Kamy,
Thanks a lot for this sweet FF……Loved each n every bit of it!!!👏👏Beautifully written! Jai with his memory loss n Bani as a bubbly girl ….You have portrayed his mental state very well.... ….I've totally enjoyed the banter btw JB….😃 She has already fallen for him n was a bit confused about her feelings in the beginning….liked the conv btw them in the kitchen….…He was also confused when she asked him abt his family. ….….…
2nd part
You ended it ?😭 .........Beautiful ending! Their relationship was soooooo cute! Simply loved every bit of it!!….😳😊 The way they fall in love with each other, their entire conv in the hospital, JB's flirting scenes,her anger, hurt n feelings of rejection when he refused to meet her, then the way he made her confess her feelings for him, each n every dialogue was mind blowing! Absolutely beautiful! PLzzz write another story! I love your FFs ……I'm greedy for more....😊
Luv,
Ammu.