AR FF wen u look me in the yes (part 6)

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hey guyss!!! m posting this new topic coz m jus not able to find my main thread
plzzzz lemme know if anyone has not been able to read the 5th part
tell me how this part is
enjoy!!!!!!!!!
love rabu
here goes the 6th part
Ridz room at 8 a.m

Ridz: di get up u r gonna be late for sanjeevani

Anji: hmmmm….2 mins…

Ridz: diiiiiiiiiiiii………………

Anji:ok ok, m up chill

Ridz: good, dats like my di m goin down u cum soon

Ridz talking to bhagvanji

Ridz: bhagvanji aaj mera first day hai plz meri madad karna ke main apna kaam acche se kar saku.

Shashank: riddhima beta!!!!!!!!!

Ridz: ji dad aaye

Ridz: accha bhagvanji main chalti hu. thank u. bye

Ridz: ji dad aapne bulaya (sitting next to shashank for breakfast)

Shashank: beta, abhi bhi waqt hai soch lo

Ridz: dad maine soch liya hai

Shashank: beta lekin sanjeevani hone ke bawajud tum govt. ke city hospital main kyu kaam karna chahti ho?

Ridz: dad, main sirf dekhna chahti hu ke main khud kuch ban sakti hu kya. aap fikar mat kiijiye dad everything will be fine. Trust me

Shashank: ok best of luck beta

Ridz: accha dad nani kab aa rahi hai?

Shashank: who Saturday shaam tak aa jayengi

Ridz: ok

Anji: gud morning dad, gm mom, wow mom breakfast main kheer?

Padma; maine toh riddhima ke liye banai hai taaki wo………

Anji: (laughing) ohhhhhh bribe????

Padma: anjali kuch bhi bolti rehti hai, riddhima ke pehla din hai isliye yeh keer maine banai hai. Main toh bas riddhima se taste karwa rahi thi abhi...

Ridz: (takes a spoonful) wow mom bahot acchi bani hai.

Ridz: bye dad, bye mom, bye di (kisses everyon while saying bye)

Its 9 a.m now

Ridz: hello, m Dr. riddhima gupta

Person: hello Dr. gupta I am Dr. raj mehra (shaking hand)

Dr. raj: cum let me show u around

Ridz: ya sure

Raj: …………………….. (after half an hour) n this is our children's ward

Ridz: (smiles sweetly) hmmmmm…

Raj: so.....?

Ridz: wat so? (she was getting quiet irritated by this question)

Ridz: ( why don't ppl have anything to say other than so..,? gosh I'll hit the next person who asks me this I swear)

Raj: I mean do u like this place?

Ridz: ya its….its….ok, (seeing his eyebrow raised) I mean gud

Raj: (satisfied with the comment) well den lets get to work, shall we?

Ridz had a long day n she worked with dedication on her very first day, raj was absolutely impressed by her way of working n the way patients connected to her, but the biggest problem was about to come…..

After 2 days. (Wednesday) Its 5p.m

Ridz's cell rings

Ridz: hello

Armaan: hey riddhima its armaan

Ridz: hi armaan. Wats up? (gosh he really took my no. i thought di mazak kar rahi hai)
armaan: ntn, I was jus thinking if we could meet

Ridz: (a bit apprehensive) umm, ya sure

Armaan: ok so I'll pick u at 7 from ur place. is it ok?

Ridz: ya dats fine, so c u at 7

Armaan: ya bye

Ridz: bye (m I doing the right thing by meeting him?lets c kya hota hai)

Armaan comes to pick ridz

Armaan: hi, come hop in

Ridz: (sitting) hi

Armaan: so…?

Ridz: (I had sworn to slap the next person who asks this but how can i? he is jus so sweet) so wat?

Armaan: I mean how was ur day?

Ridz: it was good. Wat about u?

Armaan: well u know I work in delhi so practically m bekaar as of now

Ridz: (laughing at his way of talking) ok, so wen r u going back?

Armaan: m going back on Saturday morning

Ridz: hey!! den wen will u be back?

Armaan: umm perhaps they will be giving me d transfer now so it may take 2 weeks I dunno if it takes longer, so where do u wanna go?

Ridz: any place is fine wid me…

Armaan: lets go to the beach

Ridz: cool

(Armaan n ridz spend the whole evening at the beach talking about their childhood n den their teenage years n friends in short they get to know a lot about each other.)

Armaan: …n u know mom was like totally bugged with me n rahul loitering around till 3a.m . u know once she did not let us in n we climbed in her room through the trees.

Ridz: (laughing all along) but y her room?

Armaan: unfortunately there r trees only outside her window

Ridz: jee!!! dats sad (sarcastically)

Armaan: I know, n then next time wenever she didn't let us in, she would close all the windows of the house n den we would happily go back partying n den fish out reasons to give her as where were we…

Ridz: heyyy dats not good mr.

Armaan: ya I know den I used to feel bad n guilty, so to make it up I n rahul would buy her something

Ridz: dats sho shweet armaan

Armaan: (looking at her kiddish face n smiling) den hamari galti chupane ke liye we would say dat we were window shopping n liked dat stuff for her so we contributed to buy it

Ridz: well, as long as it makes some1 happy I think lies r good

Armaan n ridz look at each other smiling

ridz: u know wen i had been to LA i used to go out partying but to be honest i never enjoyed them much. i mean how can ppl stay up soooo late...i used to get all sleepy n keep bugging muskaan to leave

armaan: (smiling)( den?)
ridz: den wat? she used to get all pissed off n come wid me...maine usse kaha ke next time se woh chali jae akeli but she would never leave me alone...
armaan: very protective huh!!!!!
ridz: acctually armaan, every1 is protective about me...dad, mom , di, nani n muskaan...they sumtimes treat me like a small kid (making a childish face)
armaan: hmmm...i can c dat (smiling wide)
ridz: heyyyyyy
armaan: peace...peace...but acctually u r very fragile
ridz: agar main fragile hoti toh tumhe akele milne nahi aati ok? (getting irritated)
armaan: toh kya puri fauj lati? (sarcastically)
Ridz: I think we should leave its getting late

Armaan: ya sure I'll leave u cum…

Outside her house

Ridz: thanx armaan, bye gud nite n take care

Armaan: hey don't be so formal wid me riddhima…take care, gud nite

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yeyyyyyyyyyyyy fst 2 cmmnt wow wonderful prt yaar thy spended their whole day wth ech othr by tlkng doi masti nd all superb yaar heheheh lvd it their cute cute tlks choooooooooo chweeeeeeeeet............tht thy gt mre close 2 ech othr gud vryyyyy gud...
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HEY FABULOUS part pls continue soon and ya know in fan finction they r in the bottom topic search out ur FF's name there u'll get ur First tread, I hope it help u.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heeyyyy very nice update plzzz continue soon
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hey!! just read ur ff and its really nice plz cont soon!! and pm me?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: rabiam

hey guyss!!! m posting this new topic coz m jus not able to find my main thread
plzzzz lemme know if anyone has not been able to read the 5th part
tell me how this part is
enjoy!!!!!!!!!
love rabu



here's ur main thread

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1069918


and i m totally in love wid ur ff
keep it up rabu


Edited by prernadeewani - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEY!!
TAT WS 2 GUD..
N WATS DE BIGG PROBLEM ON DE WAY??
I THINKS SUMTHINGS RELI FISHY ABT AT RAJ!!I HATE HIM.....
AWSUM PART
HOPE U CONT SOON
LUV U LTS
ASHU
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Posted: 16 years ago
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too cute .. but very short. Waiting for the next update :)

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