A Little Phone Chat------Home Production

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi everyone....!!! Hope you all are having the good time....!!!! Remember, who's this????šŸ˜› Well, it was very sad to be away from I-F....!!!! But these studies....!!!! I missed you all and came a bit here, but couldn't take part in ALL discussions...!!! And I know now many eyebrows will be raised on my activeness…!!!! So as you all know that each day I came across with idiotic ideas, if any of you don't then you'll see now....!!!! So I am jotting down one....!!!! Ok, now before Pinky rose in anger to close the topic as I am doing this bunk I should come to the point....!!!! šŸ˜†
It's a phone chat between RagVir....!!! Arrey.... we have seen many right? But this one is as Ragini and Ranveer not as Anamika and Anmol and read it you'll get to know what it is all about....!!!! šŸ˜‰

"Ring.....Ring....Ring"
Ragini ran towards the phone.... She picked it up with a smile on her face....
Ra: Hello.....
She was impatient to hear the voice of Ranveer.....
(Sp): Ji, Sangeeta say baat ho sakti hai....!!!!
Ra: (Hmm, that's Ranveer) Nahi, aap nay WRONG NUMBER milaya hai....
R: Acha per Sangeeta nay to mujhay yehi number dia tha....
Ra: Dekhain mein waisay hi itni pareshaan ho aur aap......
R: Mein aap ko jaanta to nahi likin lagta hai aap ka dil toota hua hai.....
Ra: (laughed) To janaab aap ko humari pehli chat yaad hai.....
R: Yeh bhi koi bholnay wali baat hai....
Ra: Aur yeh Sangeet kon hay???
R: Aap ki dost…..
Ra: Ussay aap ko kia kaam hai…..
R: Jealous….
Ra: Mein jealous nahi hoon….
R: Waisay Sangeeta ki taraf ab to mein aankh utha kar bhi nahi dekh saktay, meri saali meray saath hi hain kahein apni jiji ko batadiya to…………
Ra: (lay on her bed) Hmmm, yeh baat to hai, likin jab meinay pehli baar tum say baat ki thi to mujhay aisa laga k kis kharoos ko phone lag gaya jo itna chila raha hai.....
R: Acha, waisay mein bhi jaan gaya tha k kis bay-waqoof nay phone kia hai, jo baar baar Sangeeta kahay ja rahi thii....
They both laughed....
Ra: Ranveer, mujhay to ab bhi yaqeen nahi aa raha hai k hum.........
R: Hum ik honay ja rahay hain...... Waisay Ragini ajeeb to mujhay bhi lag raha hai, I mean mein apni feelings express nahi kar paraha hoon.... Kahan hum ik dosray say baat nahi kar rahay thay, kitni tensions thi humaray ghar mein aur ab.......
Ra: Mujhay pata nahi kiyun aisa lagta hai k mein koi sapna dekh rahi hoon aur jab meri aankh kholay gi to yeh sab meray pass nahi hoga....
R: Ragini....!!!! Tum bolo gi bhi nahi aur mein tumhara pass a jaon ga....!!!! Mein tum say door nahi reh sakta....
Ragini was ecstatic.... No one has made any promise to her before....
R: Ragini, mein nay tumhain bohat hurt kia hai....Likin mein promise karta hoon, tumhari aankh mein ik aansoon bhi nahi aanay doonga....
Ragini has tears in her eyes....
Ra: Ranveer, mujhay bus tumhara saath chahiye..... Kabhie na tootnay wala saath....
R: I promise.... Mein days count nahi kar par raha hoon….
Ragini smiled…..
R: Hum bohat jald ik say do, do say teen, teen say chaar then five, six, seven…..
Ra: (with wide open eyes) RANVEER……….
R: Waisay ho kia raha tha.....
Ra: Hmm, pata hai aaj meray haathon mein mehndi lagay gi....
R: Ohh.... Uss per "R" kitna acha lagay ga na....
Ra: (being naughty) R kiyun....
R: Kia matlab kiyun.... Hey, agar kisi aur say... Tu mein devdas nahi banoon ga balkay us ko marr kar Khalnayak ban jao ga....
Ra: Oh...!!! Sahi hai mein uss criminal say shaadi nahi karoongi.......
R: Ohoo, shaadi nahi karein gii..... Zabardasti tumhari maang bhar kar apnay saath lay aaonga....
Ra: Acha.... Ok Ranveer mein rakhti hoon….
R: Nahi…..
Ra: Acha mein tumhay khud phone karloongi….
R: Oh….!!!! Pata nahi ye waqt kab aye ga……. Mujhay to bus KOI AUR hii phone karti thii….
Ra: KON????
R: Meri………….. ANAMIKA…..
Ra: Acha baba kaha na karoon gi phone….. Bye….
R: (unwillingly) Bye…..
Ragini cut the phone and when she turned she saw Ranveer standing there…. She was dumb-founded…. She looked at the phone then at Ranveer…. Ranveer came towards her…. Closer and closer….. They looked into each other's eyes….. Ranveer grabbed her…. Looked into her eyes…..
"Mainay kaha tha na k mein tum say door nahi reh sakta…"
Ragini was shocked, happy and her eyes were shimmering with unshed tears…. Something was there inside her which was full in joy…. She hugged him tightly……
"RAGINI….." Kaushalya called out for Ragini….
Oops…. That was her imagination…. And she was hugging the phone instead….. But she could feel his presence....She playfully hit her head and went downstairs with the widest smile ever…. She was the most happiest person indeed….


Ok, so that's all, do tell me how it was....!!!! Good or bad... Average.... Waiting eagerly for your replies..... And silent readers too......KTB....Kuch To Bolo....!!!! And tell how this Home Production going....!!!! 😃😃😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
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that was so sweeetttt!
omgsh!
why couldn't they have phone conversations like this?
i loved the "jealous" bit! =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Welcome backšŸ¤—.
I kinda wanted the last part to be true instead of a dream.šŸ˜›
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cool_rashi

Haha..lol...

good job....! :D



Thanks so much for the appreciation....!!!! 😃😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: prala

beauuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutiful, so chweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet.



Aww.....!!!! Thanks for reading and liking...!!! 😊😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: bibbo

that was so sweeetttt!

omgsh!
why couldn't they have phone conversations like this?
i loved the "jealous" bit! =)



Thanks....!!!! Oh yeah! they should have phone convo like this....!!!! šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: just_in

Welcome backšŸ¤—.

Thanks a lot....!!!!

I kinda wanted the last part to be true instead of a dream.šŸ˜›

Hehe...!!! But actually they were talking on the phone so how come Ranveer will come too soon....!!!! And secondly I am bad at such scenes....!!!!šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† So I took it as a dream...!!!!



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Posted: 16 years ago
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How adorably cute yaar had fun reading it!!

Luv,

Shagun
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Posted: 16 years ago
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šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘Well done!
That was seriously cute, the hugging the phone bit was adorable.
I thought the Kalnayak bit was hilarious, hard to imagine Ranvir a murder but pyar mein to lokh kuch bhi kar sakte hainšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago
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u r excellent in writing and imagination.
keep it up

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