patch up part 2 pg 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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PROLOGUE

Rough phase do come in relationships.world has become so wicked that ppl dnt have time to think wat's wrng nd wats rite.they want to fulfill their dreams by hook or by crook.armaan nd anjali r 2 such ppl.the stry revolves arnd then nd their dreams,luv nd frnds

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 1

What a day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dear diary,

How 2 descriabe how my day was.in 3 wrds 'wat a day???????????????'.I was dressed in long red gown.my hair were open nd curled up.I entered a dark room.spotlight was on me.from other side he was coming he started walking towards me he was wearing a red shirt nd black blazer.he was looking dashin as ever.he came vry close to my ears nd whispered

'I love u ridhima'

As soon as he said this light were opened.flowers started falling on us.the whole room was decorated with pink nd white flowers nd candles.he bent on his knees nd took my hands in his nd asked

'will u marry me ridhima'

A tear fell frm my eye

'yes'

He slipped a ring in my finger .we hugged each other.

'I luv u ridz'

'I luv u arman'

These were the words we both were dying to hear frm each other.

Bt triiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing my alarm started ringing.I woke up.tears started flowing.how perfect was our life.y did amy messed it up.I got ready 2 the office.

My car broke dwn mid way.taxi drivers were on strike.I was f**ked up.luckily I got an autorikshaw.I reached office jst on time.I saw amy banging things on his table.I asked anjali abt it.she told me that boss came back frm London 2day nd was vry angry on arman.our boss had gone to London 4 his personal affairs he was supposed to cum 2 days later he had given all the charge to arman.our boss had asked atul to complete a project by today bt atul wanted to spend sum time with her sis who returned frm usa yesterday so he gave atul 2 days holiday without thinking abt the project.he told atul to complete the project by 2morro.since boss will nt b here 4 2 more days it wont matter

.this is the proble with amy.he never thinks twice b4 doing anything.bcoz of his this attitude we broke off.

When will he understand

Edited by amritafan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice part
different one
update sooooooooooooooooon
luv soumya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey!
Nice part!
Do continue soon...and do PM me wen u upd8!
-Marisha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: saridena

nice part

different one
update sooooooooooooooooon
luv soumya

thx a lot 4 ur appreciation
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: perfectpiscean

hey!

Nice part!
Do continue soon...and do PM me wen u upd8!
-Marisha

thx a lot will surely try to pm u
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thx a lot honey
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanasha1993

awesome FF

do cont soon;D

thx will definitely continue next week
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2

Dear diary

The whole day I could see anjali worried about something. She was not well. She vomited once or twice. I asked her to take leave but she refused.

After the office anjali and me were standing in the parking lot. I usually drop her home but today my car had broken down so we were waiting for an auto but were unable to find one. Suddenly anjali's ph rang. Seeing the name of the person she got tensed. I could sense that something was wrong but didn't ask abt it.anjali went to a corner and talked. She was worried all the while.

As soon as she came back

Armaan came.armaan asked us that if he could drop us. After the call anjali was little disturbed but she had very successfully plastered a smile on her face in front of Amy. She asked Amy to drop me bcoz she was supposed to go somewhere else and her cousin was going to pick her up. I didn't like this idea at all. I was not happy with the idea of going alone with armaan.I was going to say no to Amy but suddenly a car came. Seeing the car anjali's face became pale. She bid us goodbye and sat in the car. I could see that inside the car there was a handsome man.bt he was giving sly looks to anjali.when anjali sat in the car he kept his hand on her waist. Cousins don't put their hands on their sister's waist or do they?

I brushed the thought away and sat in the car.

Amy tuned the radio on. It played the song jab se tere naina.

Both of us looked at each other. My eyes became little moist. I still remember that day. It was almost a month since I joined the office.every1 was my frnd by nw.one day after the office it was raining heavily as today nd as usual my car had broken down nd I was unable to find an auto.atul and anjali were on leave. When amy saw me standing alone he popped up the idea of dropping me. I agreed bcoz I knew that I wont b able to find an auto. On the way I saw a beach an I exclaimed ' wow a beach' like a kid.amy smiled at me.I felt stupid. So I told him that since I m frm Ahmadabad I have not seen a beach in my life.ahmedabd is not like Mumbai where u can find beaches. As soon as I told him he turned his car towards the beach.

When we stopped at the beach he opened the door for me and told me that beach is the most beautiful place. Here strangers become frnds nd frnds become lovers'.u must see it.I was very happy.we roamed on beach,played in the water.initially I was lil uncomfortable with him bcoz he is one of the most handsum guy on earth and gals arnd stared at him.but armaan made me feel very comfortable.

While v were roaming here and there v spotted a grp of ppl.when v came closer we saw there was sum competiton going on.we joined in.the competition was that every1 have to give in their names.then 1 by 1 the host will call out the name .gals will stand one side nd boys on other side.a rose will b given to a guy.when the guy's name is called out he has to give the rose to the gals he thinks is most beautiful nd do sumthing 4 her.at the end the judges will decide who the best couple is.

Armaan nd me joined the game jst for fun.it was not like I was in luv with him.I was sure I wont get any rose.but to my surprise I was the one who got the most.I never realized I was so beautiful.sum ppl danced for me sum sang.then amy's name was called out.he went to one of the thele walla made a dahi chat himself,came to me nd sang jab se tere naina.at the end of the song he gave me the rose and the chat.the host asked y dahi chat?amy told bcoz she likes dahi chat like nything.she can eat 1000 plates at a go.rite ridhima?I nodded nd smiled.I was touched by his gesture.I thought he was not listening to wat I was saying.while roaming on the beach I was telling him how I always dreamt of going to beach nd having my fav. Dish dahi chat.I can eat 1000 plates at a go.

Obviously v were the winners.we were given a couple dinner pass.

Every1 cheered.for the 1st time in my life I had a strange feeling.I wanted to hold amy's hand .I wanted to be in his arms.I wanted him to look only at me.

I hope this part is long enuff.I hope u guys like it.

In next part-dinner nd anjali-atul tiff

Edited by amritafan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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cool part
loved the whole beach flashback esp dahi chat
how cute of armaan to do that
and who was that guy with anji...hoepfully she isnt in any sorta trouble
anyways thanks for the PM dear
and do cont soon
love
tanu

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