FF:~Hamari kahani~ part 4 updated (11/19)

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Amerra

@esquire1

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hello Guys,
Remember me....I wrote the fanfic "love is all around".I took a break from there and started a new one called "Hamari Kahani".In this fanfic it has obviously Prem and Heer but there is no marriage in here.Its just friedship to love then death!!!!! I wanted it to make it alittle different.I'm not good at describing scenes, but I'll try hard to describe so please bare with me.

I'm not going to add character sketch.....

Index:

Part1,2,3:Page1

Part2:pg2

Here you go:

Part 1:

"Come on Preet,we are getting late"Prem called out to his younger brother across the loud train station.Preet was flirting with a girl he just sa.He didn't pay attetion to Prem who calling him.Prem came over to Preet andpulled him with him.Preet called out to the girl"call me somtime." They both got out of the train station and "finally we're in Mumbai and I hope the house is all set" said Prem.Their parents came to Mumbai from USA.They arrived in Mumbai 5 weeks before to buy a new house and shift there forever.Their parents had set up theire rooms because they know their sons too well.Prem liked baxketball, he won too many trophies and metal.Now he is in bussiness

with his dad.He helps him out.Preet is completely different from Prem.He

likes to ride bikes and got himself hurt alot of times because of riding the bike fast.He obvioulsy likes girl and flirt with them.Theree was a car that was waiting for them.They got in and drove to their new house.They arrived there,while they were getting out.A girl was getting out of her house ans shsr was none othere than Heer.She lived next door to the Juneja Family.She was

wearing an anarkali suit that baby blue, with blue jewley and blue high heels.She wasn't like other girls in Mumbai.She was very respective, honest and wasn't revealing, mostly loved to dance.She called out to her moo"ma, I'll be back by lunch."She closed the door.Prem saw her and couldn't take her eyes off of her.He beautiful eyes the color of chocolate.Preet saw him that and snapped his finger in front of his face and asked him "PB where did you doze off?" Prem came back to reality and told him"nothing, let's just go

in."

Thats it guys!!!!!!! I hope you like it. It depends on your comments wether I should continue or not.

See ya guys!!

Edited by Penzee2007 - 16 years ago

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Sunayna

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey! That was an awesome start! I loved your other FF and i love this one too! Continue soon! ?xXx? Sunayna = ]

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Amerra

@esquire1

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Posted: 16 years ago

come on ppl how can I continue if u guys don't comment!!!!!!!!!!!!😒😒

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey
awesum part 1
loved it
do cont soon...

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Amerra

@esquire1

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

Ciao Guys

Well today I'm gonna update 2 parts Part2:

The two boys walked into their house and saw that nonoe was home.They called out for their parents but there was no response.Prem went into the kitchen and found a note on the counter.He picked it up and read it.It said" Dear Prem and Preet.We aren't home,whenyou come home.First put some fresh clothes on and then come to the house next door.House #146.We are there an are going to have lunch there.We are waiting for you guys there and See you there." Prem knew who wrote this letterand it was from thier mom.Prem told Preet and both headed for their rooms.They unpacked their bags and took shower.They put different clothes on and headed downstairs.They went nextdoor and rang the door bell.Teji answered the door, before Prem could speak.She asked them"you two must be Gayatri and Lalit ji's sons." Prem smiled at the lady and said"yes we are their sons." Balraj, Lalit and Gayatri were sitting in the living room.They came and Lalit intorduced them to Balraj.They took the elders blessing.Then they sat on the couch and looked around the house.Balraj told them"sorry guys We don't have any sons.We only have 1 daughter named Heer." Prem thought to himself"the girl I saw before came out from this houseand she's their dauhter and her name is Heer.WOW!!!! What a unique name and she's only mine and nobody elses." Preet saw him again dozed of in his own world, he nudged him with his elbow.Preet asked him"PB where did you doze off again?" Prem came back to earth and told him"nothing and smiled."

Part3:

It has been an hour Prem and Preet came.Teji told everybody"luch is ready,I just have to call Heer." Teji left and went in the kitchen.She prepared the lunch and palced the lunch on the dining table.She called everyone to the table and Prem got a call.He told everyone"you guys go ahead, I'l come after I attend the call." Everybody left to eat while he was talking.The door bell rang, Prem thought that some one will getit.But no one came.He ended his call and went to answer the door.He opened it and it was Heer and she asked him"who the hell are you? and what are you doing in my house?" Before Prem could speak, she started to slightly yell at him.Prem couldn't control himself and he yelled"SHUTUP!!!!" He covered her mouth woth his hands and he told her"will you shut up for a second.You are keep blabbering your mouth and keep saying crappt stuff to me.Listen girl, unfortunately I'm your next door neighbor,Mr.Junja's son Prem Juneja.Now let's go evevrybody is wating for us at the dining table.I get very cranky when I'm tired and hungry." He let go of her and left from there.Heer stood there watching him leave and said to herself"wow what a mood person." She left for the dining room.She came sat across from Prem.Preet saw her and checked her out.Prem saw him eyeing Heer and warned his younger brother"listen littleboy she's not that easy to get.She's only mine got that!" Preet was amazed and told him" WOW PB where did my brother go who only was into work and now he likes this girl that he just saw 2 minutes ago." Prem told him" now shut up and let's eat and we'll talk later."

Thats it guys for now and hoped you liked it !!!!!!!!

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