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Ranjana, a beautiful end to a beautiful story. I am sorry to see that you had family members suffer due to the same addiction, but the fact that you are able to use that experience to teach others is the greatest thing possible. You are using those experiences for a better cause.
I commend you for writing such a piece of work because coming face to face or accepting these facts in life is not easy, even if it was an uncle, an aunt, or even ones father. Just like you had written, many times the people around us are in denial about what is going on. They stay in a rut, and continue to view life with rose colored glass.
But as Bani broke down the glass, some people noticed that what they had been seeing wasnt actually real- and the way you portrayed that was impeccable. Till the end of the story, there were still people who didnt accept her and despite her pleas to return to the house, JW knew what was for the better. It was a happy ending, with a tinge of bitterness because they lived away from the rest of the family.
I hope that you do write another story. This one was definitely intriguing till the very end. I am glad you wrote such a realistic and poignant story.
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I commend you for writing such a piece of work because coming face to face or accepting these facts in life is not easy, even if it was an uncle, an aunt, or even ones father. Just like you had written, many times the people around us are in denial about what is going on. They stay in a rut, and continue to view life with rose colored glass.
But as Bani broke down the glass, some people noticed that what they had been seeing wasnt actually real- and the way you portrayed that was impeccable. Till the end of the story, there were still people who didnt accept her and despite her pleas to return to the house, JW knew what was for the better. It was a happy ending, with a tinge of bitterness because they lived away from the rest of the family.
I hope that you do write another story. This one was definitely intriguing till the very end. I am glad you wrote such a realistic and poignant story.
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Jhanak
Shiv Shakti
