`*` Sweet Trouble `*` {Chp 2- Pg 5} {10/30} ❤️

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Okay so I've got to know your name now...You write so beautifully and I don't even know you're name....lol...

I seriously don't know how you do it....The details are fab and are to the point...The dialogues flow with one another so easily...and the best part is that I loved the way you penned Angad and Kripa's characters!! You are doing an awesome jobb...I can't even explain...Im out of words...You are tooo good and I'm seriously loving the way you're tking this!!! Great job! I can imagine each and every scene happening!!

Aww how sweet, Kripa baking a pie for Angad--even if she just did it as a promise to repay him---it shows that she is an independen't women and doesn't rely on anyone...

Angad is too sweet also..>Aww, he only wanted dinner...Hmm, Kripa should make him some! LOL...

Awesomely penned! Continue soon and Thanks for the PM--It means a lot!

Love,

Anita

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#42

heyy i love your chapter 1 & 2 plzzzzzz contuied soon

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Hmm....Kripa is losing her screws one by one.....

Awsome update!

-Natasha

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Jasmine

@v^.^v -aznpride

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#44

Keep up the good work.. post soon!!! Oh and could you add me to your pm list? Thanks

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aditi

@AngelsHeaven

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#45

just read the 2 parts...

gr8 going....

but y r Kripa & Angad against relationships????

dont mind me saying but plz continue all of ur ficks silmultanously... it feels like u have jsut left us in the middle of the fick....

continue soon

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#46

hey nice fanfic! do update soon! and can you please pm me when you update? thanks!

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nycdesiqt

@nycdesiqt

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#47

hmmmm so i realized i didn't comment on this fan fic yet lol!
kripa is a very sweet and funny character.
love how she overreacted when angad asked for something in return for replacing her tire lol!!
i know kripa wants to do things her own way and not take any one's help...but her stupid tire was about to burst....it could have caused her to get into an accident...so why is she getting all mad that someone changed her tire for her...yess she is in a financial burden...but she could pay him off little by little neways i still love the scene between angad and her...lol she is reacting to a man...after god know how many years hehe!!

great parts...hope u continue this soon