(Jan 7th upd)A Few Words of Love FF prt16-pg17 - Page 13

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Posted: 16 years ago
tash i LOVE ur story.. its so different! and i love the bold and beautiful rani!!!!!!! uve left us all on such a cliff hanger now..!!!! im hoping cr fails..... xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
YAY!!!! like I said to Raju I love updates!!!! Great work as usual!
Edited by sakuraa - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey folks, so it has been a while, I have been busy, and I think I forgot how to write. Bear with me as I slide back into the groove of things! Thanks for being my ardent reader! Love ya.





He looked down at Rani, at their joined hands and he felt his heart lurch within his chest. In all his life, he had never felt so carefree. He knew he was a Kunwar, such actions were looked down upon, yet as he held her fragile hand within his, he could not think of anywhere else he would rather be.

She looked up at him, he stared down at her upturned face and slowly bent his down towards her soft cheek. She closed her eyes. His mind went numb, all coherent thought seemed to have fled.....

Rani felt his breath, soft whispers of satin across her cheek, his lips touched her skin and sent a shiver down her spine. Almost like an electric currant through her veins. Her eyes shot open, and she looked into his eyes. She dared not move, lest his lips touch her, she was afraid she would melt....

His smoldering gaze devoured her, their breaths mingled, her wide eyed innocence and his carnal desire enveloped them while the lush grass sunk into their toes. They were so lost within each other they failed to see the man in the bushes.

***

"Jee Choti Rani, voh dono is park mein hai"

Choti Rani didn't find it important to reply back, she shut her phone off. She has asked her minion to spy on the two, and now was the perfect time to have Raja Sahab watch his older son in all his lustful glory.

She smiled to herself.

***

A rustling in the bushes caused Kunwar to look away from Rani's wondrous eyes, breaking the spell she spun around his heart his soul and his very being.

"Did you hear that" he asked her, looking around curiously for the source of the noise...

Rani nodded in the negative, her eyebrows inquisitive..

He dragged Rani towards him and tucked him up against his side, using his shoulders to shield her from anything even potentially harmful..."I think it is time we head back to the palace love, I am sorry to cut this short, but it seems there might be some unwanted visitors here"

Rani looked around trying to see who he was talking about, but she seemed to see nothing, she looked up him with a question in her gaze.

"i just have a hunch" He said.

Saksham was in the jeep, fast asleep,

Yudi shook him awake, he got in the car and made sure Rani was seated in the back.

As they made their way home, he was wondering who had the audacity to spy on him.

***

Choti Rani was waiting for Raja Sahab to blow up at the sight of his son and the mute servant girl. She told the driver to pull up at the spot where her informer said the two were. It was not far from the palace and her informer said they had not seen him, which meant that they were probably still lingering in the park.

She had told Raja Sahab that a few private charities wanted to meet at this park, when he asked why they did not come to the palace she just told him that they did not want to waste money on the transportation but rather use it for the cause, and since they lived close to the park it was just a walk away.

Raja Sahab of course believed her, and agreed to come. She smiled, she will avenge her son today.

As the care pulled up, her heart started beating faster, she looked around for signs of them, but she didn't see anything.

"Choti Rani?"

She turned to Raja Sahab. Dammit.

"They said they would be here Raja Sahab" Choti Rani kept scanning the area for Kunwar or Rani, where were they dammit! She tried to keep her anger in check. She will kill that stupid informer.

"Raja sahab, lagta hai kai voh loog ko kuch aur zarori kaam aagya. Hum mahfi chahte hai." She said

"Koi baat nahin, hum samajde hai, in loog bhi insaan ko madaat karte hai, I am not angry at them. I am proud that they did not let this Raja take them away from their duties."

Choti Rani gave a half smile.

Damn.


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Posted: 16 years ago
Oho Tash, back with a bang...wow. What a way to start the day. I'm all 😃 😳
Thank God Yudi heard and got them out of there. I'm not ready for RS to find out just yet.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Great Update Tash!! Good to see you back on the forum!!! I am glad u got the chance to update in between all ur busy planning!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Great update...... Yudi seems to be too clever for CR.......😉😉
Update soon......😍

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