|FF| Love...Ek Ehsaas-Update PG.22

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys. Now is the time for new FF with fresh story. Many people have read my old FF. So for those people I want to thank them and this FF is for everyone. I hope you'll like this FF as much you liked my old FF. It is Vidya and Sagar story. I hope you'll like this FF.

- Vidya utho. Hume dher horahi hai.

A slowly Vidya wakes up and her hair was blowing everywhere. She looked at the clock and woke up immediately.

- Oops! Didi you're right. Aab aap jahiye. Hume tayar hona hai.

She pushes her sister out of her room. She then closes the door and goes to the closet. She took a beautiful simple selwar kamiz and walked strait to the bathroom. After 5 minutes she came back and walked to her chest of drawers where she has her make up and her mirror. She walks to her mirror and was fixing her hair. She looked back again to see the clock. She puts her hand on her head and runs downstairs. She drags her two big sisters and takes blessing from mum, and runs to the collage. The scene fades away and is shown Vidya in the class doing a test. She was done and gives her test to her teacher. The teacher was correcting her test in front of her. She got 100/100 marks. Vidya gets very happy and the teacher congrats her and her talent. He takes a cap and puts it on her. Everyone in the class was clapping and whistled out loud. She was very happy and was smiling to herself. She thanks her teacher and her classmates. The class was finish and everyone went home. Vidya stood outside and was waiting for her big sisters come out. Her sisters come out while talking with each other. They saw Vidya and ran to her and hugged her. After hugging they went home. They ran to their mum and hugged her and were spinning her round.

- Riddhima, Pari ,Vidya kya hua. Tum log ko aaj kya hua hai? Batao aapne khushi ki vaje

kya hai?


Pari - Mum meri aaj football match the aur meri team jeet gaye.

Vidya - Maa aaj meri test bohut acchi gaye. Mujhe 100/100 mili hai.

Ridhima - Maa main aisi hi khush hoon kyun ki meri dono choti beheno khush hai,

Their mum hugs them and takes them to the dining table. She had cooked their favourite food and dessert. Vidya' favourite kheer, Pari'favourite pakore and Riddhima' favourite jelebi. ''Mum you are the best''. They were eating the food and their dessert. Suddenly the phone rings and Riddhima goes and picks the phone.

Riddhima - Hello

Someone - Hello can I talk with Ms. Riddhima' mum.

Riddhima - Yes one minute. Maa koi aapse baat karna chati hai.

Riddhima hands the phone to her mum. Mum picks up and gets very happy. She hangs the phone. She looks at everyone happily. ''Mum whose call was it''

- Haan Mrs. Malhotra ki phone the. Uski pura family ya India arahi hai aur woh log humari yaha rehenge.

- What! Par mum...Pari gets cut by her mum.

- Aur koi sawal nahi. Woh sab log America se arahi hai. Uski teeno bete hai, Bohut hi handsome aur khubsoorat hai.

- Whatever! Everyone leaves from the dining table to their rooms.

Vidya was shown studying. She puts her glasses and was working. But very deep in her mind she thought of something about tomorrow. ''Who is Malhotra'' She has never seen any Malhotra in her life. (She has seen Malhotras but not heard about Malhotra in America). Then someone scares her from behind. It was none other than her sister Pari. Pari was just checking what she was doing. Riddhima comes and touch Pari. Pari gets scared so do Vidya of hearing Pari's scream. Both gets relief of the fact that it was Riddhima no ghost. (What a connection). But somehow Vidya was lost in her thoughts.

Vidya - Riddhima didi who is America Malhotra.

Riddhima - Actually Vidya I don't know.

Pari - Neither do I. But however mum looks very happy after talking with Mrs America. Oh sorry Mrs. Malhotra. But mum was saying something about the three sons. What was it?...

- Teeno bete bohut handsome hai aur khubsoorat bhi hai. What can this mean?


So guys I hope you'll like the first part. Next part will be introduction too but of the ''American Malhotras''
Love you all❤️

Love S.Rina

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I really like ur Fic...Continue soooooooooon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Rina ,😊
You may not know me , but i know you by your wonderful FFs ...
Please continue soon ...😊 Sounds good ...
Vidya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow.. amazingg start.. i already love it.. please cont soooonn..

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Posted: 16 years ago
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My sweet little princess ,
I already love this new FF..
Great start..Amazing !!! I have no words to tell you how good it is.
You are a great writer..and you have really talent for this all.
Mein tumhaari liye hamesha dua karongi ki tumhaari har sapna puri hogi aur tum hamesha safal hogi apni zindagi mein.
I can't wait for the next part...Please continue soon when you have some time.
Mein intezaar karongi !!
Hamesha khush rehna aur Keep smiling
Aap ki aur sirf aapki Pari Di
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great start,but can u please write everything in english.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Dimple - Hi Dimple cutie. Thanks a ton for your comment. I will continue soon as possible. Love you keep smiling...Be always happy and keep smiling because you look great with your dimples.
Vidya - Hello Vidya. As you know I'm Rina and you know me by my FFs...But nice to meet and you are always welcome to my FF. I wish you a very Happy Diwali. Be always happy.
Saniii -It has been long time I haven't seen you around. But thanks and I will update soon. See around and keep smiling.
Pari didi - Meri sweet Pari didi kaisi ho aap? Main aapse aab kya kaho. Aap toh meri nazro mein humesha upar the aur rahoge bhi. Main humesha aapko aisi hi pyar karte rahongi. Didi main jaldhi update karongi. Kasamh se. Yeh meri wada hai aapse. Humesha khush raho di aur humesha safal ho aapne zindigi mein. I want to wish you a very Happy Diwali. Aapna khyal rakhna aur humesha khush rehna. Aapko duniya ki haar khushi mile.
Sharad_girl - Hi. Your question is if I could write everything in English. This story is about an indian girl Vidya and will meet someone very soon with her two sisters. I will try my best to translate everyhing in English or I send you a PM with translation. Here is some people who love to read indian dialogues. But however I will try. You are always welcome. Keep smiling and be always happy.

Love S.Rina
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Rina! how are you! omg! i erad this, and love it! like i said before, you are an awesome writer! you have already gotten me addicted to this ff! continue the good work, i know you will! update soon, but when you can! thanks for starting a new ff! yeah, as someone said, please try to write in english, i stink at hindi!it takes forever for me to decipher! luv ya, Bye!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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loll...lovee your ff soo far..please continue soon hunn.. 😳 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveBMTD

Dimple - Hi Dimple cutie. Thanks a ton for your comment. I will continue soon as possible. Love you keep smiling...Be always happy and keep smiling because you look great with your dimples.

Love S.Rina

Awww...ur welcome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And ur so sweet that i'm blushing overtop of my dimples!

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