SS: THE SICILIAN...PART 23 pg 49 UPD 29/06 - Page 14

it was amazing!!!

hey ezther that was a superb part

Ezther,

he just kissed her forehead! but i guess banis experience will keep on haunting her! ab chor dia na cliffhanger par!

A part dedicated to JB was great But Jai not in one of his moods is not a good sign I just hope he doesn't mess up and she goes running on teh otehr side of the wall.

Waiting and please update quickly you have stopped at a nerve breaking point.

Bye

Haiiiii, what an update!!! You outdid yourself , Ezzie. So Jai is going to apologize and lend a comforting shoulder for her to cry her heart out? Can't wait......since you left us at this cliff-hanger, u have to update phataphat!!!

i can see some more dhamkedar development...Bani should have just answered the phone...now she has added more ghee into the fire...lovely update Ezther...and very naughty of you leaving us all high and dry till next update.

Wonder what 's Jai going to do. Both of they are attracted to each otehr. Bani's past will make it hard for her to accept.

Thats a cruel, cruel place to cut us off. I loved the part!!!!

Hi Ezther,

Finally caught up with this FF. It's one of the beautiful ffs I've read in quite some time! Wonderful storyline! 👏👏👏 Loved it to the bits! I'm speechless! Simply beautiful! I'm already hooked ...Poor bani was betrayed by AD….😡 He used her to win a bet…. JB got stuck up in the elevator n then he delivered her babies safely….the entire elevator scene was beautifully penned…..it was touching n at the same time funny…the part where he was checking for the dilation was funny….it was so sweet of him taking care of her n supporting her like a true hubby throughout her delivery…i feel bad for bani….poor thing had gone through a lot …..loved the characterization of JB…the way he was talking to the 2^nd baby n apologizing was awww! He already has a special bond with bani n her babies……he is so protective of them….…he just can't forget her…Roshni is his girlfriend….😕 I feel bad for her if she is a nice character …. I don't want her to come btw JB….Last part was beautiful! Loved JB moments….their awkwardness, their growing feelings for each other, her confusion, his restlessness, each n every emotion very well depicted……he came to her house at midnight….eagerly waiting for the next part….Thanks for the wonderful updates……….I just loved it……..

Ammu.