SS: A ruined Life (Part 5) 11/12(Pg 17)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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This is a SS that I thought about long time back... but there was something missing from it.... when i had realized wat was missing from it..... But now its really too late... to put this into a FF... so i am making it into a SS in 5 parts!!!!.. Hope u guys like it!😕 If not tell me... wont bother with the other parts!!!!!!😕

Now... this is typical KS as always...but at the same time.. its not!!.... but its just gonna seem like it is!!!




Part 1

The wedding was done and over with…. Everyone couldn't believe what just happened!!…. The marriage was suppose to be between Pia Dixit and Jai Walia… But that so didn't happen!!!>.. When Jai had lifted his bride's veil he was stunned to see that it wasn't Pia… who it was suppose to be…. It was her elder sister.. Bani Dixit!!!…. Jai had just stood there and he didn't realize wat was going on!!! She was shaking like anything!!….

Rano was standing next to her husband Ranveer…. They were both just sitting there…. Ranveer felt weird…. His uncle was marrying his sister in law…. But if his mama was happy then who had the right to say anything!!! Jigs wasn't happy with their marriage at all!!!!!!…. But since she loved her son….. she was apparently his son's happiness…. So she let it go… but that didn't mean she would be nice to Rano!!!… Rano knew how she was going to be treated by her mother in law… so it was nothing new to her!!… Although Jigs never said anything in front of Ranveer…. Only when he wasn't around she would take the advantage and say something to her…..

But the fact that her sister was going to marry Jai… it was something that Rano herself didn't want!! Rano knew that there could only be one reason and that was because Jai had the money!! There was no other explaination!!… Rano was thinking that she should have thought about Bani before herself… because…. Bani was the oldest…. And she herself.. hadn't gotten married yet!! She only married Ranveer because… Ranveer wanted it…. Rano was scared to tell Bani about it… but Ranveer had asked permission and Bani had agreed to it!!!!…… Rano was actually looking for Bani but she couldn't be seen!! She was thinking where she was….. how come she wasn't seen around the crowd…. Little did she know… that her Bani Di…. Was in place of Pia!!!!!!!!!

Jai knew that something was up… but he didn't know what!!! He really couldn't say anything because the whole media was there….. the last thing he wanted was his story all over the world!!… Jai had an angry look on his face…. And he had put on the sindoor so hard on her forehead…. And he was really angry!!…… He had put the mangalsutra around her neck…. And he had looked away!!!

They were officially announced husband and wife!!!!…. everyone was clapping and they were all thrilled!!!!…. Once the wedding was over…. Both of them had come to WM!! But Jai was so outraged…. That he had just gotten out of the car and he had entered inside…. Even without a proper welcoming!!!!!…

Everyone was wondering wat was going on….. When they thought that Pia had entered… she had come inside the house…. Adi…. His best friend had asked him wat had happened!!

Adi: Jai? Wats wrong? Why are you upset?

Jai: Upset isn't even the word to describe how I am feeling right now…My blood is fuming right now…… I am so outraged… right now…. That I swear to you…. I can literally punch a hole through the wall right now!!

Adi: But wat happened??

Jai: Her….. this woman standing in front of u…. that's wats wrong wrong!

He had pointed to his wife… Adi was so confused!!!

Jai: You don't understand do u??

Adi: No not really!!

Jai had walked over and lifted the veil off…. And everyone was stunned to see Bani as the bride and not Pia!! Rano herself was shocked and she had covered her mouth…… wat in the world was going on… and where was Pia???

Jai: You ask her!!!…. Why is she the bride??? Why? And where is Pia?

Bani was looking down….. Rano was looking at her… she even wanted to know wat was happening!!!!….

Jai; So??? Where's Pia??

Jigs was looking at her…. She wanted to know wat Bani was going to say…. She was waiting for an answer!!

Jigs: Speak up Bani!! Jai wants to hear an answer from you!!!… And we also want to know! Where is Pia??????

Bani: I don't know where she is!!!!

Jai: What?? You don't know???? How can you not know? She's ur sister?? Where could she disappear off to?

Bani really had no idea where Pia was gone….So what answer could she give!

Jai: Rano…..

Rano's head shot up at him….

Jai: Where is Pia? She's ur sister u should know!!!

Rano: I don't know where she is!!! And I personally don't care!!!!

Jai was looking at Rano!!!… He always knew that Rano was feisty!!...!! and she was never scared to talk back….. but the way she was talking he knew… that she couldn't have anything to do with this…..

Jigs: Oy Rano! How dare you talk to Jai like that? He is elder to u!!!!

Rano: He's asking me where my sister is!!!… I don't know where she is!!.. I never wanted her to marry him in the 1st place… becuz I knew why she wanted to marry him… only becuz… she could be Mrs. Jai Walia… to have the name and the status….all she thought about was Money!!.. there was no love in it!!… What does love have to do with it??? …. by marrying him she would have it all!!!!!….. She was my sister 1st… before… anything…. So I have the right….. Now I am also wondering where she is… becuz of all people she should be here… she had the chance and she could've gotten wat she wanted…. But you Bani Di…. Why??? Why are you standing here as his bride???

Bani was looking at Rano!!!…. She couldn't say anything!!!… Bani had no answers for anyone!!….. Jai was looking at Bani…. Jai had grabbed Bani by the arm… and he had literally dragged up her up the stairs… Adi was calling at him but Jai ignored him…. Rano was shocked!!!… wat was he going to do!!!!…… Jai was grabbing on to her tightly… She wanted him to let go…. He was hurting her…. When he had opened his bedroom….HE had literally pulled her hard inside the room….. and he had closed the door….. Bani was looking at him and she was scared out of her wits….

Jai: U couldn't open ur damn mouth downstairs….. But now I want you to speak up….. tell me…. Where is Pia???? Where is she dammit????? ….. Answer me!!

Bani: I really don't know where she is!!!

Jai: Then why are u here as my bride???

Bani: Becuz Jigs di..

Jai: Leave my sister out from this!!!…. No excuse is going to work!

Bani: But…

Jai: No!! I only want to know about Pia's whearabouts!!!… Where is she??

Bani was quiet…. Wat could she tell him… Jigs had told her to go to the mandap and get married to him!!… SO that way… Jai's name wouldn't be looked down upon!!..

Bani: Jigs di… had told me to do this!

Jai: Shut up Bani!!!…. My sister would never do something like that!!! Why would she??? Tell me….. Don't even put her in this…. This is between u me and Pia… Did u do something to her?? Or did u want to be in her place??? Becuz if she married me… then u would be all alone wouldn't u…. are you jealous??

Wat was there to be jealous about????

Jai: Well now we are married…. And I hope that u are happy!!!….. If this is wat u wanted then congratulations… u have won!!…

Bani: believe me Mr. Walia…

Jai: Believe u??? Why should I?? Give me one good reason!!.. U are nothing compared to ur sisters… nothing!!.. Just because… everyone else was getting the attention… and u weren't..

Bani: Why would I want attention?? I don't need anything! As long as my sisters are happy… that's all that matters…..

Jai was looking at Bani!!!…. Bani was so terrifed… she couldn't even look at him!!…

Jai: Why aren't you looking at me Bani???? Huh?? Are you scared??? Why should u be scared?? If ur telling the truth… u should fight for wats the truth….

Bani: I am trying to tell u… but u aren't believing me???

Jai: You accuse my family…. I will not tolerate anything said against them!!!!

Bani: Then whats the point… ur family means everything to u!

Jai: Of course they do!!!

Bani: Why don't u ask ur sister?? She did this! She told me to sit at the mandap!!… Pia wasn't here… so she told me…

Jai: No! she wouldn't do anything like that!!… She would've just stopped everything!!! But not let it go this far!!

Bani: Go and ask her!!

Jai was looking at her….He had left from the room to go to talk to Jigs!!… Bani was just standing there….. After like 30 mins…. Jai had come back…. Bani had taken off all of her jewelry…. And Jai had stormed inside….. Bani had gotten up… and Jai was looking at her…..

Jai: U wanted me to find out the truth right?????……… And I did!!

Bani was looking at Jai…. And Jai had slapped her one!

Jai: This was all ur plan wasn't it????

Bani was confused…. Wat the hell happened??

Jai: You did this all!! You had told Pia to go away…. So you can have me to urself!!! Didn't u?

Jai had showed her the letter that Jigs had gave him… and it was a letter from Pia… telling Bani that you can marry him as u love him….. and I wont let anything stand in between you guys…. Bani stood there and she wasn't moving!!!!…. Where did this twist come in the picture???

Jai: So I was right….. You wanted me…… You did this for ur happiness…… for ur benefits….. well now… u will see wat the outcome is…. For messing with Jai Walia….

Bani was looking at him…. And he had grabbed Bani by the shoulders… and he had thrown her on the bed…. He was looking at her….. and he was telling her… that now she will get wat she deserves……

Bani: What are you going to do??

Jai: Something that u wanted right???…..

Jai had literally taken off her sari and Bani was trying to run away from there…. She was telling him to let go… but Jai wasn't listening at all…… He had her pined down under him…. And he had held on to her wrists….. and Bani was pleading like anything……She was trying to make him let go… but he was just to strong for her…. Bani was begging and pleading for him not to do anything….

But then he had claimed her… and it was a night that she will never forget for the rest of her life!!!!!!!!!!!!….. Jai had gotten up after finishing his so called business and he had left the room and Bani had just laid there not moving one bit….. Her life was no officially over!!!!!!!! For something that she didn't even do….. she had gotten the biggest punishment of her life!!!!!!!!!

No woman deserves to be treated like the way she was just treated….. she was a victim of this…… who could she cry too?? Who could she tell??? There was no one she could turn too…. She had forced herself to get up from bed… and she went inside the bathroom…. She was so ashamed that she couldn't even look at herself in the mirror……

She had turned the shower on…. And she just stood there under the water…. And not moving….. and she had slowly just fallen on the ground….. and she just poured her heart out like anything!!!!!!!!!!!

The following morning….. Bani was just sitting by the window…. And she was just in a daze…. Not moving an inch….. her stomach was hurting like anything…. He had hurt her… and he had hurt her badly….. she couldn't even move….. Jai had punished her in such a hurtful manner….

He had walked inside the room…. And he saw that the bed was still the same…. And nothing was done…. He had seen Bani sitting on the floor…. By the window…. And she had slowly turned and saw him…. Not even one show of concern was on his face….. he didn't regret wat he had done…..Infact… he personally didn't even care!!!!!…..

Jai: My masi is coming to town today!!!…… And she wants to meet u!!!!….. She will be coming by 2!!!… So get ur act together… put on a sari… u don't really need to act like ur happy becuz I know that u are happy!!… Ur probably just doing this so I can sympathize for u…. but its not going to work!!! I pity nobody!!!!!!!!!!!

He had said that and he had left from there!!!.... Bani was in the room until the time that Masi had gotten there!!... Bani was in pain… and she didn't even have anything to eat!!!... Rano had gone inside the room just to see how she was doing…. But Bani didn't tell her anything and she didn't even talk!!.. Rano had told her that she could talk to her… but no words were coming out of Bani's mouth!!...

Rano had left from there… she had tried to talk… but it was no use!!... Masi had ended up coming and she had come around 230!!!....Everyone came up to her and took her blessings!!... Jai had heard her coming so he came out of his study….and he came downstairs and hugged her!!!!.....

Masi: How are you???

Jai: I am fine and u?

Masi: Of course u would be fine!! U have gotten married finally!!... Took u long enough!!!... So where's my Bahu?

Jai: She's upstairs…. Let me go and get her!!! U come inside and sit!!!.....

Masi had come inside…. And no one said anything! They had all acted as if everything was great!!..... Jai had strictly told them….. not to let Masi suspect anything!!!!!

Jai had come inside the room and told her that Masi was here!!... Bani was standing by the mirror…. And she had looked at Jai!!! Jai was waiting for her to come!
Bani was ready… and she came close to him and she was shaking!... She didn't want to be near him… because he was scaring her like anything!!... He had just started walking and she came behind him!!.. Masi had looked her bahu… and she smiled!!!.... Masi had stood up…. And Bani bent down to take her blessings!!

Masi: God bless you my dear!!....

Masi had held her face and she had kissed her forehead!!... She had thanked Bani for filling that emptiness in Jai's life!!... Bani just looked at her… she didn't say anything!! Not one word came out of her mouth!!...Masi told Bani to sit next to her on which Bani had done so! Everyone was talking to Masi and asking her about her trip and what not…just trying to keep a conversation flowing!!!!

During dinner….. Everyone was seated…. And Bani was standing up… masi had told her to sit down with the rest of them…. And she had done so… she had sat next to Jai…. And she just looked down!!!....

Bani had to really excuse herself… but she couldn't sit any longer… and she really wasn't feeling well!!...

Bani: I am sorry! But I really don't feel well!!...

She had gone upstairs….

Masi: Arre what happened to her??

Jai: She hasn't been feeling well all day Masi!!...

Masi: Is she okay? Do we need to call a doc?

Jai: no she will be fine!

Jigs: Yes Masi don't worry! She will be fine!! She's just getting adjusted to this new life style!!

Masi: Okay! If you guys say so!!!

After dinner was over…. Jai had showed Masi her room….. and told her to go to sleep… as the traveling might have worn her out!!... Once she was gone to bed…. PJai had made his way upstairs…. He had opened the door….. he didn't see Bani anywhere…. He was wondering where she was…..

He had seen the bathroom door open and the light was on…. When he had walked inside….. he had seen her lying on the floor…. and her forehead was bleeding….. and he was just looking at her!!!!!!!!!!




plz comment!!!

Next Part: Do Not Know yet!!.. But it depends on wat u guys think!😕

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jnawaz thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ME!!!

so i wrote this super long comment...and then my internet lost connection and i lost everything that i had written...😭😭😭...that is like totally not fair...im crying over here 😭😭😭...jaani...i dont have the energy to write it all over again...😭😭...ill just tell you what i think when i talk to you later tonight 😃😃😃

love ya, miss ya tons...😳😳

JAZ

Edited by jnawaz - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guli pla cont soon
the start was good
ghosh how jai can be so cruel
and hope jai saves bani
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guli..
loved this story..
wonder what will happen next..
was that letter really by pia or did jigs force it??
hope u continue soon..
really want to knw what happens nxt!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was great start Guli please update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guli.. grat part.. great start yaar.. plzz do continue soooon hun.. wow poor bani.. got rapd by her hubby.. i am sooo mad at jai.. he really did ruin her life.. did bani commit suicide?? or try?? o well conitnue sooon yaar.. cant wait for the next part...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Jai is so evil 😡 😡 .....he better save Bani now or else 😡
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Posted: 17 years ago
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jai is sooo mean😡😡😡 poor bani😭
hope he will save bani
plzzzz cont.sooonnnn
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Omg!! Awesome start jaani!
5 parts??? 😲 i thought you had said like 2 parts [:S] no worries!! More the Merrier!!! 😆
Jai is such a dooshbag!!😉 sachi! how can he hurt bani like this?? Bani better now forgive him easily!! I'd just leave him after he knows the truth!! even though if he repents!!! He deserves JUST that! And Jigs...dont even make me start!!!! 😡
Continue SOON!!! Loved it!!! 👏
Edited by ~Pachu*n*Abhi~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey fr8 start guli
i hate this jai he is very cruel
did bani commite cuicide?
hope jai saves her
continue soon

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