Forbidden Love (RN fic) Part 5 pg-18

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Forbidden Love

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Capt. Rajveer Singh Shekhawat- An honest army officer who was declared traitor six month back. He was subjected to unthinkable sessions of torture and left to starve and fight every day for his survival.

Lt. Naina singh Anhuwallia-Lt. at Indian army..Presently posted at delhi head quarter.She came to know about Capt. Rajveer's case and her fight begins.

Lt. Aalekh sharma, Lt Pooja Ghai, Amardeep Huda, Lt. Sahani,Lt. Ali begh are friends from the accademy days'Now Naina , aalekh and pooja are posted together at delhi head quarter.Huda and Yudi are posted at Ladakh, and Ali is posted at Ambala.They all are RIMC- Rashtriya Indian Military College's passout.

It's a story of Naina singh Aanhuwallia's fight to regain the lost honour of captain Rajveer singh Shekhawat.

I am posting the first part now. Guys if you like it, i will continue.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Episode-1

Delhi head quarter: Brigadier's office

"May I come in sir?"Lt. Naina singh Anhuwallia asked knocking at the door.

"Yes Lt. come in."

"Is there any problem in the Raheman's case?"

"No sir. Actually I want to talk about another case."

"Which one?"

"Sir, I want to reopen Captain Shekhawat's case."said Naina confidently...She has made up her mind.

"Captain Shekhawat…means that traitor."

"Sir..He is not .."She was stopped by the Brigadier.

"Listen Lt. Singh, he is a traitor and it was proved six months back. There is no question of reopening the case."

"Sir, please listen to me once."

"Ok….Say, I am listening."

"Sir, the trial was one sided…no lawyer stood for him. Don't you think, he should get a chance to prove himself."

"Lt. So you are saying system is doing injustice to him. How could you say that?"

"Sir, don't take me wrong, I didn't mean to say that. Sir this system also promoted him from lt. to Capt. within a year for his excellent performance and bravery…In 3 years he has served our country brilliantly. You can't overlook this, sir. He deserves a chance at least."

"Ok…But I don't understand, why are you so interested in this case?"

"Sir, I don't want our country to lose a soldier like him, for our mistakes. "

"Hmm.. I'll talk to the higher authority .You will get the official order later on."

"Thank you sir."

"Lt. I believe you to do the right thing…Don't break my trust on you."

"I won't sir and thanks again Sir." Naina said before leaving the room.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Delhi central Jail

Here in the cell on the 12th floor we can see a man nearly 26 years of age with the knowledge that his eyes and his strength has started to fail. He has already been here six months, and has 13 and half more eternities of horror to serve.
Here he sits on a cane mat in a prison cell, where fungus and moss grow off the walls, and sometimes off him, where his only light is a flickering, fading candle, where the insects of the night seek comfort from the rain and the dark, with me huddled around this one candle, where the rain itself can seem like a living, breathing creature. This seems like the whole universe to him.

At the beginning, he has faith that the system will do justice with him…His faith faded away as the time passes. He has cried many tears and he is not ashamed of that either, to be broken hearted and obviously suffering trauma, not in front of the others. He was not an emotional wreck. But circumstances have snatched out the strength from him.

He has his mother and younger sister, whom he loves very much. But he had left them to fend for themselves amongst predators. How would they cope with? There are so many questions in his minds but no answers…

His companion and friend Aditya died 3 days ago who had no strength left to endure the torture anymore, he died slow and in pain, but he did not die alone, he died in his arms.
Who's arms will he die in?
Probably his questions will not be answered ever.
He has met worse in his short life.

Rain has a way of cleaning things, houses, streets, cars, and in some cases memories. As the rain is tip tapping on the roof and pouring through the bars of his cell, his thoughts tumble back, how did he manage to end up in this cesspit in the first place?

The rain outside is an incessant tap above him, and a torrent running in around him.
It's the memories of the past life that he has led that the rain brings so vividly to his mind. With every drop, dribble and splash, memories cascade through his mind, as does the rain gushing down the walls of silence that surround him, and the place where he is supposed to sleep.

How did he end up here? That is something he is still not 100% sure about.


Will he ever get justice?

No one needs justice until
they themselves are imprisoned.
Justice is not heresy;
It's the healing of the soul.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Army officer's quarter at Delhi

Naina was studying a case file when someone knocked at the door.

"Come in." Sh replied not even looking at the door.

"Itna dhyan se kya pad rahi hai?"Aalekh asked walking towards her.

"I am just going through a case file. Tu baith na."

"Kaunsa case? Raheman's case?"

"No no , not that one. Last week I came to know about a case..about a Capt. Who was declared a traitor six months back."

Naina continued, "I was surprised to know that he never got a chance to prove himself..No lawyer stood for him…no...I shouldn't be surprised…hai na aalekh.. After all it is not new…Bhaiya k sath bhi to yehi hua tha na. History repeats itself indeed." Naina sighed.

"I want to reopen this case. I talked Brigadier Malhotra this morning." She informed him. "Wo bhi to kisika beta hoga , kisi ka bhai hoga..un logon pe kya beet raha hoga.."She said being emotional.

"Naina"Aalekh called her seeing her unmindful. He knows that this case has reminded Naina about her and her family's dreadful past.

"You took the right decision. You have always my support Naina. Don't hesitate to ask me if you need any help in this case." He said putting his hand on hers assuringly.

"Thanks Aalekh."

"Ek baat samajh me nehi aaya…Brigadier itni aasaani se man kaise gaya?"

"It was not easy…I was having hard time to convince him. At last he agreed. I don't have the official order till now but I hope I'll get that in two days."

"That's good.Chal ab me chalta hoon."

"Hmm. Good night."

"Good Night and best of luck."

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Two days later

Naina was getting ready in the morning…Today she is going to meet Capt. Rajveer Singh Shekhawat. She gathered the essential files and put it into the bag and then stopped in front of the photo of his bhaiya which was hanging on the wall."Bhaiya aaj aapki behen ek case ladne jaa raha hai. As always, I am taking your faith and blessings with me. Jo aapke sath hua tha wo me Capt. Rajveer k sath hone nehi dungi bhabiya. It's a promise to you bhaiya, I'll return him back his name, career, his family and his lost honour." She made the vow to herself before she left for her next destination.
At Delhi central jail

A guard showed her the way to the cell. As Naina passed through the corridors of the jail, she looked inside the cells on the both side of corridor. As they reached, the guard opened the lock of the door. Naina examined the cell minutely…He was shocked to see it…How one can live here. The cell was gloomy and dark…there was no window at the wall..How one can live without seeing the day light for six long months…Her throat dried down of the very thought.

"Yeh, uth tujhse koi milne aaya hai."

The guard's voice broke her track of thought. She noticed the man who was lying there on the floor, curled into himself…There was not even a blanket in the cell.

He sat up hearing the guard…He took the support of the wall to sit up…He doesn't have that much strength left. His eyes fell upon the young lady standing in front of him…In the last six months he has met nobody except the guards of the cell. His mother and sister were also not allowed to visit him.No
one can understand except he himself, how is it likes being handcuffed and locked in a cell a long way from home or being sentenced to life imprisonment for something you did not do.

Naina observed the man…He has seen his picture in the case file earlier…But he looks different today. His face was pale…he has a beard now…his hair is much longer than it was in the photo. He looks weak. Naina was more shocked as her eyes fell on the chain with which his hands and legs were tied off. Her determination grew stronger and stronger seeing his pathetic condition.

As their eyes met Naina could find only void ness in his eyes.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Index
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Part 1 - Page-1
Part 2 - Page-5
Part 3 - Page-9
Part 4 - Page-13
Edited by Piya_2009 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow!!!!!!i m soooo glad that u hv started another fic and that too RN......really RN fics can never be enough for me..😊i love them sooooo much and miss them terribly.....thnx a lot for starting it....👏u know ur fic reminded me of veer zaara😊but definately i like dis one more as it has our RN..

cont sooooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HAPPY NEW YEAR.

I'm happy to hav another RN fic today. The intro n beginning is really gud.
PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Roshinikher

HAPPY NEW YEAR 😊😊

another RN fic yippeeee.....................
story is very interesting
continue soon

Thanx a lot for ur comment.
I am glad that u liked the concept.
I'll update soon.
keep reading.
Happy new year once again.😃
Edited by ayip - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: watch rajeev

wow!!!!!!i m soooo glad that u hv started another fic and that too RN......really RN fics can never be enough for me..😊i love them sooooo much and miss them terribly.....thnx a lot for starting it....👏u know ur fic reminded me of veer zaara😊but definately i like dis one more as it has our RN..

cont sooooon

Thanx a lot for your comment.
it is slightly different from veer zara as zara is defending her veer herself.😊
hai na?
i'll update soon.
Keep reading.
Edited by ayip - 16 years ago

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