FF: Is this Love?? UPD. (Pt. 32a Pg. 76)

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priya

@Priya_SD

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Hey guys!! Priya here! This is my new FF..I'm really sorry for ending the other one...I kind of lost the magical feeling of it that I had...btu here's a new one!!

Characters:

Divya: A simple sweet girl, but you have to get on her good side first. Otherwise, if you don't make a good impression of her, she won't bother to talk to you again. She's both tradtional and modern.

Prachi: Divya's sister, very bright and bubbly. She has a huge crush on Jay, but she hasn't told him yet. Jay barely notices her.

Amar: The hottest guy in the college, so all the girls are always all over him. Jay is his best friend, pretty much like his brother.

Jay: Another "Amar" basically. Except he only hangs out with those girls, not actually go out with them. But his mom is getting on his nerves talking about marriage.

Aman: Divya's former BF, currently going out w. Ayesha

Ayesha: Aman's GF, used to be Amar's

Ok so I'm going to start working on the update!! Hope you like it!!

Edited by Priya_SD - 16 years ago

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi Priya !

This is Vidya !!

Your previous ff was toooo good ...

And I am sure you will keep up the good work this time also ....

Congratulations...for your great start

And all the very best !!!!

Vidya

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priya

@Priya_SD

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

^^ awww thank you Vidya!!! I'm working in the update! Hope I finish b4 u get offline!!

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

How much more time may I know?

Vidya

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priya

@Priya_SD

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Part 1:

It's morning and we see a girl sleeping in her bed, on her stomach. Just then, another girl comes into the room, and sets the alarm to ring in 30 seconds. Then she puts it by the girl's ear. "RRRIIINNNGGGG!!!!!!!!"

"AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!" The girl screams. The other girl laughs.

Divya: 7:30??? Tumne mujhe uthaiya nahi?? Prachi you know you're supposed to wake me up!!!
Prachi: Aww Divu, I'm sorry sweetie!! (giggles) Now come on!! Get up and get ready!! Jaldi!
Divya: Half an hour isn't nearly enough. I mean I'm a girl you know!
Prachi: Me too!! But hey, if you don't hurry, you're only going to have fifteen minutes.

Divya ran into the bathroom. Prachi went downstairs and grabbed an apple. She plopped on the couch and took a huge bite. As she chewed it, she smiled at Divya's innocence, and of course, her good plans.
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After what seemed to be an hour, Vidya stumbled down the steps, trying to put on a pink pencil heel.
Divya: Ok I'm ready!! Let's go!
Prachi: Breakfast??
Divya: Umm...canteen main..I'll grab a bite! Now hurry up! I can't afford being late again.
Prachi: Ok ok...coming!

Divya and Prachi were walking to the bus stop, and Divya's duppata got caught onto a bush. She tugged onto it, and it didn't budge. She walked back and tried to remove it, when she heard Prachi scream. She jerked her head forward.
Prachi: NOOOO!!!!!!!!!! WAIT!! RUKIYE!!!!
Divya: Prachi!! Stop the bus and hold it for me!!
She tugged on her duppata, and a small corner ripped, but it got off of the sharp thorn. She pricked her finger on it.
Divya: Ouch!!
Ignoring that, she ran to the bus. The bus driver, whom everyone called Mohan kaka, shook his head. Divya always had some sort of excuse for being late. He prepared himself to listen to another one.
Mohan: Phirse derri Divya?
Divya: Kya kaka, mera duppata---
Mohan: Kher chodo. Ab jao, betho.

Divya sat down next to Prachi. She took out her math book, and a paper and pencil. She looked pleadingly towards Prachi, and put on her puppy face. As usual, (well sometimes) Divya completely forgot about her homework. And since there was alot of traffic, it would take alot of time to get to college.
Prachi: Let me guess. (cleared her throat) Prachi, sweetu, please please please let me copy your homework. I promise, I will return the favor...just help me!! I don't want to fail, and if I do, Maa will kill me. Please?
Divya: You know, you're getting good at this.
Prachi took out her homework, and Divya struggled to finish it. By the time they got to college, Divya had finished. Prachi and Divya got out, and walked to the canteen. Surprisingly, they had reached college early and they had 45 minutes to get to class.

At the table, Prachi and Divya were sitting alone. Not many people were even at the college yet. Just a few people in the canteen, and the other couple in the library.

Divya: Where is everybody today?
Prachi: Pata nai....(sighs)
Divya looked at her in confusion. Prachi had her weird moments. Out of nowhere she would start talking in Hindi. And she never spoke in Hindi. At least, not when she talked to Divya.
Divya: What happened to you?
Prachi: Look over there! It's Jay. He's so damn hot Divya!! Kaash he would talk to me.
Divya: You want me to call him! J--
Prachi covered her mouth.
Prachi: No are you crazy?? I want him to talk to me, not the other way around! You know, that would atleast feel romantic...somewhat....kind of...well, all I'm saying is, that I don't want to be the one that is all gaga over him. And I know I am, but I want to get his attention.
Divya put her chin on her hands, and put them on the table.
Divya: Kaash woh abhi mil jaye....
Prachi: Kaun?
Divya: My soul mate!
Prachi: You believe in that?
Divya: Why not? I mean someone that will be with you all your life, har janam main, har duniya main. Don't you believe in that?
Prachi: No....but love at first sight, yes...like for me, with Jay. I mean it may be one-sided, but so what? All I need to know is that I love him.
Divya: Yea...well, can we please go eat something?? I'm starving!!
Prachi: Oh sorry. Let's go!

Precap: Amar's intro.

Hey guys, hope you liked it! And Vidya, this one is for you!

Edited by sharad+divz4evr - 16 years ago

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priya

@Priya_SD

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Sorry I posted twice!!

Edited by sharad+divz4evr - 16 years ago

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Hey!!

The update was tooo good !!!!

Divya is soooo funny and cute !!!!

Hmmmm , homework nahi karti time par..... Very Bad😉😉😉 Bus me bhi nahi karna chahie😛😛😛

Anyway , The update was fantastic ...

I lovveeeeedd it !!!!

I wonder how will I cope up with soooooo many great FFs ...

Its hard .... So you are also added to mu bugging list from now on.....

Yippeee.. I'll bug you for updates....

Thanks a ton for this lovely update!!

Vidya

Edited by Vidyaa - 16 years ago

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Maria

@bmtd11

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Fantastic hun! I loved this new FF of yours. Continue soon!

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priya

@Priya_SD

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

^^^ Awww thank you Vidyaa!! I will update soon! hehe ur bugging list!! and yes, Divya is kind of like me!! lol!!😆 i noe, I;m bad, not doing my Hw...but im lazy! and Divya is too.