14th October Written Update [Detailed]

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14th October Written Update [Detailed]




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A request for all you guys .....please comment....even if you dont wanna say anything about the episodes , at least tell me if you liked/disliked anything about the update...you know , if you have any problems with my comments , or with the fonts , or if you want anything else etc etc...comments mean a lot to me!!!!



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Red - Direct Speech - quotes

Fuchsia italics - my comments
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*Recap*



Aastha (A) and Veeru (V) tell Sulochana (Sulo) that Shubh (S) is alive.

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*Today*

V tells Sulo " It will be very difficult to catch the real culprit , so we played this game.For the world at large and for the culprit , Shubh has died."

A : "We three are the only ones who know the truth"

V indicates to Sulo to look behind her , and Sulo turns around to see S entering.
She breaks down on seeing him , and S also has tears in his eyes (haila ! rote huye aur accha lagta hai!)
They look at each other while the song Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gham from K3G plays (hai!!!mere Shah Rukh ke gaane pe mera Shubh !!!!)

S walks to Sulo and she enfolds him in her arms .

When they break apart , Sulo cries and says "Thank God you're alive"

Shubh : " Mom , Veeru saved me"

Sulo ( sad) : And we had mistaken his character ...

S then says that we didnt mistake his character , everyone was deliberately led to doing that ...*determinedly*our family has shed enough tears , now its the turn of that person responsible for our sadness to shed tears

A : Yes , how much grief he has given to Shilpa , much more grief must be borne by him

S tells Sulo that no matter what , she musnt reveal that he's alive to anyone , not even Vanraj.

A : Yes , now we must find out who the real culprit is.

*The living room :-*

Vanraj comes back carrying the pot of ashes.He places it in front of Shubh's garlanded photo and does a namaskar.

Vanraj then comes and sits in front of A and tells her " I know bete how difficult it is for you to believe that Shubh is no longer with us....but you have to Aastha..."

A thinks "In order to get to that person , I have to lie to you papa , forgive me"

She then says "How can I Papa? How can I believe that my Shubh is no longer with me?"

*She stands up*

"I feel him near me at every instant "

*Shubh is watching all this hiding behind a curtain and Veeru is hiding behind a pillar on the other side of the room*

"No...I dont believe that Shubh is no longer with us"

Vanraj tells A : "If u want it so...then be it...if you want to live with his memories , then you are free to do so..."

All the family members come and join hands , doing a namaskar in front of Shubh's photo.Aastha is standing and watching the proceedings.She watches Saksham come up , but there are no marks on his hand .

[Aastha had seen a mark of a wound on the right hand of that masked man when she was accusing Veeru]

Pratham comes up , but his kurta sleeve is covering the wrist area so Aastha is unable to see anything.

Mahen comes but he cups his hands in such a way that his fingers are covering the wrist area of right hand.


*A , S and Veeru in conference*

A is frustated : Now what are we going to do ? We didnt see the mark on anyone's hands...

V : Thats because we were standing too far away....we must try again

A: I have an idea...Shubh , in some time , there will be a rasam ...all the family members will be sitting on the floor...we will catch the culprit there.

*Rasam*

A stops Madhav kaka from serving water for washing hands.

A: "Madhav kaka , even if I dont believe that Shubh is no longer with us ...I cannot stop those who believe that he is no longer with us...I'll serve water"

As she serves water , when she comes to Saksham , he holds out his hands without any inhibition .There is no mark on Saksham's hands . ( Saksham - nix . Score : 1 down , 2 to go )

When Aastha serves water to Pratham , he holds out his hands and a bandage is covering his right hand.A stares at it shocked and P tells her that its a wound.She is even more suspicious .( Pratham - maybe! Score : 1 down , 1 possibly guilty , 1 to go )

A comes to Mahen .He again holds out his hands in that cupped manner.A is suspicious of P so while Mahen is washing his hands , she turns around and stares at P.Just at that instant , Mahen's uncovers his hand and the mark is seen (Gotcha k**te! - excuse the language)

Mahen finishes washing but A is still staring at P.He tells A "Ho gaya bhabhi".

A walks away to refill the pitcher , all the while staring at P.She bumps into someone and staggers.Mahen rushes up and catches her.

Mahen : " Bhabhi , samhaaliye apne aap ko"

A is shocked to see the mark on his hand , Mahen is holding her by that hand.

She stares shocked at him and the mark.
A shakes his hand off and runs away.

Everyone is surprised at her behaviour and Sulo gets an inkling.

*ASV conference*

A is close to losing control of herself .

A: Shubh , he is the real culprit! Main use nahin chodoongi!

S: Aastha , control urself .What proof do we have ?

V : Yes Aastha , you must keep a hold on yourself...warna bana-banaya khel bigad jaayega

A : Whats left to be destroyed ? Shilpa's life has been destroyed , Shubh is alive but the world thinks he's not and you are living like a culprit despite being innocent...no , I cannot see this anymore , I WILL make him confess

S: And how will we do that ? We dont have proof Aastha !

A : We HAVE proof Shubh! The proof is that mark I saw!

V : Aastha who is going to believe you ? Just a few days before you accused me and "proved" me guilty...now you're going to say Mahen is guilty ...people will think you have gone mad

S: Exactly , and Aastha without proof , Mahen will very easily escape ...

A : Then how will we prove him guilty?

V (determinedly) : We will prove him so....I have a plan

Veeru tells SA his plan.

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*Precap*



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Posted: 16 years ago
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aab khel mein ayaga maza...................

i have to se this episode.......

mahen is such a ...........ughhhhhhhhhhh

thx for the wonderful, detailed update!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shubh_astha4eva

aab khel mein ayaga maza...................

i have to se this episode.......

mahen is such a ...........ughhhhhhhhhhh

thx for the wonderful, detailed update!




You're most welcome Esha.....well , at the risk of being arrogant , i say this was my best update ever.....👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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no prob di.ur updates actually help me understand whats happening........lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for the great update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks 4 a superb update! really man u made it more lively than it is! ha ha a ha
gud luck!👏
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thanks for the lovely update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for a wonderful update! I love how you write out their direct dialogues and your comment about mahen on the side made me laugh a lot. everything looks great but it just got a bit confusing with all the shortcuts for the names. other than that, wonderful update. thank you so much! :)
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Fantastic update👏.. i am really looking forward to ur next one...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: punjabihypnotic

thanks for a wonderful update! I love how you write out their direct dialogues and your comment about mahen on the side made me laugh a lot. everything looks great but it just got a bit confusing with all the shortcuts for the names. other than that, wonderful update. thank you so much! :)



o🤓 okay.....next time i'll make it easier!😉

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