**premeer FF Jag diyaan rasman Part 2 updated **

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hello guyz , actually i wanted to write a Fanfic about our fav couple Prem and heer. hope u will like it.
story starts from today epi where heer is scolding gaurav by thinking that he is RR.
heer: i dont want to see your face. my life is already ruined enough but i am not goin to let u destroy it. please leave me alone.
gaurav wanted to say something but couldnt since heer would not let him talk. heer kept talkin about how her life ended with prem and she is only living for her family.
heer: prem chod ke kya gaya. meri to duniya hi ujad gayi. itne sallon ka intzar agar khatam nai hona tha toh prem kyun aya meri zindgi mein? mein jee to rahi hun par meri atma hi mujhse juda ho gayi hai. zinda laash hoon main agar tum ne meri zindgi mein ane ki koshis ki toh is laash mein sansen bhi nai milengi.
dats it for now
will update 2morow.
love
tina
Edited by Sunehari*Rose - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hmmm interesting... will be waiting for the next part... :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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interesting begining, please do cont.😊

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hello guyz , actually i wanted to write a Fanfic about our fav couple Prem and heer. hope u will like it.
story starts from today epi where heer is scolding gaurav by thinking that he is RR.
heer: i dont want to see your face. my life is already ruined enough but i am not goin to let u destroy it. please leave me alone.
gaurav wanted to say something but couldnt since heer would not let him talk. heer kept talkin about how her life ended with prem and she is only living for her family.
heer: prem chod ke kya gaya. meri to duniya hi ujad gayi. itne sallon ka intzar agar khatam nai hona tha toh prem kyun aya meri zindgi mein? mein jee to rahi hun par meri atma hi mujhse juda ho gayi hai. zinda laash hoon main agar tum ne meri zindgi mein ane ki koshis ki toh is laash mein sansen bhi nai milengi.
gaurav was confused. he never heard such a pain in some1 voice. he had never seen some1 who was madly in love with a dead person. he just wanted to stop her so she cananot be in pain. suddnly he dragged heer back on the wall and wind start to blow. he covered her lips so she cannot scream or talk. and then he lit his lighter. heer gets a flashback of her and prem's first meeting. gaurav was looking at her with confused look on his face. he could see a world full of pain in her eyes.
heer was shocked to see prem;s look like there. she never expected to seen her love's face ever again in her life. she could not believ that person she was crying for was standin in front of. she couldnt say his name since her lips were covered. but she knew that even if she try to say somthing she will not be able to speak.
suddnly gaurav hears footsteps. he remembered that wat could happen to him and dat gurl if some1 comes and c them together in this dark room. he ran towards the keys and used the back door to get out form that room. suddnly the lights turned back on. we see heer is still standing with wall and still in shock. she looked at the direction gaurav left in.
RR enters in the room. he sees heer standing by the wall. he has dat evil smirk on his face. heer comes back to the reality and notices RR there. she has tears in her eyes.
RR: kya hua heer? did u find your chand in this room to talk to? u didnt. i am so sorry.
Heer has a lil smile on her face and she points toward back door.
heer: wohh.... wohhhh aaya tha. mera...
she suddnly faints. RR is confused about her behaviour. but he does not pay attention to it at all and left from there leaving her behind.
on the ohter hand every1 is looking for heer. preet is lloking for heer in different rooms and suddnly he notices her laying uncocious on the floor. her runs toward her and picks her up. he gets out and call for help. couple of people come runing and her preet so heer can be takin to hospital.
we see every1 upset wandering around the hallways for heer. doctor comes out.
Preet: hows heer docotr?
doctor: she is fine. but u have to keep her away from any shockes. dat was the reson for her unconciousness.
docotr leaves from there leavin preet confused.
dats it for now
will update 2moro.
please do comment
luv
tina😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
interesting nice
do cont soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeee too good do update soon asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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that was amazing please continue!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey!
That was a fantastic first part!
She fainted due to shock....poor Heer!
Can't wait till the next part!
xXx
Sunayna
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