy ball with a smily face painted on it and gave it to him " this is my favouritest ball aap na jab isko dekhoge to aapko meri yaad aayegi to aap na jaldi se mere paas aa jaoge..... ab mera present do..."

" aapka present ....??"

" haan ... mera present.."

" lekin ..... present...." then he thought of something and unclasped a gold chain around his neck and put it around Veer's neck it had an ornate RR on it ...... " yeh raha aapka present ....."

"thank you bhaiyya..... lekin aap na jaldi aa jaana ...... aur meri ball bhi le aana ok"

his father stood there speechless

" Rudra...... "

" dad ... aapko bhi jaana hai aur mujhe bhi class ke liye late ho raha hai..... i have to go.... "

he turned around and started to walk when he turned back again he saw his father was moving towards the main gate ....... holding veer's hand ..... veer turned and waved at him and suddenly he saw his hand rising to wave back at him ...... and then... they were gone.... probably forever....... he looked down at his hand the gold pocket watch and the small red ball he was holding with a smily face and despite of himself .... his anger for his father..... he smiled and a drop fell from his eye which he wiped away and headed back to his class....

" Rudra kya soch rahe ho beta ..... ghar aa gaya chalo...."

kaka's words brought him back to reality.......

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Sorry guys could not write much had an upset stomach but next part on friday will be a long one 😃

RR







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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
KAL HO NAA HO
Part-6


Kaka's words brought rudra back to reality.... he nodded and got out of the car as they entered the house they saw nalini who came up to them amd touched virendra's feet

"pranam kakaji .... aap kab aaye ??

"aaj afternoon main aaya tha beta magar main wahan se apne best friend se milne chala gaya" putting a hand on rudra's shoulder smiling

"kakaji main abhi aata hun ...." saying so rudra left for his room

" kaka wo theek to hai naa .... aaj subah....."

" haan beta main jaanta hun...... but i think he is ok now ...... much better.... avantika, bhai saab aur baaki sab kahan hain ...?"

"avantika to kitchen main hai aur pitaji bahar maa ke sath garden main hain ..."

"theek hai main zara unse mil kar aata hun..."

rudra went to his room and quietly sat on his bed he slowly picked up his nag opened it and took out a red squeezy ball and stared at it then he pulled out the gold pocket watch suddenly his mind was filled with yesderday's thoughts

" beta i wanted to give u this on your birthday but i don't think ki hum tab yahan honge....."

"bhaiyya aap jab aaoge naa to meri ball le aana plzzz.."

he smiled thinking about him, it must have taken a hell lot of determination for him to part with it he was very possessive about his things but then again some words echoed in his mind

" rajveer is your half brother......" " rajveer aapka sautela bhai hai ..... aapke papa ne hum sabko dhoka dia hai....."

suddenly his face hardened and clutching the ball in his hands he walked quickly towards his study table and opened a drawer and searched through it.... it was not there.... he opened the second one it was not there too he went to the left side and opened it and found it .... it was there...... he picked it up ... it was a picture ..... of two young boys the younger one was hugging the elder one from behind who held him as if giving him a piggy back ride .... rudras head was turned sideways to look at veer who was laughing... certainly enjoying his ride on his brother's back ..... it was clicked by their father..... he took the picture out of its frame and looked at it blankly...... there was another picture on the table ..... it was of an old man who wore an elegant black jodhpuri , head held up proudly and a young boy standing with him ...... it was rudra and his grandpa.... he again looked back at the picture he held in his hand .... rajveer and his..... he held the picture in his hands and..... tore it into two pieces..... and with the last look at the torn picture he left the room.......

in the garden devendra was pacing up and down lost deep in his thoughts...... the events of the morning still fresh in his mind... "mujhe rudra par hath nahi uthana chahiye tha .... aakhir bachha hi to hai... main use yeh baat aaram aur pyar se bhi to samjha sakta tha naa... " he felt a hand on his shoulder

" Ranaji kya soch rahe hain aap...?"

" kaushalya ... kahin rudra hamse nafrat naa karne lage..... ki hamne pehle uske papa ko ghar se nikaal diya aur aaj itni badi baat is tarah se uske saamne aayi.... aur to aur hamne us par hath bhi utha diya ....."

" haan yeh shayad aapna theek nahi kiya...." came another voice they both turned to see virendra kaka standing

"Virendra...!! kahan chale gaye the tum ..... rudra kahan hai pata hai hum kitna pareshaan ho rahe the.... "

"rudra theek hai ..... wo mere sath tha ..... namaste bhabhi...." virendra touched dadi's feet (his sister-in-law)

" jeete rahiye " she blessed him, virendra continued

" surya rudra ko sab kuch pehle se hi bata chuka tha...... wo kal usse milne gaya tha...."

"kya !!! to rudra yeh sab pehle se hi jaanta tha.... lekin usne hamein to kuch nahi bataya " kaushalya was surprised

" kya kehta .... kaun tha yahan jo uski baat sunta... samajhta.... apni naarazgi main hum yeh bhul gaye ki uss bachhe ke mann par kya beet rahi hogi...... surya ne jo kiya wo theek nahi tha magar uski saza rudra kyun bhugte....?? "

"lekin ab kuch nahi ho sakta virendra... surya jaa chuka hai aur yeh sab us bachhe ki wajah se hua hai usne hamse hamara beta duur kar diya.... aur surya.... hum use kabhi maaf nahi karenge aur hum sabke liye yahi achha hoga ki jitni jaldi ho sake hum un dono ko bhul jaayein ........"

"l..lekin ranaji aise kaise bhul jaayein..... ek bhi din aisa nahi beeta hoga jab hamein unki yaad naa aayi ho... aur veer .... wo to aapki jaan hua karta tha naa .... kya itna asaan hoga unko bhulna...??

" hua karta tha kaushalya..... hua karta "tha".... hai nahi.... hum un dono ko kabka apne mann se nikaal chuke hain aur aapke liye bhi yahi behtar hoga ki aap bhi jald se jald unhe bhul jaayein..... mar gaye wo hamare liye...." saying this he left the garden kaushalya stood there rooted on the spot.... virendra put a hand on his bhabhi's shoulder consoling her

" virendra... inhone kitni asaani se keh diya ki bhul jao magar kya ye kabhi ek maa ke mann ko samajh paayenge...... aur veer kitne araam se keh diya woh inka koi nahi.... kya woh khud reh paayenge apne 'armaan' ke bina.... nikaal paayenge usko apne dil se .....

" bhabhi sambhaliye apne aapko .... sab theek ho jaayega ..."

*sigh* sadly " kya theek ho jaayega virendra aur kab.... aur kaun jaane hoga bhi ya nahi.."

virendra went quiet even he too was not sure whether everything will be normal again like before

in the house everybody sat down for dinner

" rudra dekho beta aaj hamne aapka favourite gajar ka halwa banaya hai..." avantika said smiling she was really trying hard to bring things back to normal

" wow !! mom.... ummmmmm, it smells soooo good thanks mom ..... u know aaj main kaka ke sath ghumne gaya tha ... aur mom hum itni achhi rides par baithe .... kaka itne brave ban rahe the magar rides par dar ke maare bachho se bhi jyada chilla rahe the....."

everybody laughed they were enjoying kakas embarrassment and it was quiet sometime since they all had laughed .avantika was little surprised at rudra's sudden bubbly behavior but didnt say anything she has seen him smiling after soo long

" hey main darr ki wajah se nahi chilla raha tha ... wo to meri excitement thi ... u know..!!"

" virendra tum bachho ki rides par baithe the.....??"

" nahi bhaisaab .... wo to actually mujhe rudra ko company dene ke liye jaana pada"

" aha.... jhuth dadaji.... khud mujhe jabardasti pull kar karke le kar gaye the aur itna chilla rahe the ... itna to ve..." he stopped in mid sentence realising what he was about to say, but he quickly changed the topic as didnt wanted everybody to be sad again " arre next time aap chaloge naa to apne aap dekh lena..."

dadaji was so happy to see that his little grandson was now going up and was realising his responsibilities towards his family after the dinner everybody dispersed for their work dadaji too got up and as he was about to leave rudra called him

"dadaji" devendra turned

" dadaji ..... main kehna chahta tha ki.... main abse kabhi dad aur veer ke baare main kuch nahi kahunga .... kabhi unke baare main nahi puchunga...... i will be a good boy dadaji..... main aapko mom ko aur baaki kisi ko bhi pareshan aur dukhi nahi hone dunga..... i promise dadaji ...."

devendra walked towards him and hugged him tightly all his worries were melted away with these few words .... rudra saw his mother watching them she had tears in her eyes but he knew that she has heard him and was with him he assured her with a small smile which she returned ..... and he knew everything will be fine again.....

NEXT MORNING

rudra was getting ready for his school putting few books in his bag

" rudra hurry up beta aapka doodh ka glass aise hi rakha hua hai.... why havent u finished it yet...??"

"badi maa (nalini) ..... mujhe doodh nahi peena ..." he stopped doing his work looked at her and said seriously "i have quit drinking milk..." saying so he left quickly

" par beta ..... rudra....." she called but he was gone...... she stood there with milk glass in her hand..... surprised ny his behaviour he loved drinking milk......

" nalini....." she turned to see dadaji standing there " jaane do use .... wo nahi piyega....." nalini sighed and went away she knew very well that it was of no use rana men are stubborn bulls

AT SCHOOL

Rudra entered the school gate mansi got busy with her friends and went her way as he was walking towards his class his eyes fell upon some small children playing in the swing area he stood there watching them and suddenly saw a child who came there running and shouting
" yaaaaaaaaaaaaa" jumped and landed far in the sand pit as the boys back was towards him he could not see his face but suddenly he felt his heartbeat rise....

" is he... is he...." and then the boy turned...... it was not 'him' rudra came back to reality and took a deep breath suddenly his face hardened and he moved from there towards his class thinking

" rudra ... what are you doing ... you are still thinking about him ...... have you forgotten what you promised dadaji and mom yesterday .... and not to forget yourself....." he was repreminding himself for thinking about him .... just then he heard someoe called from behind

" oye..... rana ke bachhe..... where r u running huh...... are you afraid of me.....!!"

ridra turned back and .... smiled

" achha main darr gaya "chuhe" ......"

" arrre who are you calling "chuha" huhhh " the boy came up to him rolling his sleeves and stood in front of him with his hands on his sides and then they both laughed and hugged tightly

" achha abhi ek chuha le kar aata hun phir batata hun ki who is a bigger chuha ..... " he laughed " i'm soo glad u r back sameer...... i really missed u yaar" softly

" hey rudra.... " sameer sensed something was not right he knew his friend very well after all they were chaddi buddies but he knew he wont spill out untill he is at ease breaking his hug he said

" so .... mr.rana .... basket ball abhi bhi aata hai ya ........"

" U r challenging ME !!!!! i think its u who have forgotton who lost last time..... "

" last time is past lets see it now... first 15 basket wins"

" you'r on"

" but what will the winner get...?? "

" anything they wish.... now lets start "chuhe" "

he threw his bag away and they started playing and at the end rudra lost to sameer

" hehe ..... huh.... huh .....( panting) so mr.rana..... i think you need some oiling... and coaching "

" haan ...haan big deal....ek game hi to hai (sarcastically)"

" hey Mister u promised whatever i wish.... dnt forget..."

" yeah.. yeah i know..... like u r going to let me forget... so what do u want...??"

"later... but do u know.... there is a new admission in our class ....."

" what ??? now !!! its almost 2nd term "

" yeah its some transfer case...."

" who can say you were not here for full 2 weeks !!! how u get to know all the information?? "

" links beta .... sources...." rubbing his nails on his shirt

" oh come on.... so.. who is it ..... a boy or girl ??? "

" ohhooo mr. rudra is soo eager .... why?? why?? " teasing him

" sameeer " annoyed

" ok ok chill i dont know.... that stupid tikamsingh dropped in as i was listening to that ugly hippo..."

" i dont believe it !!! u were eavesdropping on that subramaniyam ......!!!! she would have taken you straight away to princi's office "

" really yaar i was missing it.... has he changed the decor..... two weeks without any visit to princi.... huhhhhh " he said dramatically sighing deeply "neway i m looking forward for that bakra... hehehehe " he gave a evil laugh

" sameer tu bhi naa.... " shaking his head " lekin sach kahu to even i was missing all the action yaar ....."

" same here man .... but i was just wondering agar "bakri" hui to...... " said sameer scratching his head

" arre simple yaar...... sundar hui to tu apni bhabhi bana lena aur agar ugli hui to main apni bhabhi bana lunga...... fine "

" yeah right...." and he again started moving... then he realised what rudra has just said " huhhhh .... rudra je bachhee .... ruk...... main batata hun abhi......" and he ran after rudra who was already on the run laughing... like this they reached the class room and crashing on their favorite seats laughed aloud clutching their stomachs......

" hahahaha....... peace man peace...... ohhhhh hahaha " rudra cried out

" rudra...."

" hmmmmm "

"its good to see U back buddy...." sameer said in a bit serious tone smiling a little

" yes sameer.... rudra is back....." he too said somewhat seriously and smiled nack at sameer

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new student in the class ...... whats going on in australia.....






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Posted: 16 years ago
#26

hey RR i m new here but i like your concept ....... nice story ........... waiting for the next part
mansi
Edited by mansibharti - 16 years ago

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